I'm Trapped by Monsters

After reading Chapter 32, I couldn't stand it anymore. Comment: The pacing is very slow, and it keeps emphasizing the protagonist's emotions, hoping not to give up, etc. It's very awkward to watch. Emotions don't work here, and they can't be written hard. The second point is, when I first came to the full moon, I knew that my ability was to load files and resurrect. Didn't I have any idea of ​​​​testing ghosts before I was six years old? Too poisonous. The point is to pass the time, not to see you writing a book to impress yourself

The writing is extremely poor, the plot is very different, and the protagonist is a time traveler but looks like a precocious 6-year-old child. The description of the character's psychology has simply reached a new level. It's normal to run for your life and the protagonist is afraid and wants to think about feelings. The psychological changes of the protagonist are too rigid. One second he was afraid of dying, but the next second he dares to act recklessly. Also, please give your brains back to the supporting characters, and don't eat their brains just to highlight the protagonist. It is obvious that the author could only copy the settings of the alien beasts because of his lack of ability, and follow the old path of upgrading and killing monsters. It is recommended that you stop watching "Reverse Killing Xu Can" after watching it. Finally, the author, how can you score 8.3 At your level? You will know whether you have done it or not.

Come on, author, I can see that the author is a bit experimental here, but I believe that if you are familiar with it, your writing skills will be much better. I believe you can go further. There are very few interesting settings.

I have been reading books for many years, and I have also read a lot of suspense and wit-fighting genres. To be honest, this book is really well written. I don't understand what people who criticize the author's emotional writing style think. Whether the author uses the protagonist's mother or friends to promote the protagonist's character image and writing style, it is okay. The character creation is also quite vivid. Also, what can I say about improving my writing skills in Ten Days? Brother, can you think of a novel that is popular on the Internet? Do you think the author may not have read it? Writing a novel is not about words. Inspiration and emotion when writing are indispensable. The author also said that this is the first time he has written such a horror and suspense novel. It is already very good to be able to write it like this. Both the text and the description of the development of the plot are also very good. He also said that the pace of the protagonist is too slow and the story drags on too long. If you read a little more, you can feel that the author is very attentive in continuing to write this world view. Don't you think that a good world view does not need words to unfold? Moreover, this novel is originally a horror and wit-fighting type. Is this a wit-fighting novel because the protagonist is too invincible? The progress of the protagonist is really not too slow. You can see the author's ambition. This book has a great world view and a very compact plot development. Give the author some time and encouragement rather than ridicule his poor writing skills.

There is no logic, it all relies on the author's imagination, and there are too many emotional scenes. I suggest the author take a look at how to write Hell Cinema and Mysterious Resurrection.

It ended so suddenly? Where is Taoyuan Village? What world do those two creators who went to kindergarten come from? How did the person get caught? What race is Sique, what is her relationship with humans, what is the situation of her people, will they not avenge themselves? What is Yu Yu's identity? Who is my mother's identity when she enters this world? Why was Gu Xingxin transformed, what was the purpose of the transformation, and how did Taoyuan drive her? Isn't Taoyuan awake? What happened to the future that I accidentally visited? What is Jiang Rong's purpose? Is it really good to end it after so many pitfalls? . .

This chicken coop metaphor is poorly written. It would be better if it was written in a more popular way when deciphering it.

The pacing is too slow. I see that it is all suppressed and not uplifting at all. The whole story is hopeless and depressing. I am simply looking for trouble for myself.

Why does it feel so similar to the background of Lost City?

Can the protagonist's mother survive?