Self-struggle Starting from Douluo

What does the author think? Why do female characters get benefits, while only a few male characters do? [Emot=default,27/]Are you going to be a harem stud?

I'm convinced. Whenever you, the protagonist, have a problem, just be energetic. The universal formula. The author wanted to write a scholar, a master-type protagonist with great knowledge. As a result, my writing skills were not good, but I became more energetic when I was talking about theory. What about behind? You should explain later, but it's gone. If you can't write it, you don't have to write it. But he really likes to be a teacher and teach others. As a result, after talking for a long time, there was nothing but energy. The first sentence of the opening sentence is full of energy, and every time it is awkward or not. You also have the feeling of pretending (telling others things, solving problems, teaching others to do things.) Not pretending (having nothing to say.) And pretending (directly affecting your spirit).

The early stage was good, but as a result, the more I wrote, the better I became as a teacher. Regardless of whether others asked or not, the protagonist turned into a speaker and taught like crazy... To be honest, it was quite sensory-affecting. For fantasy or immortality novels, the main plot should be upgrades or emotional development. As a result, the main thread of this book became being a teacher and the understanding and interpretation of cultivation. This does not mean that these things cannot be written, but they should be prioritized. Readers will not feel a sense of gain when reading this kind of thing, and naturally they will not feel happy. Also, the emotional line was too abrupt, which was acceptable to Ye Lingling, but when it came to Bibi Dong, they just had sex... I was like a good guy! Nowadays, people writing about Douluo fandom, the people from the Protagonist Group, Wuhun Palace, and Gu Yuena are all being criticized... It's really bad to get entangled with these people.

First of all, as a child from a remote area who has just awakened and has only half a level of innate soul power, the protagonist possesses the Blue Silver Grass martial soul. Isn't it too abnormal to possess such knowledge and abnormal mental power? I just read the third chapter, and I really can't stand it anymore. I can only say it's average. When I looked at other people's comments and said that it was combined with the thoughts of ancient Chinese classics, I only saw the combination with the internal power of martial arts novels. It can be said that the beginning is not attractive. It just explains a system collapse. An orphan protagonist with the appearance of a book can write and exercise his mental power. He thinks he is his golden finger, and deconstructs the so-called soul power based on the meridians and veins of past life memories. But this also reveals a lot of information, right? Especially I don't understand why he thinks that others can't find it, especially when he has also watched "Douluo Dalu", the rating is abnormal. I can only say that benevolent people have different opinions and wise people have different opinions.

I don't understand. The protagonist at the beginning is half level Blue Silver Grass. There are only so many awakenings. As long as someone is awakened, Wuhun Palace should be able to find the information. I just can't find the protagonist, so I just have the halo of the protagonist. And that god-sent, the princess of Qibao Glazed Sect. I didn't say anything and wasn't robbed. But why won't that little kitten be robbed? What strength does he have?

After reading from beginning to end, I feel like this book should be read or not. Let's not talk about the messy essence, body, form, etc. In the first world, the fire of chaos can be used for various magical purposes, but in the second world, it is gone? If you go to Yi Dan Yi World, then you just play with the rules. You've already made blue, but you still don't know how to use space? How can you make something blue without knowing the rules of space? The whole book is written in a self-contradictory way. It does not deal with time, space, etc., And what state of mind there is. One moment it is a Taoist theory, another a Confucian theory, and from time to time it is Buddhism. The ideas of each school are different, and your moods are all unified. What you write is not as good as the kind of harem. At least there is a concept in it, which is the harem. What are you doing? Piecing things together?

To be honest, I feel that the author has a strong foundation in literature, especially Taoist-related culture.

I have a book that is somewhat similar to what you have written so far. But I'm not sure, so can you send me the remaining few hundred pictures so I can compare them?

Very good. I just like this. It's so beautiful. Alas, one star cannot be considered a bad review. Otherwise, I would have given you one star.

It took him 60 hours to read this book, but he gave it one star. The author will delete his comment later, I will leave it in a file.