Douluo: Traveling Through the Peerless World, Going Against the Chaos of Time and Space

The author gives you a suggestion, if you want to target Huo Yuhao, just target him, don't write in such a direct and direct way. It is obvious that the villain in the early stage of the book is Huo, and there are many ways to create conflicts. You want to portray the protagonist as a victim, just like the author of "Swordsman in the Snow". He really wants to portray a perfect person, but his writing skills are unable to control it, and the writing is specious. Instead, he portrays the protagonist as a bastard who is both serious and independent. You, the author, write what you want, you don't have to add your own opinions to it, right and wrong are up to people's minds.

The protagonist really has character flaws, and he is both responsible and independent. Can you just be decisive in whatever you want to do? There are so many excuses every time, such as torturing Tang San to abuse Tang San, and to abuse Huo Yuhao to abuse Huo Yuhao. Huo Yuhao is obviously already in Tang San's camp, and he is still complaining. Then the Noumenon Sect was intervened by the protagonist ten thousand years ago. Obviously the Noumenon Sect is his own camp, and Shrek is also a supporter of Tang San. Is the protagonist's stance firm? I don't know what you want to do. You have a huge problem with your character and personality. You are obviously enmity with Tang San, and you are obviously trying to blackmail Tang San. So, why don't you do it to Shrek, Huo Yuhao and other people from Tang San's camp? Instead, you are going to stab your own people in the back? ? ? ? And why did you give Ma Xiaotao Fairy Grass? You can obviously use the Eight Spider Spears to absorb the evil fire. What does it mean to support the enemy?

It sucks. The subject matter is very good, but the writing is terrible. I kept licking Jiang Nannan and then killed Xu Sanshi in public. I was speechless.

He is really both upright and upright. He can't tell which camp he is in. He is still jumping up and down after offending the little brat. He offended him at the beginning. Do you think he is a good person? I can't tell the difference. When it came to dealing with Jiang Nannan, I was so fucking speechless. He still screamed when he had no strength. He dared to kill people in public. He had no brains at all. If it hadn't been for the protagonist of this book, he would have been doomed.

It is really a very rare and extremely poisonous and brainless white novel. Others hide poison in their books, but this one is a book made of poison...

From the first chapter to the present, the protagonist has not been doing well and has been suffering from various problems.

The Wuhun is obviously a thief and does not plan well across timelines. It has to make enemies all the way and be tortured all the way. The best thing about this Wuhun is the big mastermind behind the scenes. You don't deal with the resources and talents of the three lines at all, and focus on Tang San's line. Now the three lines are all enemies, and the emotional scenes are also bullshit.

I took a look at this novel. The protagonist is either suffering from depression, or on the way to becoming depressed. There is also the incident of Jiang Nannan being fucked by Xu Sanshi. Forget it, I won't say more. It's a rubbish novel.

I exchanged 3/4 of the living tissue for three pieces of shit, and my brain must have been eaten by a dog.

When people ask you why you didn't awaken your martial soul at the age of 6, and you still pretend to be dumb and pretend to be a big-tailed wolf, just say you have no money. In the original Douluo II, it cost a lot of money to awaken the martial spirit. The protagonist was quite arrogant, and he even asked me about it individually. You don't have what you want, why are you pretending? What kind of thing is Tang San? A benevolent person sees benevolence and a wise man sees wisdom. However, he was immediately slapped in the face and was tricked by Tang San. I remember that the setting in the first part was to absorb the soul ring after absorbing the externally attached soul bone. The soul ring was not given to Tang San, so Tang San immediately took advantage of the protagonist. To torture Tang San is to torture other disgusting people who are both arrogant and independent. The Shrek Academy in the second part is the product of mutual compromise between nobles. The protagonist has no strength. Is it really good to expose the external soul bone just after the first ring? The newly absorbed external soul bone will not be completely absorbed. Dai Huabin dares to kill people in Shrek City. Can the protagonist guarantee that he will not be assassinated? It's easy to explain if the timeline spans a parallel universe. If you take the timeline of this universe, when you kill Tang San in Douluo One, will there still be a Douluo Two timeline? Still want to learn that Huangtian Emperor does not exist in the past, present, or future? You don't even look at what level Douluo is, it's obviously the fantasy sewer level.