Douluo: God Comes

I've written about Douluo, but I also sew people from other worlds. I want to eat a lot of food, and I'm not afraid of breaking my teeth. If you want to sew plug-ins, martial arts, and people from other worlds who have traveled across time to be the protagonist, that's fine. People who are native to Douluo Continent and have Honkai Impact won't be cast. Everything else is fine except for a few people from Cocolia. I can find a reason at least, I can't see it😐

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It's an orphanage. It's all people from Honkai. It doesn't look like it was created by the protagonist but by aborigines. It's hard to hold back.

I just asked Mystery whether the curse of the Sea of ​​Chaos can be solved by being granted a Douluo title. These 6, 6, mysterious origin products can actually be solved by mortals

Chapter 63, don't write it in an ambiguous or awkward way. Chapter 66, no matter how many miles he fights, Tang San is not a positive character. Tang San is a killer trained by the Tang Sect. Are there any positive figures in the killer organization? Tang San is a reborn person. He has his own mature thinking mode. He doesn't become a positive person by changing his mother's womb. I don't like to make irresponsible remarks on the original characters. We should go our own separate ways with the original characters. The soul masters in Dou Yi and Dou Er rely on killing to advance, and they are all different kinds of evil soul masters.

It's a bit difficult to sew the stuff inside if it collapses.

Currently giving it four stars, it can pass the review. The writer did not elaborate on the comparison between the two systems. The potion sequence system is the application of rules. The Douluo soul master system is about the use of soul rings and soul skills. Make a judgment. Sequence 4 of the Visionary Path, fading away from the mortal body, the starting point of mythical creatures. But he has not yet received the baptism of divine power. The demigods of the Douluo system must also be level 99 extreme Douluo, inherit the divine status or create their own divine status, and receive the baptism of divine power. Therefore, I have no doubt that Sequence Four can kill an ordinary titled Douluo. I don't know if the writer has the same judgment as me.

The Messenger of Death is just a piece of shit. It looks disgusting when written, and it doesn't have any effect on the plot. This is talent.

Why don't you write the protagonist to death? There can be an evil soul master in the awakening ceremony😐

To be honest, the main character was originally set in a second time travel, and Goldfinger was the Sea of ​​Chaos + God sequence, which was enough. If you write it down well, it will be a mature story! Unfortunately, the author had an idea and whim, and stitched together other worlds, but also only stitched the names of people and organizations, and the plot was forcibly merged, which gave me a headache + embarrassment! (Honkai Impact 3, Genshin Impact, Re: Zero Starting Life in Another World, Fairy Tail, a certain scientific railgun, etc.). . I don't even know what the point of this integration is? ! Could it be that I just had an idea, a whim, and thought it was fun, so I wrote it down? ? ? Anyway, I was watching the drama. From the beginning, Lord of Mysteries + Douluo Continent was already very good! However, from the first person's name (Kokolia) appeared, I felt something was wrong! Later, the twin sisters even merged the speaking styles of Banya and Paramecium, and when they awakened their martial souls, they merged into the image of Ramrem! From then on, the author never returned and wandered into the sea! As for the plot, I can't say whether it's well written or not. However, coupled with the occasional name (such as: Ayaka Kamisato) that brings about the reading experience, it's really not good! (Personal feeling). . . I have only written more than 170 chapters now, and I have no motivation to continue! Every few chapters or so, a character from another world appears, which is too weird. It gave me a headache. Slipping away.