Starting from Refining Weapons and Cultivating Immortals in Dou Po

When reading this book, first of all, don't pay attention to the original work. Basically, this fan is different from other fans and the original work. It can also be said that I wrote a novel using Dou Po as a template, but it is all written around Xiao Yan. The only difference between this book and the original work is that it has a completely new system. Everything is different from the original work, but it still revolves around Xiao Yan. It only took three years to write more than 800,000 words. The appointment, this is because the protagonist is a little younger than Xiao Yan. The reason why there are so many words is to make up the number of words. Various psychological speculations and random thoughts, and random mechas are very small, but it is very boring to read. Maybe people who like to read about science and technology will like this book more, but it is hung in fantasy, but normal people cannot read it. Some people think this is because the heroine is named Xiao Yan. Medical Immortal, but she is not mentioned here at all. The most mentioned woman is Yun Yun, in fact, it is Naran Yanran. The reason why she is like this is because she has always revolved around Xiao Yan and written around Xiao Yan, which makes it a hundred thousand miles away from the original work. The status of a weapon refiner is higher than that of an apothecary. Every weapon trainer guild has a Douhuang, and any weapon trainer can leapfrog the level like drinking water. An imperial clan's divine blood In the early stage of the bloodline, it is actually at the same level as Nalan Yanran and Xiao Yan. It is said that the upper limit is high, and it is easy to break through all the Dou Zongs. However, the protagonists doubt that they may not be able to break through the Dou Zong. To awaken the light of a divine bloodline, you must have at least a great master. As a result, now that you are eighteen or nineteen, you are still at this level. Maybe when Lingquan comes out, a divine bloodline will not be able to match a high-level seventh-grade bloodline. Another most poisonous point is to highlight how much the powerful magic core of the weapon trainer is cherished. You don't know that even the Gamma Empire can't get two intact sixth-level magic cores. They are all fossils or left behind by the ancestors of other half-orcs. Seventh-level magic cores The core is even more legendary. Let me tell you this. In this book, the high-level magic core cherishes even the elixirs that are one level higher than him. Humans and the demons have an agreement that they cannot kill monsters casually. Humans are still afraid of monsters. I really have nothing to say here. I won't say it. The ancient imperial clan can destroy the Beast Realm with just one Dan Pagoda. The only powerful monster in the world is the Taixu Ancient Dragon, but this is not mentioned in the original work. It depends on others to guess how powerful it is. But in fact, the Taixu Ancient Dragon is not that powerful. According to Zhu Kun, he did not expect that the ancient imperial clan can also appear. For powerful men like Soul Emperor and Gu Yuan, the current Ancient Clan is even hundreds of times stronger than before. It is almost the same as the Taixu Ancient Dragon at its peak. It can be seen that the Taixu Ancient Dragon is not that awesome. It is almost the same as the Thunder Flame Clan, but there is a heaven-defying Zhu Kun. There is an agreement between the Warcraft and the human race in this book. Humans cannot be killed as long as the Warcraft makes no mistakes. Of course, this includes level 6 and above. I don't know how to evaluate this setting. The heroine has not been mentioned a few words in 800,000 words, just like a passerby. If you really don't want to write about it, then don't write her as the heroine, and more people will not read your book. It's annoying.

Does the heroine have a Medusa? Queen Medusa is so awesome, it would be a pity not to have her as the heroine

I don't even understand it. The author could just have just set the protagonist to be an indigenous person. I have to add a time traveler. If you haven't watched Dou Po, are you considered a time traveler? [Emot=default,01/]

At first, I hoped that the ultimate imperial soldiers would appear in Dou Qi Continent in the future. The worst possible outcome is to sink Zhongzhou!

The sacrificial path in the trilogy of Perfect Covering the Sky Sacred Ruins and the Other Shore in The Lord of One Life all touch upon the change of existence and non-existence, the path of existence and creation out of nothing. Pay attention to spiritual realm and strength. Whether it can create something out of nothing is the difference between technology and fantasy.

It can be said that this author has never read the original work, not to say that he has not read it at all. It is just like the protagonist he wrote, almost the same. He can't tell what the elixir does. If you want to read it well, you can treat it as a scientific article. It has basically nothing to do with the original work.

[emot =default,04/]I don't understand, I don't understand, I don't understand.

I didn't read the rest of the story, I only read the beginning. Author, if you want to write about the protagonist refining weapons, then just write that he has no talent for refining medicine, and then find another way to make weapons, but the reason you gave is that his mother was an alchemist and was hunted down, so the protagonist stopped refining medicine. This reason is too far-fetched.

Brother is probably tired. If I had known that I would only update this chapter today, I would not come. I read these two chapters in vain, and my mind flew away. When I saw the reminder here, I felt heavy again. After all, I overstepped. If brother didn't update, I have nothing to say. My brother's update today is so perfunctory, which really hurts my heart. My heart is as cold as ice shards. It's just an unlucky thing that I came here. I should be satisfied with this update of one chapter a day.

Author, if possible, I hope you can write about the world