Fight to Po: Emperor Yang

Chapter 13: Meeting the Little Doctor Fairy Queen is extremely poisonous. If you don't know how to write an emotional scene, don't write it. The writing of emotional scenes is terrible. Later, there were also people who went to the Xiao family to cooperate and sell elixirs to give money. Then in Chapter 110, I suddenly confessed that I am a time traveler just like you, Xiao Yan. When a fellow countryman meets a fellow countryman, his eyes well up with tears, which is disgusting. The author said not to lick Xiao Yan, but when I meet Xiao Yan, he is like a nanny. I don't lick, I am a nanny. I hope that when Emperor Yan becomes the emperor, I will get a breath of vitality and let me become an emperor too. Many of the ratings are based on brushing. Wouldn't a normal person complain about Chapter 13? However, you can't see it in the good reviews. Only in the low scores are there real comments from real people. Most of the others are fake. Brush the rating.

In the nanny story, I made up various reasons to give Xiao Yan Yihuo, but I couldn't write it without the plot. Your Kangkang Xiao Tiance book, how big your imagination is, why should I give it to Xiao Yan, I am better than you, why should I give you the strange fire, that Xiao Tiance thing, the void swallowing flame, the opportunity to become an emperor will not be given if you don't give it, if you have the resources, you are the Yan Emperor, if you don't have the chance of the different fire, you are just a lucky person who relies on burning skills to raise the upper limit. It would be better for you to change your martial arts for fighting skills, and exchange them all with Yao Chen for strange fire. You don't need it in the early stage. You, the fighting king, are you kidding me about using heaven-level martial arts? The earth-level skills are enough. In the later stage, just go to the ruins to grab them. The author can just write down a low-level sky-level skills. Don't talk about what to do with the Soul Emperor. The ancient jade has been stolen. If the dog reaches the late stage of the Nine-Star Fighting Saint, just ask others to kill the Soul Emperor. Chu Dan can ask Ziyan Zhukun to help. In the end, the passage is opened and the protagonist has no fate? To put it bluntly, he just licks Xiao Yan and gives him all the strange fire. Even though he has already become an immortal, I am still humble to him. I am a dead Taoist friend but not a poor Taoist.

Author, you must accept Yun Yun, but you must accept Yun Yun. If you don't accept Yunyun, I won't give you two monthly passes. If you accept it, I will give you two monthly passes

Without a harem, I don't know how many people would watch it. Time travel fanfics are all about the female protagonists.

Starting from Chapter 13, he started to poison, showing fiery glances at young girls, and then treating them as taboos and so on. It's really disgusting.

Most Dou Po fanfics are all about mindlessly recruiting girls as soon as they come out, which makes me sick to my stomach. Here I only include Little Medical Fairy and Qing Lin. I think they are very good and there is no need to include others. And the author has the same opinion as me and has no interest in Xun'er at all. The good heroine is like a walk-on and she doesn't have as many supporting roles. I saw someone in the comment area asking the protagonist to recruit Yun Yun and I wanted to laugh. In my opinion, not only can't be collected but she should be killed directly. She clearly knows My master sent people to destroy the entire Xiao family but she still insisted on siding with the master, which proves that she is helping relatives and not helping others. I think it is a bit poisonous for the author not to write her to death. This is also a common problem of most authors who always treat beautiful women softly. Some people say that the protagonist is a dog licker to lick Xiao Yan. I think it is not considered at all. The protagonist does not selflessly help Xiao Yan. Every transaction with Yao Lao is mutually beneficial. Personally, I think this book is much better than other fans.

Nanny Wen, licking Xiao Yan Yao Lao like crazy, decided to give up after reading 200 chapters, and sent two physical strange fires and two other strange fire news. He knew that Hai Bodong had residual pictures and didn't go to get them back. He didn't use the residual pictures on his body to trade, so he had to send different fires. There were too many poisonous points, mainly emotional drama and dog-licking behavior. The news of two physical strange fires and the two physical strange fires. You can give Han Feng a piece of strange fire, and you can ask him to bring his mother to your bed. Even though he is an orphan, how old is Yao Lao? By then, I guess I will fight Xiao Yan. In the early stage, I said that I didn't cheat and couldn't catch up with Little Medical Fairy and Qinglin. I was selfish and inappropriate. Now I will send the strange fire to the protagonist of Destiny. Do you want to read what you wrote? It's better for Xiao Yan than for his own woman. Why don't Xiao Yan be the male lead? You two-faced turtle will die

After watching the first ten pictures, I thought it was okay. But when I saw the Little Doctor Fairy in the back, I was disgusted to death. The abrupt twists and the disgusting love words, let's talk about the murderous character in the back. Let me withdraw first. After all, I am still a time traveler. I am dozens of years old in two lifetimes. Before I have feelings for a woman, I have to at least wait for someone else to grow up! When Xiao Yan touched Gu Xun'er, he also experimented with fighting spirit. When he grew up, he felt that he would wait until others grew up before taking action. This was too impatient!

Accept it, accept Yunyun. If you accept it, give me a monthly pass. The author must meet the needs of readers. There are so many people saying that I will accept it.

Obviously, some writing was added to the protagonist before, giving him a positive image, a positive image of a person who actively worked hard to become stronger, but ended up losing his power as soon as he met a woman. Do you dare to think? After experiencing modern education, I saw a 12-year-old girl, who is currently in the sixth grade, with a fiery look in her eyes. She did not hide it and directly regarded her as a forbidden wife and private property. Although Tang San came from ancient times and had relatively conservative thoughts, the protagonist was , Tang San was not born like this in Dou Yi. He only started to show animal behavior in Dou Yi. Dou Yi basically had double standards. It was normal and everyone would have it. Why would someone say that Tang San destroyed the Killing City? I think many people would destroy it because they didn't. They can't destroy the Snow Swan Kiss. Anyone who has obtained the Killing God Realm knows how powerful it is. If they don't want others to get it, they will definitely find a way to destroy it. I find that many people now have a sense of morality. They always stand at the highest point of morality and accuse others. People have never thought about the era and background of Tang San. People will be assimilated. For example, if you live in a strange place, as long as you stay for a long time, you will gradually be assimilated. For example, when I first came to Guangdong, I felt at a loss. Now, isn't it good? I have also been assimilated. People are social animals. Different living habits are destined to be assimilated, or compatible. The protagonist now has the same taste as Tang San, such as magic beads. Tangshan almost killed all of them. The protagonist also looks like this. The protagonist's previous image and the so-called foreshadowing completely collapsed, but when he met Yafei, he started to be a gentleman again. No one could get used to it. This feeling of inconsistency made me wonder if the writer had changed? In other words, the first part was completely written by someone else, and the second part is the author's true level. I also read the book reviews, and I don't think a normal person would know how the protagonist treats a little girl. Some people say, don't we also like girls when we were children? You also said that that was when I was a child, and my thoughts are completely different from those now. They all have the mentality of a child, but the protagonist is not. He is completely an adult, completely born, and has a strong sense of dog-licking. I also judged some of the subsequent content based on the book review. It is not a judgment. After all, it is clearly stated. It seems to be a nanny and a gift girl. I used a lot of writing to describe Meidu. Queen Sha, however, said that the heroine of the original work started, and there was still a competition. More than a dozen pictures were not finished, and then she started to tell herself the identity of the time traveler, and then gave two strange fires, two strange fire news, and seemed to have some resources. Some people said it was the reputation of Yao Lao. I can only say who would believe it. She also exchanged something with Yao Lao, making it seem like she was not a nanny. The character description was a mess. The little doctor Xian Wei in front of me Submissive, kicking the nose and face, and writing according to the author's first ten chapters, it is not much better than now. Some people will say that Xiao Yan will do that when he is three years old. It seems to be three years old. I have also forgotten that Xiao Yan is a time traveler, like a little girl. To be honest, if it is not mentioned in the original work, who would know that there is no time travel at all. I remember it seems that time travelers were more popular at that time, so Tudou wrote it down. Then I turned around and forgot, the protagonist has the memory of a time traveler, so the protagonist is out of respect for the original intention. The protagonist is born from the bottom of his heart. Generally, a novel has a nanny, which is basically useless. In addition, the description of the protagonist's character is inconsistent with the daughter. I won't say it anymore. If I say too much, you can't see so much. I am not a robot, I am a real person. The reason for giving five stars is to prevent the author from deleting the review, or The administrator deletes the comments and has been deleted several times. If the comments are a little bit unpleasant, the comments will be deleted and the scores will be lowered. I just hope you can avoid it. The reason why I am so angry is because the protagonist is completely incapable of emotional drama, and the character description is inconsistent. The babysitter gives away the daughter. It comes from the showdown of the original protagonist. You can definitely use your strengths and avoid weaknesses. If this goes smoothly, it is much better than most Dou Po fan fiction. If you want to increase To add the content of emotional drama, you can open a small account to practice. The first ten chapters of this book are written very smoothly, at least 8:05 and above. If you insist on making a big one, it will be superfluous. I will also meet some readers with unreasonable ideas. The general idea is this, if the writing is good, I will give four or five stars, and if the writing is not good, don't give bad reviews. This idea is really unreasonable. After this, all of them are good books, all of them are good. It is a high-scoring book. The score is purely to distinguish the difference between good books and bad books. Others have worked so hard to write it and received five-star reviews, but it was surpassed casually. No one wants to write a good book. Anyway, good writing and bad writing are the same, so it is better to write casually. There are also some trolls, which can be said to be the same as the author. Brainless flattery makes the author unable to recognize himself. , That is, people who have a basic job and have a bright identity to beg for food, and it is up to us to reward them. I even saw someone saying that they will not give any rewards, so don't point fingers, or say, don't read, just such similar words. Anyway, it is derogatory. Converting to advanced skills, the original book said that it will solidify the fighting spirit. The protagonist here is losing rank. Is it necessary to practice the heaven-level skills and return to the third level of fighting spirit? Don't tell me anything about the later stage. The early stage is a mess, who can watch it? At over 1,600 words, this is the second longest book review I've ever written.