
Hogwarts: No, I Became the Dark Lord?
by Menu
About This Novel
1892, Hogwarts Castle, Scottish Highlands. Just when William Richards, who had just graduated from Hogwarts with honor, "reluctantly" accepted the appointment from Principal Black, and was about to become a glorious People's Teacher (crossed out) Professor of Defense Against the Dark Arts - another time travel brought him to London a hundred years later. Meeting the owl from Hogwarts again, he did not hesitate too much. In order to ascend the throne again (cross out the entire sentence) and to continue to learn his favorite magic, he once again became a rare fifth-year transfer student at Hogwarts in a hundred years - Albus Dumbledore: Although I don't know why William keeps saying things like "I hugged you when you were a child", but apart from these, he is indeed a good boy who is diligent and studious. Sorting Hat: Aziz-oooooo... Tom Riddle: Shut up! How dare you call that gentleman by his first name? Harry Potter: Although Mr. Richard said that he used the Unforgivable Curse as a green lighting spell and built the temple with the heads of trolls and goblins, I believe he must be a good person. Regarding the above comments, William, the (former) savior of the wizarding world, the guardian of ancient magic, the terminator of the goblin rebellion, the most powerful (dark) wizard on the surface at the end of the nineteenth century, the Dark Lord of Generation Zero, Richard said - yes, yes, they are all right.
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Official(8)Scraped 23d ago
Why doesn't the protagonist say that he has become smaller?
Why can't the protagonist just tell others that he is actually the same person in the past just because he traveled through time, shrunk his body, and then went to Hogwarts again? You must know that in the setting of this book, the fifth-year transfer student can still be a professor of defense against dark arts, which means that the reputation is at least good. So why not just say that your body has become smaller. Do you have to go to Hogwarts again?
It's okay in the front, but I'm a bit more relaxed in the back, and it's not too integrated with the game.
The previous plot is okay and relatively smooth. After all, it is combined with the original work and is relatively simple. However, as we get to the back and there are more original plots, starting from the diary, it feels a bit out of control. At that time, the protagonist in the author's works is a bit like a pen, and then he starts to gradually come into his own. Of course, there are good and bad things. It can be regarded as an invincible style. Magic itself, including ancient magic, etc., Are all mentioned briefly. This can be said to be just some settings from "Hogwarts Legacy". The protagonist is a reckless man, but some of the plot's ideas are still OK.
Generally speaking, if you hide your identity inexplicably, will you be hunted down if you don't hide your identity? [Emot=default,33/]
The writing is very fluent, and I wish I could write a longer story as an excellent fan, so I won't be fooled.
The setting of following the trend is okay, and the setting of the protagonist is more likable
As the title says, Let's talk about the advantages first: Recently, there have been a lot of fans related to Huo Yi, and they are all writing about it. The setting of the protagonist in this book is quite likable. At least the game panel was not moved over directly. That kind of digital person is very good at playing, and the compatibility is quite high. Let's talk about the shortcomings: First, the plot is driven like a troll, very ink. Every time a key clue came up, he was forced to lose his mind and said nothing. Regardless of the level of trust, clues, etc., He would immediately lose his mind and say nothing regardless of whether the target was Ginny or the trio. Then, the latest update is also a broken notebook thrown around. Just drag the rhythm in the water. If you want to slow down the pace, you can completely expand the original plot, perfect and expand the ancient magical worldview, etc., Similar to retrieving the previous legacy, and add some plots to the wands and props used before. There is no need to rub back and forth on the main line without pushing it. It just looked awkward. Secondly, it is really difficult to deal with the time-travel protagonist in a fan fiction setting without understanding the plot in a natural way. You can either just use the original character. This setting may be part of the reason for the first point. There is a suspicion that the plot of the original work is forced to use the word count. Finally, it's a bit strange to have Horcruxes be related to ancient magic. . . But this is acceptable. After all, after Huo Yi graduated, everyone gnawed on the big melon lightning chain, maybe to strengthen the boss.
If you like reading invincible articles, read this. If you want to see the protagonist grow, don't watch it. It's invincible from the beginning, which is not interesting.
It's very interesting and the whole story is vividly written. I recommend reading it.
I think it's very good and more suitable for recommendation.
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Community(0)
Official(8)Scraped 23d ago
Why doesn't the protagonist say that he has become smaller?
Why can't the protagonist just tell others that he is actually the same person in the past just because he traveled through time, shrunk his body, and then went to Hogwarts again? You must know that in the setting of this book, the fifth-year transfer student can still be a professor of defense against dark arts, which means that the reputation is at least good. So why not just say that your body has become smaller. Do you have to go to Hogwarts again?
It's okay in the front, but I'm a bit more relaxed in the back, and it's not too integrated with the game.
The previous plot is okay and relatively smooth. After all, it is combined with the original work and is relatively simple. However, as we get to the back and there are more original plots, starting from the diary, it feels a bit out of control. At that time, the protagonist in the author's works is a bit like a pen, and then he starts to gradually come into his own. Of course, there are good and bad things. It can be regarded as an invincible style. Magic itself, including ancient magic, etc., Are all mentioned briefly. This can be said to be just some settings from "Hogwarts Legacy". The protagonist is a reckless man, but some of the plot's ideas are still OK.
Generally speaking, if you hide your identity inexplicably, will you be hunted down if you don't hide your identity? [Emot=default,33/]
The writing is very fluent, and I wish I could write a longer story as an excellent fan, so I won't be fooled.
The setting of following the trend is okay, and the setting of the protagonist is more likable
As the title says, Let's talk about the advantages first: Recently, there have been a lot of fans related to Huo Yi, and they are all writing about it. The setting of the protagonist in this book is quite likable. At least the game panel was not moved over directly. That kind of digital person is very good at playing, and the compatibility is quite high. Let's talk about the shortcomings: First, the plot is driven like a troll, very ink. Every time a key clue came up, he was forced to lose his mind and said nothing. Regardless of the level of trust, clues, etc., He would immediately lose his mind and say nothing regardless of whether the target was Ginny or the trio. Then, the latest update is also a broken notebook thrown around. Just drag the rhythm in the water. If you want to slow down the pace, you can completely expand the original plot, perfect and expand the ancient magical worldview, etc., Similar to retrieving the previous legacy, and add some plots to the wands and props used before. There is no need to rub back and forth on the main line without pushing it. It just looked awkward. Secondly, it is really difficult to deal with the time-travel protagonist in a fan fiction setting without understanding the plot in a natural way. You can either just use the original character. This setting may be part of the reason for the first point. There is a suspicion that the plot of the original work is forced to use the word count. Finally, it's a bit strange to have Horcruxes be related to ancient magic. . . But this is acceptable. After all, after Huo Yi graduated, everyone gnawed on the big melon lightning chain, maybe to strengthen the boss.
If you like reading invincible articles, read this. If you want to see the protagonist grow, don't watch it. It's invincible from the beginning, which is not interesting.
It's very interesting and the whole story is vividly written. I recommend reading it.
I think it's very good and more suitable for recommendation.













