1988: Return to the Human World and Hang Out for a Few Years

The writing is OK, but it doesn't look comfortable. Note that the problem is that there are many contradictions, which does not conform to normal logic and does not conform to the logic of the characters in the book. For example, while saying that college students have high and low status, and at the same time saying that it is difficult to assign work, other characters in the book do not show much respect for college students. While saying that he has a Buddhist mentality, he is muddling along, while at the same time he is struggling in the system. While bringing with me decades of combined experience, I was shocked by some of the behaviors of other characters in the book. It is said again that as long as the protagonist gets the establishment, he does not need to look at other people's faces, while being manipulated crazily by various characters. Then, when writing a rebirth novel, the protagonist, a college graduate who was reborn in the 1980s, earns a salary of several hundred yuan a month and is manipulated by various people to run errands and put out fires. It is really unfriendly to readers.

At the beginning, college students were a bit out of character. In the 1980s and 1990s, college students claimed to be losers and had difficulty with assignments. It felt like they were out of place. Of course, it could also be that I have never experienced it and just heard about it and misunderstood it.

Mix! He didn't look like he was fooling around at all, he was jumping up and down. It feels like the author is holding the reader down**

How should I put it? The novel feels very stiff and abrupt, and there is no transition in many contents. For example, I remember all the reports and data from decades ago clearly, and I solved the problem in one go. After being reborn, a businessman doesn't want to make money. He fishes every day and reads novels with nothing to do. As a naive student, I can do it, just play today without thinking about tomorrow, but as a time traveler who has experienced ups and downs and lived into middle age, I find it incredible. Which middle-aged person does not have rules in doing things, and which middle-aged person does not know the importance of money. Even if you are fishing in a state-owned enterprise, you cannot have nothing to do, at least recalling the past life. It is essential to sum up experience. It is essential to at least find ways to let your parents and yourself live a good life. It is essential to at least have a short-term life plan. Can you read novels every day? It's so brainless and ridiculous. Just like a reader's comment, the novel is full of contradictions and very awkward.

I lasted for 223 chapters, and the character development was pretty good! The direction of the narrative is really hard to describe! I don't dare to talk freely about things within the system, and I'm not allowed to talk about them, so it's like hesitating! Then the protagonist is like a doormat! It's not that the story is not good, it just doesn't fit with the aggrieved writing style! ! ! ! Goodbye Jianghu

It's really hard to explain. If you want to be a salted fish, you can do it, but just because you can't help yourself, the key is that it can be avoided.

The writing is okay, but the plot is frustrating to watch. The protagonist is reborn in 1988 and wipes other people's butts every day. He loves wiping people's butts so much that he goes to Japan to wipe the butts of sumo wrestlers. It's not fun at all. It's uncomfortable to watch.

If my eldest brother lost five refrigerated trucks in that era, he could report it to the Ministry of Public Security for supervision.

After reading this book, I just want to say that the main character wants to be a gangster and build an archway, so why can't he be the leader of the guild himself? The goal is very clear. When the time is right, I will start my own business and go overseas. Why do I do this now? I am reluctant to do it while doing that.

I'm a little tired of reading it. When I read Chapter 55, you said that your monthly salary is more than 100, and you have to pay smoke and sugar when you go back to the village. You have to spend at least a year's salary to hire villagers, and you still live in a mud house at home. Does this make sense? Also make up for the parents in the previous life. You've been reborn and you still can't see clearly! If you are good, you just don't want to pay attention to them, and they will all rely on you. If you are not good, even if you borrow money to buy meals every day, most of them will not say good things about you.