Fat People Have No Youth, so What's the Point of Rebirth?

I just saw the protagonist trying to block the person the protagonist's friend liked, so he persuaded me to quit. Isn't that pure harassment? I don't understand why so many people give me good reviews. At the beginning, I kept saying that I am a supporting character and I am fat. I really don't understand.

1: It feels better if you can't see it 2: Since it is difficult to be reborn, what did you do after you were reborn? I chase girls every day, but what about my career? Is this the only change in rebirth?

It's plain, it's really plain, it's delicate, it's really delicate, the writing is pretty good, it's quite slow-burning, the emotional drama between the male and female protagonists is pretty good, there's nothing toxic about it, and it's worth learning from those authors in dealing with this aspect. The heroine's handling of the time when the female protagonist was deceived by a female classmate into going to a KTV was quite good, and it made people feel comfortable watching it, which is something that many writers who write urban novels can't do. Why is this book doing so poorly? In my opinion, it's mainly because urban literature, especially rebirth genres, mostly has an audience that likes cool stories and multiple female protagonists engaging in ambiguity. This book is too bland, not too cool, and is a bit slow. The content has nothing surprising. The emotional scenes between the male and female protagonists are delicate and delicate, but the pace is a bit slow. As we all know, most cool stories are read without thinking, and the early stage is too much. It's bland, and it's not clear that it's a single heroine. It's a bit of a match-up for other people's CPs. This is a point of dissuasion. In the middle period, the relationship between the male and female protagonists is more like brother and sister, which makes people lose sight of the future. They think this is an urban family love story, so there is no audience. If you don't read to the end, you won't get the foreshadowing. Also, the name of the book is so bad that it doesn't seem attractive at first glance. To sum up, this is a good urban rebirth novel, with a slow-burning edge, delicate writing, good emotional scenes, warm but bland content, neither exciting nor toxic. The male protagonist is a fat man, but later he slimmed down and became a handsome guy. Basically, it was okay.

At 7:08, I turned it over and it was all good reviews. Does the author intensively control reviews?

The author's writing is good. Regarding the plot, I don't know whether the author wants to position this book as a love story or a career story. If you want to write a love story, you don't have to write so much about career. Romance in ordinary life is just as attractive. You can refer to those dog food and god-like works. The rest of this book gave me the feeling that it is a male pornographic novel. The role of the heroine also feels a bit awkward and makes people feel uncomfortable.

My God, she is so beautiful. I really like Sister Lin's character. She has a kind of beauty that makes me pity her. Her beauty should be seen by everyone! Maybe the author had some bad points before the relationship was determined, but with the excellent portrayal of the sister, I persisted. It can be said that Sister Lin saved this article. I will always like Sister Lin!

I personally think this book is very well written, and it is also the first book I have spent money on in a long time.

The licking dog has stopped licking. Let's lick again after rebirth

It's rare to have a full book with comments. I can only say that the author's characters are quite rich, but there are still some typos and stiff transitions in the book. It can be seen that the author worked very hard on writing.

There is no doubt that this is an excellent rebirth article. Even though the story in the article is very close to life, the unrealistic feeling brought by rebirth cannot be ignored. But you have already read the novel. As long as the plot progresses naturally and coherently, reality is not that important. It must be mentioned that at a time when industrial saccharin is prevalent, this work is undoubtedly excellent. The analysis of friendship, love and family affection has the author's unique insights, which are also well expressed through words. The following is my personal complaint about the discomfort of a certain plot. I personally think that the emotional plot between Jiang Ling, Qing Qing and Dai Mei during the Water Splashing Festival is slightly inappropriate after the promised unmarried couple. Jiang Ling already understood very early on that he was here for Qing Qing. Even though he is not a perfect person, an unmarried couple is a responsibility. He has long understood the importance of responsibility and firmness to Qingqing. Qingqing has said more than once that if the relationship is not clean, she will leave by herself. Jiang Ling's thoughts here are a bit naive. Jiang Ling's inaction towards Dai Mei should be explained in advance. This plot is indispensable, but it is moved forward to the part where Jiang Ling and Qing Qing are fighting each other. In the part of the tea master, I personally think it is more appropriate. Make your own choices clear and firm before assuming joint responsibilities. Maybe my idea is immature. If the author sees it, just enjoy it with everyone.