Go Back to the Prosperous Days and Become a Layman

If you can't write, don't make any metaphors. If you don't know, you can't understand. I think people who know don't know what you are talking about. You are writing it completely for yourself, which is meaningless. There is really a lot of nonsense. I can still accept some details about cooking, but don't be too detailed. This is not about you teaching cooking. How much money a person has is not enough to eat, and then he complains like crazy, wishing that the front page is full of complaints, writing a lie, for example, all kinds of nonsense from a child to an adult. Now there are 1.23 Million words. I personally feel that about 300,000 words are useless nonsense. I have deleted the ones that do not affect the story at all, and driving. The author actually feels normal. Your kind of writing is more emasculating than castration. I want to read this kind of thing, why don't I read it better? A few words can make the characters more three-dimensional, but too many descriptions are simply disgusting. I think the overall story is pretty good, but the word "water" is too rubbish. It's either telling stories in the story or making comments or watching you teach cooking. I suggest you learn how to have a reasonable number of words for "water", otherwise the way you write it now is no different from robbing money.

It looked good in the previous chapter, but here comes the boss Wan who is disgusting and doesn't do anything. The protagonist is so useless. What does it mean to stop people from working in that era? The protagonist is really a saint.

There is something wrong with deliberately not having children after getting married.

The protagonist is too noble, the title of the book should be changed to "The Time Travel of a Communist"

I want to know what exactly it means starting from that year? I was confused at the beginning and had no desire to continue watching.

Another book that talks about the Qing Dynasty. Why are there so many people who like to be slaves?

The protagonist has fallen out of the realm of human sophistication, and is instead greasy and groveling in the face of power. If there is no rebirth and no golden finger, this is very reasonable. But the protagonist is reborn, and the golden finger is so powerful that he can collect it at will within a radius of 60 meters. It can even collect rainwater from the air to prevent yourself from getting wet. It would be too inconsistent to look at it this way.

The first 200 chapters are okay, let's just call the rest of it Rebirth: Go Back in Time and Cook. I've done whatever it takes to make up the word count. The plot is mediocre and boring. It's still a daily diary. Alas, it can be the previous chapters of this book.

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Nowadays, many people write about this era, and their writing is the same as now. The way of speaking is no different from now, and there are also Internet slang. Sometimes it's quite dramatic. This book is well written.