Each of My Ladies is Weirder Than the Last One

The protagonist has an IQ, but his personality is too out of the ordinary. The protagonist can hug his thigh, but you can't hug each one. You can just find a few of the most awesome ones to hug. There is no need to hug others. This is just like a weakling. No readers will like this. The author himself also complains that he talks about people when he sees them, and talks about ghosts when he sees ghosts. The book's failure to become popular has a lot to do with the protagonist's character. Also, relationships in the protagonist's harem come too easily. When a girl comes in, she says that relationships are a blank slate and becomes inexplicably close to the protagonist. Except for the beginning, since entering the ghost market as an undercover agent, there are only a few interesting plots so far, and the others are too bland, or the plot is too complicated to attract people.

It started well, but got weak in the middle, and ended up being complete garbage. The main reason is that the main plot is not clear, the character of the protagonist is not clear enough, there is a golden finger but he does not actively improve his strength, there are many female protagonists and he does not actively describe the heroine, the writing style of the court is obviously insufficient, and the story is anticlimactic, and the identity in the later stage Although he has obviously improved, he still has the mentality and style of doing things of a small person. When he saw that he has become a prince-in-law, he is still the most important young force in Dali Temple, and he also serves a prince as a follower. The author is completely forceful and illogical. I basically want to give up after seeing this. I hope the author will give more thought to the change of character identity.

His writing skills are at the level of a first-rate master. In just a few sentences, one scene and one character can be sketched out. But this plot outline feels like he is not writing a novel, but a TV script, or an idol drama. The protagonist is obviously cheating, but he is being manipulated in various ways. He seems to have an above-average IQ, but the things he does make me feel that he is very immature. They always said that they wanted to open a harem, but they all paid for it, and there was no clear emotional line. I firmly refused to admit that there was any relationship between the princess and the fish demon. Until the paid chapter, the protagonist gave me the impression that he was a police station co-op who was involved in the third Avengers War and became a key figure. You ask why, because he is a big bird and can convince all the Avengers heroines.

It turns out that joining Dali Temple is not that difficult. Just like Yu Qian is just a good-looking little husband, in this case, Dali Temple's recruitment is a bit too hasty! At least let's take a look at our strength.

Can you make the protagonist a bit meaner?

Emmm I always see people saying it's expensive in the comment area, and I feel numb on the spot. I've been reading books for many years, but I still don't know if it's expensive because of the large number of words... I suggest the author change the original length of one chapter to half a page. If you think it's too expensive, don't think it's too small.

Open high and go low, and it won't work until the mid-term. 1. There is too little sense of satisfaction in the realm. You are obviously cheating. After reaching the eighth level, you no longer know how to fly and cause all kinds of troubles every day. If you don't seal the demon, you can improve yourself 2. The protagonist sometimes talks about being stubborn, and sometimes wants to commit suicide. The character does not have his own personality characteristics and behavior style. It's all to serve the plot. 3. The son of King Zhao is a bit inexplicable. I think no matter how you find an enemy like Gongsun Yue to stand in the way, but if the third son of King Zhao is still alive, he must be looking for revenge on you first, so why did you take him out? What's the point of doing it if it doesn't kill people? It's better not to do it. As a result, you will be resented and others will be fine I can only say that the more I watch it, the more painful it becomes.

It's okay for the male protagonist to have both sides at the beginning, but it can't be like this every time. Just like The Deer and the Cauldron, it feels comfortable at first, but later on, he and the two are no longer human. What happened to Wei Xiaobao, and the male protagonist can be an egoist, but at the very least he has to have a sense of right and wrong. Then everyone in the White Lotus Sect has demons and ghosts, and they are all evil. You sold the information just for a woman, and the female protagonists are all stupid and sweet waiting for you to find out. Are they really wise?

I felt really good from the beginning, and the plot was also very good. However, as I watched it later, I felt that the descriptions of scenes and characters' expressions began to become more numerous, and it became verbose.

It has to be said that Yu Qian's life can be said to be very challenging, and there are still some dramatic operations, such as just joining the job and directly performing operations with big names.