Daoist Priest, Stop Fighting. the Avenue is Almost Gone

There are more than a hundred chapters in the first part, but it's okay to have a female protagonist in the end, but I'm so bragging about it, so I thought it would be written by someone else.

All good. Doesn't the protagonist touch the corpse? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? People who don't touch corpses are not a good person.

Overall it's pretty smooth. The Taoist priest's character can be shaped well.

Extreme pulling? Sometimes it feels good, sometimes it makes me feel depressed, and sometimes it makes me talk nonsense.

Now the content is all nonsense, can you write it well Can you learn from other good books about how to write it? 1. Half god, half saint and half immortal, all Confucianism and all Taoism, all wise, with thousands of books in mind, mastering half the world of civil and military affairs - Su Huanzhen 2. The true gods, true saints and true immortals, the path to Confucianism is the wise man, the mind has endless mysteries, and he rules over half the world of civil and military affairs - Tan Wuyu 3. I have been cultivating Shujian for hundreds of years, and there are thousands and thousands of them. The sun and the moon change, and the stars are there, and the sky is everywhere in the world - Emperor Wuji 4. Everything in the world is like a chess game, everything is unpredictable, and all the heroes laugh - a one-page book 5. The origin of the spring stone is that the dragon hides in it, and does not appear without passing through the beacon fire. Is Fengyun the Lord of Heaven? Nianzuo Xuan crown on the ninth level - Chaoyizhu 6. Advances and retreats in my life are like the wind, a glimpse of talent makes the world empty; I point my cold sword towards the sky alone, why should I have a hero who is ashamed of myself - Sword Demon Ao Shenzhou 7. The calamity spreads all over the world, and the purpose is to bring down six disasters and seven killings; disasters have spread throughout the past and present, killing only eight difficulties and nine evil spirits. One demon from all eternity, who defies heaven and dominates - Kuiyujiang 8. The talents in heaven laugh at the past and the present, but it does not matter if they fall into the world. No one can match the title of divine martial arts, and the sword shakes the world and is proud of everyone - Dao Wuji 9. The golden chariots lie down on the six dragons, and the clouds drive to listen to Shi Yu Changfeng. Drinking wine and composing poems in hand, climbing up to the sun and shooting into the sky - Yuliang Emperor 10. In the rustling wind, I asked Tuhan, who would drink with me, and who would dare to stand in the way? Yan Gui people will not return the halberd - Yan Gui people 11. Once you have a good dream of traveling to immortals, let the bamboos be cold and the pines be cold. Xuanyuan affairs, ancient and modern talk, romantic rivers and mountains. Indulging in intoxication leads to a white head, and a comfortable mind brings great views. Waking up is also in the world; dreaming is also in the world - people feel very king 12. It's worth looking for a close friend in your life, smiling at the wind and thunder shaking the nine states. Leaning on the sword, singing wildly and shouting about heaven's will, intoxicated by the flow of the eternal river - Jiuzhou knows one sword 13. Killing is to protect life, killing karma is not killing people - The Buddhist Sword Theory 14. One hates the lack of talents; the second hates the beauty and poor life; the third hates the constant waves; the fourth hates the coldness of the world; the fifth hates the leakage of the platform; the sixth hates the burnt orchid leaves; the seventh hates the poisonous puffer fish; the eighth hates the thorns of peanuts; the ninth hates the mosquitoes on the summer night; the tenth hates the lilies hiding the anvils; the eleventh hates not having an opponent; the twelve hates the invincibility of the world - Sword Master's twelve hates. 15. With your head high, you are a thousand hills away, and you are roaring in the wind; you can find enemies to discuss swords with, but it is cold at high places - Traces of the Wind 16. Righteous what heaven and earth are not right, not judging what is right and wrong, not violating what criminals and ghosts do, not breaking what the sun and moon cannot destroy - Jun Fengtian 17. No monks can be seen in the yellow sand for thousands of miles, and the Confucian scholars are covered by the violent storm. The three religions are originally Taoist, how can they be equal and share the same reputation - Qingyangzi 18. There is no distinction between black and white in the world. The ghost of the carriage, the dashing gentleman - the black and white gentleman 19. One Xiao and One Sword flattened the business, and the mad reputation lasted for fifteen years - Crazy Sword in Troubled Times 20. If you deceive the gods and deceive the saints, you will also deceive the immortals. There is no end to the tricks and abductions, and people give them the nickname Su Lao Zhai.

If you want to fight, just fight. After you fight, don't talk nonsense. You don't even know how to count words.

Disadvantages: 1. The protagonist upgrades too quickly. It takes the protagonist one year to practice to achieve what others may need decades or hundreds of years to achieve. 2. Those high-ranking officials who have lived for decades or hundreds of years feel that they have no grace, magnanimity, and city government. They are like street gangsters. Whether it is a fight or an invasion, it is like a fight between several societies. It reminds me of the mainland historical-themed movies made by Hong Kong directors. It feels like several Hong Kong societies fighting each other. 3. There is a big problem with the setting of court officials. People with advanced cultivation can live for hundreds of years, that is, they will be officials for hundreds of years. In the long run, even small officials in the county should also be highly cultivated people and officials (those hundreds of years old in the imperial court) How many descendants should there be? Generation after generation, one generation is calculated every 25 years, and there must be a hundred people in the direct line and collateral line. One carrot and one pit) is a monopoly. How can it be the turn of a hundred households who are not born in a big family? Chihu who is 40-60 years old? This is actually a mistake that other programmers who write longevity novels make.

Ever since I went to the Eastern Continent, I have become more and more confused. I wrote a lot of things later on. Zhang Longyishui in Longhu Mountain was not solved in the end. He didn't return home. The main theme was just wandering. The character design collapsed later on.

Under the banshee veil, there are hidden secrets.

Bookworm's End is this kind of light-hearted, humorous and a bit silly novel! Great!