Who Taught You to Cultivate Immortality Like This?

Because I pointed out the problem with the article, that is, the male protagonist seems to be a patient with schizophrenia. He will automatically switch to another personality when he meets different women. Each personality seems to have memories but will not think about other women except the current woman. In other words, the protagonist is a collection of multiple stallion personalities. When he encounters one, he switches to another personality. This newly switched personality is like an innocent novice, and then behaves like his first love. It's really weird. Why, when you met the second female, was the first female dead?

It seemed interesting at first, but the more I wrote, the more I started to lose my sense. I just lost my mind and couldn't believe what a bullshit article this was.

Childish, boring, white text. H articles are better than the author's writing style

Is the author obsessed with these three views? You slept with a girl, and you didn't tell the master, and you didn't let the girl tell you, and you still don't want to be responsible after sleeping with her? What kind of scumbag outlook is this? In order to advance the plot completely illogically and destroy other people's sects, why don't you eradicate them? Knocked on the door and let people run away? What's even more speechless is that this sect knew that people were coming to destroy us and didn't run away at all. Alas, I just waited, waiting to knock on the door. The mountain guarding formation was not broken, and I thought about letting my own people run away. Why did you go there earlier? Totally mindless cool article

The writing is good, but the question is how many times has it been described that the master has a good figure. And how many times has Qiaoqiao been grinding and chirping? I can't stand the 120 pictures. There's too much water. Not interesting

The protagonist of this book is really fucking masochistic, and the supporting male characters have so many scenes. I wrote so many women, but none of them were accepted, and they were all played by the supporting male characters

I haven't read the article yet, but when I look at the introduction, I'm totally off the mark. .

It's getting worse and worse. The back part is not very good. There are many places where it's not rigorous. Moreover, it's always talking about the aunt's figure and what's the best. It's boring if it's repeated all the time. The plot is a bit slow.

I'll accept each one as I see it. I suggest that you just create a female protagonist circle and get the protagonist to mate. There is no need to write anything else. The specific details will be more detailed because this book does not need to be published here. It should be used as good material for people to fight in some places.

Forget about porn, I kept writing about straightening my waist, using my little motor to release my sword energy, and singing my songs to play magic. It really made my scalp numb. No wonder the rating is so low. I was really embarrassed and vomited.