Nine Days

The book is not bad (´-ω-`) Please rate carefully and don't maliciously score points.

Maybe I've read too many novels like this, and over the years I've been reading novels like "Quick Wear", so I felt that there might be something wrong with the male protagonist's outlook on life. In the first few chapters, the male protagonist heard others say that he was brought by gods, and then thought that those people should provide him with food and clothing. What a weird view-_-|| Because I only read the first few chapters, you don't know whether the plot of the novel is well constructed or not. But I think this may also be a stallion novel. The key is that it is very ordinary. I have read several novels with male protagonists like this. Although those novels are not very distinctive, they feel that they are several levels higher than this one. As for novels with big heroines, such as Above the Clouds, I think they are very well written. The heroine is not a so-called good person. On the contrary, she is the kind of person who will do whatever it takes to get her own way. But I think that is the real cultivation of immortality. Which of those immortals is the most numerous in the Three Palaces and Sixth Courtyard? Except for the Jade Emperor.

The plot in the early stages of the Great Tribulation is quite fast, and the character of the protagonist is quite successful. In the middle and later stages, it should have gone beyond the outline of Lao Gui, and it started to have a bit of a stream of consciousness, but it was all based on the plot, and the development was basically reasonable and unexpected, and the pathos that fit the atmosphere also had a good effect. I think Lord of Tribulation is the best book written by Lao Gui. But after reading this book, the old ghost may feel that the last part of the previous book was a bit over the top? I wanted to control the pace of the novel from the beginning, but now it's two million words long and I'm still hanging around in the Northern Territory. What about the Eastern Territory? What about the map that underlines these two million words? Seeing that Fang Gui had just entered the Dragon Palace, I really couldn't stand it anymore. I started picking it up after Zhao Taihu launched a wave of violence. It has been more than a hundred chapters now, but it seems that the plot progress is really slow. Mu Laojiu is also a character who has been highlighted for half the book. The old ghost spent a long time to pull Mu Laojiu out, and then there was half an hour of foreplay and three seconds of gc? How much foreplay does the old ghost give Mu Laojiu? The amount given to Zhao Taihu was less than half that of Mu Laojiu, but the final effect was that Zhao Taihu far surpassed Mu Laojiu. Personally, I think Lao Gui should think about it carefully. If there is too much foreplay, the effect will be greatly reduced if he is not pushed back. It would be better to think of a character like Lao Zhao and give him some exposure occasionally, and the effect would be better if he does it suddenly and hard. Let's talk about the supporting roles. The only ones I can still remember are Little Loach and Qingfeng who just made a comeback. Why? First, after being raised for a while, I forgot some of the plot, which is normal; but the most critical question is, old ghost, what did you spend a hundred chapters writing? Little Loach is messing around. The previous supporting characters, such as Canglong's disciple, Lao Zhao's son, Guo's senior sister, etc., The characters that you spent a lot of pen and ink on have been cut off by you with a long plot that has little meaning. If the novel is mainly based on the Northern Territory, then I think the pace is okay, but the plot of the Eastern Territory is a bit upstage. If it were to focus on the entire continent or the Eastern Territory, then this rhythm would be really off track. Boss, it's two million words. If I haven't gotten to the point yet, there's really nothing I can say. Now tell me why you suddenly want to say something? Is it because after reading the table of contents of the next few chapters, Canglong is dead? Another character that you spent a lot of writing and ink on, but it was gone without much positive development? This kind of plot seems to be only available in the later stages of the Great Tribulation Lord, right? Looking at it now, are you not afraid that the novel will be weak in the later stages? I said some miscellaneous things, but I don't know if I can see it. I still hope that I can write better novels. Come on!

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It's a very good book, why do people keep maliciously leaving negative reviews? Books are neither popular nor popular. How can a good book be buried?

To be fair, the first dozen or so pictures are okay, but the progress in the latter part is very slow! I don't have the patience to chase anymore

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Hiss, this book is so terrifying, so terrifying. It actually made me feel like I couldn't get enough of it. I didn't ask for praise, I just asked for a quick update. I felt anxious and worried like an ant on a hot pot. Update soon! Update soon! ! Update soon! ! ! Say important things three times! ! ! ! !

Just read the first few chapters. I feel that my three views are not correct. Farewell

I don't like it. He talks about being a descendant of immortals all day long. The problem is that he wants to be wild even though he has no abilities. This protagonist is not good.