Wizard: My Career Panel Has No Upper Limit

I have to criticize. I can't help but want to criticize after reading Chapter 68. The first point is that this novel obviously falls into a running narrative. I see the author trying hard to add water to the article, such as [Basic meditation method experience plus 1], the protagonist is in the morning... In the house at night... Etc. Don't keep writing these repetitive contents with little difference, which will greatly reduce the interest of the novel. I think the novel is interesting. It is said that it is just for fun, otherwise it will be different from my life. You can write other places first, and lay the groundwork for other things to skip the protagonist's boring growth period, or write about the protagonist's research on wizards. I know there is such a description in the book, but it is too general. It just talks about rhythm, and there is no specific system. It seems that there is nothing if there is only rhythm. ** In reality, iron-carbon alloy Assuming there is only iron and carbon, there are also ferrite, austenite, pearlite... And you only have rhyme. The second point is that the characters are not deep enough. I don't know how to do this. If I can, I will write a novel myself. The author should work hard.

It's rubbish. After watching it for a long time, the protagonist is still a little Karami, who is frightened every day. Make the protagonist's golden finger look very powerful. Isn't that why I spent 10 million words writing this?

I have read a lot of wizarding novels, including the ancient wisdom and brain flow, the old-fashioned golden finger and a little flow, and the popular strange and inappropriate flow... However, it has really declined in recent years, and there is nothing new. This wizarding novel, at least for now, seems to have some heart. The "gift" rules left by the wizards' predecessors for wizard civilization ensured the bottom line of wizard civilization, complicated professional branches, and at least the subsequent world view would not be too monotonous. All in all, I hope wizard writers can pay attention to it.

I can be considered an old bookworm who has read more than 300 chapters. Let me talk about my feelings about this work. The author is really cunning. At first, I read the book based on the title, thinking it was an updated novel. After all, the title is too tempting. However, as I continued to read, I had to admit that the author is an educated person, and the words and sentences between the lines have been carefully polished. The literary talent alone is satisfying. However, when I read more than 300 chapters, I still felt like I couldn't finish reading. Let's put it this way, isn't it true that everyone reads novels to seek resonance in the virtual novel world? Just like girls love to watch a domineering president falling in love with me, and boys love to watch pretending to slap Long Aotian in the face, everyone will consciously put themselves in the position of the protagonist. , To see how he rises to the top, to see him go through the bitterness and bitterness, but in essence, he is reading his own "splendid novel". But from my perspective, the protagonist seems to be growing continuously, and he is growing in an all-round way. This is good news for patients with obsessive-compulsive disorder like me, but it seems that as long as he is an individual, he can understand his life and everything about him. Pointing fingers, everything about him does not belong to him. Although the protagonist says that he wants to control his destiny, it seems that as time goes by, one after another superiors appear and control the protagonist like Russian matryoshka dolls, just like controlling a chess piece with self-awareness. The atmosphere of this story is too It's too depressing and too hopeless. A certain bathroom god had many bright moments before he became a god, but the protagonist really didn't have the chance to see them. This makes the protagonist's upgrading of sleepless nights and food seem dispensable. It's just a smaller ant growing into a larger ant. If the author's writing tone for this story is That kind of depression and depression. At the end of the story, the protagonist achieves the highest level and then gets a certain praise. With all due respect, I really can't stand this long depression. I came to read "Shuangwen" and not to look in the mirror. The author can at least arrange a few food-crushing sessions for the protagonist to relieve this depressing atmosphere. This kind of protagonist I get "meaningful" warnings at every turn, I break into cold sweat at every turn, it's so creepy, I really don't know how to describe it. The tone of the wizarding world is the opposition and unity of rationality and madness. It just needs to be emphasized a little. For example, the protagonist personally sees some abyss explorers because of greed, fear, etc. It's okay to be afraid and the distortion will come to an end. It's enough to use this fact to warn the protagonist. Don't always come out with a mentor or something "meaningful". I'm really digging my toes into the ground. There is a trace of embarrassment in the absurdity. The protagonist should have received enough warnings. How can someone just come out and let the protagonist know? A chill ran down my spine. The protagonist was clearly better than everyone else and worked harder than anyone else. How could he make the protagonist look like a waste and just act like a minion? I hope the author can polish the plot and add more highlight moments of the protagonist, or group portraits of other supporting characters to alleviate the almost despairing and depressing atmosphere.

One moment he said that wizards would treat people as experimental subjects if they didn't know how to do it. The other moment they said that wizards would treat apprentices as experimental subjects if they could use various excuses. I have been here for 7 months and I don't know anything. I have to rely on the prince to introduce me. There are too many small problems.

The update speed is great and the word count is great. The overall picture is still good. Many of the plots are also very heartwarming, but the supporting roles are reduced to a very serious level, which has greatly affected the viewing experience. Another problem is that the author cannot write about the wisdom and oppression of the high-level wizards. . Everyone is stupid and stupid. For example, when the protagonist mentions the most basic ups and downs in the workplace, and is praised as a genius by a lot of wizards who have lived for hundreds or thousands of years, it is difficult to hold back. So many people have lived to be hooked at such an age? And the falsehood is very serious. When it comes to magic, it's just those few sentences. The author should read a professional book. Even if he writes the dozen or so sentences of Cuiyu Lu, he should at least be strict. There are many places in the article that look like drama. He kept reminding himself in his head that if he just didn't expect it, it would be another world. The Witch King is still sweating, his hands are shaking, and there are a lot of female channel descriptions. The classic regret is like a needle pricking his heart. This description. Also, when I first returned to the monitoring station, I felt like I was slapped in the face at every turn. It smells like an ancient girl's video. It does not rule out that there is a problem with the AI ​​prompt words used. Finally, the clichés and templates are too severe. Even though the protagonist has so many marks of a big boss and is a candidate for an ancient alchemist, there will always be people who question him and examine him as if he has lost his mind (the description of him is like a test subject appears many times). Then he convinces everyone without refuting any traditions in a humble manner. Someone, this routine has been repeated at least three times, and I have never understood the brainless plot created by the author. Forget it if you are a cute little Karami. You have been marked by a bunch of great people and a bunch of rare professions, and you are still being looked down upon as a little Karami. It is difficult not to make people wonder if there is something wrong with the IQ of the supporting character? Are there hundreds of wizards who are thousands of years old? Not as good as a three-year-old. This is not called pushing the plot, this is purely about the number of words, and it is very boring to read. Above.

The ideas and ideas in the books are good It can be seen that the author wants to write a good novel But after writing it, the phenomenon of running accounts appeared. Different career upgrades basically use the same template. Also, there are very few descriptions of fighting in the novel, so I don't recommend it to those who like to watch fighting. The core of the content is learning, collecting things, and upgrading. Probably because upgrading is dangerous, I have to learn more and collect more. After upgrading, I continue to learn and collect things, and the cycle continues. It doesn't matter if it's mediocre, and it doesn't matter if the fight escalates. Overall evaluation: The early stage is good, you can watch it in the middle stage, but I didn't watch the later stage.

The wizard's apprentice can't afford to eat. The price of bread has increased tenfold. Is this AI? The king's children are very ordinary people here, but you tell me they still lack food. Got away, got into the plane

Attracted by his introduction, a batch of water. After reading hundreds of chapters, I still haven't left Novice Village. I'm so speechless.

Hahaha, I laughed to death. I have never read any novels, and the data mentioned above are still the lowest. I really want to open the panel and basically gain two to three points of proficiency in two or three days. Even if I fucking love you and get a little bit every day, how can *** be reduced to 43? ? ? ? ? ? 😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎