The Witcher: Starting with Synthetic Gems

@ Orange Cat Dragon, Chapter 729: Augustus - Augustine; @ Orange Cat Dragon, Chapter 735: Velen-Velen, Crimson Divine Court-Crimson Deep Court; @ Orange Cat Dragon, Chapter 736: River of rage - river of violence, river of rage - river of violence, river of rage - river of violence, landing point - weakness, river of rage - river of violence, river of rage - river of violence.

Sofia advanced too quickly. The article talks about how after breaking through to become a formal wizard, the qualifications during the apprenticeship period are no longer considered, but the resources. The reason why apprentices consider qualifications is because at that time there was no way to obtain many resources. This is the setting of the novel itself. So how did Sophia crystallize in just a few years after being promoted to an official wizard in Lilith's cabin? Even the protagonist who received Golden Finger and got so many resources by chance can't compare to her. You must know that when the breakthrough was made, there was also a three-eyed bloodline force bonus that was directly increased by 2000 and turned into gasification. This could not keep up with Sophia. Isn't it a bit unreasonable? Otherwise ok, hay

I just started reading it. I hope I don't turn the page and find out that my mother is a high-level wizard at the end. That's so nonsense. Ordinary wizard apprentices can't look down on mortals. If it's really written that a wizard and a mortal gave birth to three children, it's just ridiculous. The most important thing is that it can be born

@ Orange Cat Dragon, Chapter 695: Rose Garden-Rose Paradise, Rose Garden-Rose Paradise, Preston-Preston; Chapter 696: Tower of Distortion-Tower of Transmutation, Tower of Distortion-Tower of Transmutation, Green Gangdu-Green Steel Capital

@ Orange Cat Dragon, there is a typo, please correct it and unify it. Chapter 786: The land of dead bones - the burial place of bones, in charge of subjectivity. Chapter 790: Everything belongs to the tree. Chapter 798: Christine-Christine. Chapter 804: Trask-Trix. Chapter 805: The Imperial Court of Heratos-The Imperial Court of Heliotus, The Imperial Court of Heratos-The Imperial Court of Heliotus, The Imperial Court of Heratos-The Imperial Court of Heliotus, Three Thousand Peach Blossom Curse-Three Thousand Peach Killing Curse. Chapter 808: Christine - Christine, Christine - Christine, Christine - Christine, Stephania - Stephania. Chapter 809: Stephania - Stephania.

It's too watery. 600 Chapters are still a first-level wizard. To advance to the first level, I have to write about 400 chapters. I have to write more than 3,000 or 4,000 chapters before I finish the book. It's too watery and it's boring.

There are some problems with the writing and hyphenation. There is a high degree of repetition and too much nonsense. A sentence can be clearly expressed in several paragraphs. Daily conversations must be clearly summarized like a commentary - "Oh, dear little wizard, the 0.2-Ring XXX sub-direction XXX spell you just performed is very good." A normal person would only be able to say, "Little wizard, that move XXX was done well just now." There is a suspicion of intentional hydrography. However, when listening to books, you basically forget them while listening. This kind of repetition and wordiness is just right. The main reason is that the setting is very interesting and relatively "rigorous".

The writing is too cumbersome, and some key data are easy to make mistakes, which greatly affects reading.

Where can I go if I have money? This shabby school is of no use at all. No one with a brain would spend money on this.

There is nothing wrong with the writing, but your writing about plants is very poor. Chapter 201 can't stand it any longer. It's not that it's not fun anymore. I feel like you're using the golden finger too far.