Starting from the Limit-breaking Traits, Martial Arts Becomes a God

The author's writing is very good, the description of the realm and the fighting are all very good, and it has some of the feeling of ancient martial arts. But the big problem now is that the plot is advancing too slowly. I just read about 1.69 Million words and more than 500 pictures, which is just the second level. Yours has now been pushed to the highest level of 8. There are even higher maps such as Shanghao Demon God. According to your progress, it is either a 3,000-page story, or a quick follow-up in the later stage? But to be honest, in today's impetuous era, no one will read the 3,000th chapter. Quick follow-up will lose the original characteristics and it will easily collapse. The suggestion here is to push the realm faster and don't end it unfinished. Come on!

The water is ridiculous, but it is not considered a high-quality film. It can be closer to the romance of the dragon and the snake, which is quite good.

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It feels pretty good, but this muscle flow feels a little too bloated and a little crooked. I hope it can return to its normal shape later. The reason why I deducted one star in the end is that martial arts is so inconvenient. It only has boxing skills, and the others are very ordinary, such as body skills, leg skills, and mental skills. At present, I feel that the system in the article is like bringing the low martial arts system to the middle martial arts. The strength has been achieved, but the cultivation system has not yet exceeded the low martial arts, it is only deepened and expanded. The content is quite different. I guess the male protagonist will be responsible for setting up the system later on. It depends on how the male protagonist does it. I don't see any signs of it yet.

The author's writing style is nothing to comment on, and it's very comfortable to read. But the character of the protagonist is too old-fashioned, the sense of morality and the sense of shackles are too strong, and it is a bit out of step with the times. Of course, the author wants to write what he thinks the protagonist is, which is not a big problem, but the rating will not be very high. And the plot is too farming, which is not very enjoyable. People who like fast food novels will have a hard time following it.

The writing is pretty good, but the pace is a bit slow. The protagonist's personality is relatively normal, and the emotional connection between the master and the apprentice is also very natural. The author's writing is strong, but the description of the fighting scenes is not very good. He often wins the battle inexplicably, and Cyber ​​Fengyan wins. Then there are some traits that actually don't make much sense to be honest. The protagonist's level is greatly improved basically through the epiphany of plug-ins. The author can consider optimizing this in the follow-up. Of course, this is just my personal suggestion. It depends on the author's consideration. And to be honest, sometimes the monster-fighting dungeons are really boring. Except for giving gold coins, skills, and proficiency to the protagonist, which has a weak effect on advancing the plot, the world view of the entire novel is still relatively vague, including the Zhulong and the Five Elements mentioned above, and Chun Chun. The two templated Riddlers appeared in more than 100 chapters or around 200 chapters. Now, more than 400 chapters have not been written clearly. Moreover, the upgrade speed of the protagonist in the later period was too slow. It almost broke the first limit in more than 100 chapters. Now it has only broken the second limit and it has already exceeded one million words.

After reading the introduction, "Rigging the Dragon Guanyin" is a very popular name, but the "Chenglong Guanyin" next door is obviously much better.

How are the realms divided? Once the limit is broken, the martial arts master Two breaks the limit, Three Breaking Limits, Master of Martial Arts Four Breaking Limits, Master of Martial Arts Five breaks the limit, Six Breaking Limits, Master of Martial Arts Seven Breaking Limits, Great Sage

I'm afraid that you won't see the comments, so I'll tell you here. The first one is about the principal who came out of the practice room and wrote about Thousand Degrees of Qi Transformation Master. I commented on the details there, so I won't go into details. The second one is that I always want to eradicate that human monster, which I also mentioned in the comments. I still hope the author will take a look. There is also the third one, which is the primary trait. It is best to have a passive part, so that it will be more satisfying, just like the emphasis on the first one. Attack, adding passiveness to the physical body, the primary pure combat power feels of little use, like Zexi, which is somewhat useless in the later stage, and after thousands of traits are added to it, the martial arts master will definitely have a lot of fun later, that is, using the body of the martial arts master to practice the previous boxing techniques, one for two or three days. When fighting with the pure combat strength traits, it is not easy to write it out. The kind of passiveness that was written and added at the time gave a sense of timely refreshment and can better retain readers. It can be a template for your first trait. But overall, this is a very good novel, very interesting, the writing style is also to my taste, and the writing style is also good. I highly recommend it. If the author has anything to say, you can reply to me and discuss it together. For now, these are the three

It's really tiring to make up the word count. There's nothing to say. If you can read it, you can read it.