
This Uchiha in Konoha Has a Monster Inside Him
by Stir-fried Chestnuts With Sugar
About This Novel
Traveling to the world of Naruto with a Hyphajedon in its egg-laying form. Jayton is the law of the universe, a monster standing at the apex of the universe. I want to use the whole world as nourishment to nurture me, Jayton! I will stand at the top! (The introduction is always weak, click here to take a look~) [The proportion of monsters is not large, it is just a plug-in. [The book has been completed with 1.2 Million words. I believe I am not a eunuch!
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Official(22)Scraped 6d ago
Let me make it clear first, this is a harem story
At first, it looked a bit like a single heroine Kushina, but later I found out that it was not the case. Anyway, I feel that the reason is quite ridiculous. If it is not a single heroine, then I feel that Uzumaki Kushina is better with Namikaze Feng Shui. The author said that he is a pure love, which is an insult to the word pure love. There is also a single heroine in the harem. Can't you start with a standard? You have to watch half of it before you tell me, pure and disgusting.
There are too many pitfalls in Naruto's settings. Ninjas have such a strong ability to change the terrain, which is much stronger than modern industry. It shouldn't be difficult to build a water diversion project in the Kingdom of Sand, right? It shouldn't be difficult to flatten the mountains in the Land of Rocks? The land just bulldozed is not fertile. If you plant some grass and burn it every once in a while, the land will always be fertile.
The key is that you are a Hyperjetton. You can shock a lot of people just by appearing on the stage.
The world of Naruto cannot cultivate the theatrical version of Zeton. The world of Naruto has been harvested by the sacred tree, and it is unknown how much it has been lost. Furthermore, there are only so many people in the world of Naruto... The Zeton that was cultivated...
By the way, you have already killed the third generation, why don't you remove him from the title of Hokage? Wouldn't it be nice to let White Fang be the third generation...
Okay, Naruto Invincible
Personally, I think it's pretty good. I saw someone posted a low star earlier because the protagonist dismantled CP, but it's okay. They've all written fan fiction. It's not normal to write according to your own preferences. If you can't stand it, you can open a book by yourself and conceive the entire framework and plot according to your own will. Wouldn't it be nice? Anyway, the main plot of this Invincible novel is okay. Unlike other Invincible novels, it does not have a clear purpose. This is because they are too powerful and everything they do seems too deliberate. There is no inexplicable pretense to slap someone in the face or pretend to be a grandson. And the main character of this novel is just to collect emotions. He has a clear point of view and is relaxed anyway, which is good.
White Teeth plus 3 generations of dog lickers. Licking White Fang: Doing everything possible to serve the people. While White Fang is busy as Hokage, the problem is that other people are loyal to Konoha. Licking the 3rd generation: The protagonist's family, Uchiha, was suppressed and was completely obsessed with the protagonist. This was not what the 3rd generation wanted to do. The 3rd generation was just a little weak and controlled other people.
The character of this pig's trotter is very awkward, and the realistic factors are also average.
There are some wrong sentences and wrong words, and it would be better to write more vernacular and less adjectives. Some places look really awkward. It takes a second to understand and finish reading even if you use some adjectives to match the wrong sentences.
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Official(22)Scraped 6d ago
Let me make it clear first, this is a harem story
At first, it looked a bit like a single heroine Kushina, but later I found out that it was not the case. Anyway, I feel that the reason is quite ridiculous. If it is not a single heroine, then I feel that Uzumaki Kushina is better with Namikaze Feng Shui. The author said that he is a pure love, which is an insult to the word pure love. There is also a single heroine in the harem. Can't you start with a standard? You have to watch half of it before you tell me, pure and disgusting.
There are too many pitfalls in Naruto's settings. Ninjas have such a strong ability to change the terrain, which is much stronger than modern industry. It shouldn't be difficult to build a water diversion project in the Kingdom of Sand, right? It shouldn't be difficult to flatten the mountains in the Land of Rocks? The land just bulldozed is not fertile. If you plant some grass and burn it every once in a while, the land will always be fertile.
The key is that you are a Hyperjetton. You can shock a lot of people just by appearing on the stage.
The world of Naruto cannot cultivate the theatrical version of Zeton. The world of Naruto has been harvested by the sacred tree, and it is unknown how much it has been lost. Furthermore, there are only so many people in the world of Naruto... The Zeton that was cultivated...
By the way, you have already killed the third generation, why don't you remove him from the title of Hokage? Wouldn't it be nice to let White Fang be the third generation...
Okay, Naruto Invincible
Personally, I think it's pretty good. I saw someone posted a low star earlier because the protagonist dismantled CP, but it's okay. They've all written fan fiction. It's not normal to write according to your own preferences. If you can't stand it, you can open a book by yourself and conceive the entire framework and plot according to your own will. Wouldn't it be nice? Anyway, the main plot of this Invincible novel is okay. Unlike other Invincible novels, it does not have a clear purpose. This is because they are too powerful and everything they do seems too deliberate. There is no inexplicable pretense to slap someone in the face or pretend to be a grandson. And the main character of this novel is just to collect emotions. He has a clear point of view and is relaxed anyway, which is good.
White Teeth plus 3 generations of dog lickers. Licking White Fang: Doing everything possible to serve the people. While White Fang is busy as Hokage, the problem is that other people are loyal to Konoha. Licking the 3rd generation: The protagonist's family, Uchiha, was suppressed and was completely obsessed with the protagonist. This was not what the 3rd generation wanted to do. The 3rd generation was just a little weak and controlled other people.
The character of this pig's trotter is very awkward, and the realistic factors are also average.
There are some wrong sentences and wrong words, and it would be better to write more vernacular and less adjectives. Some places look really awkward. It takes a second to understand and finish reading even if you use some adjectives to match the wrong sentences.
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Traveling to the world of Naruto with a Hyphajedon in its egg-laying form. Jayton is the law of the universe, a monster standing at the apex of the universe. I want to use the whole world as nourishment to nurture me, Jayton! I will stand at the top!




The general setting is acceptable, the text is clean and neat, there are no messy additions, and the logical flaws have not been found yet. I am still reading. Recommended Additional comment, the story changed a bit after the transition to pirates, please be careful when reading further.














