Pirate Sky Dragon
About This Novel
With the unfinished game template, I traveled to the world of One Piece 40 years ago. From then on, another invincible creature appeared on the sea. Chatting and laughing with the four emperors, and having a grand discussion with the five old stars. Falling from the sky island, he was unscathed, and being struck with a knife and ax was not injured at all. Known as the strongest creature on the surface, "The Dragon" - Luca Hauer Odo. On top of the war, the moment Blackbeard declared himself invincible, Odo suddenly fell. Just ride on the horse and your name is Tiqi? You are so arrogant when riding a horse! (The new book has been released, please support the new book)
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Official(70)Scraped 6d ago
The character Fufu was created by the author to be disgusting.
Don't tell me things like, "Should we abandon teammates who have no strength?" Is that Fufu just lacking in strength? She has no strength, no talent, no talent, her character is annoying, and she has no self-awareness! Please tell me what is the meaning of such a character? Which pirate group among pirates has such a person?
The portrayal of the heroine was such a failure
After several battles, Usopp felt that the gap in strength was determined to change, but the heroine is still like this until now. When Usopp followed Luffy, they were still very weak. It took a few battles and other things to shape Usopp into a very successful person. I didn't see any of this here. The heroine's fighting scenes are almost equal to those without mental retardation. The main thing is that if you let her become a manager, you will be like a crane. Don't make her look like a human or a ghost. It depends on how the author shapes it. If it succeeds, the score will go up. If it fails, the score will go down.
I feel like I can't draw it, my mentality almost explodes, I'm a handicapped player in the arena.
The main storyline reaches Sky Island, and you can play it leisurely and slowly.
The evil Fufu, persuaded by strength to retreat
It looked pretty good at first, but this damn poisonous thing (the useless useless Fufu) made me sick, and I felt very unhappy looking at it.
. . .
I was really dumbfounded. I saw dozens of pictures. Where is the foil man? He's just a tool, can that Fufu die? Letting someone drive the plot is not pushing. Letting a waste come. If you want a woman, you also want a strong man. Just a waste. . What's the use, and it's annoying!
I quite like Fufu
She may not be perfect, but she has a distinct personality and is consistent in her appearance. She admires Odo very much. Of course, she also has her own little thoughts. I believe that Fufu and the entire Odo group can grit their teeth and persevere even if they encounter huge difficulties until they overcome the difficulties and gain their own freedom. Therefore, for the author, I hope that in the plot, we can see Fufu's consciousness and see what she can do for Odo and the entire group. Come on, the author, update, I hope you write better and better, no tj
I'm trying to persuade you to quit at the beginning, but we haven't even started yet, so there's so much nonsense.
suggestion
I suggest the author reduce the number of female supporting characters or write them to death.
No rating for now
The novel is pretty good. I just want to know when this Fufu will sacrifice to heaven. I will come back to read it after the sacrifice. It really makes me sick.
Don't like female 1
It makes me uncomfortable to watch. It's disgusting.
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Official(70)Scraped 6d ago
The character Fufu was created by the author to be disgusting.
Don't tell me things like, "Should we abandon teammates who have no strength?" Is that Fufu just lacking in strength? She has no strength, no talent, no talent, her character is annoying, and she has no self-awareness! Please tell me what is the meaning of such a character? Which pirate group among pirates has such a person?
The portrayal of the heroine was such a failure
After several battles, Usopp felt that the gap in strength was determined to change, but the heroine is still like this until now. When Usopp followed Luffy, they were still very weak. It took a few battles and other things to shape Usopp into a very successful person. I didn't see any of this here. The heroine's fighting scenes are almost equal to those without mental retardation. The main thing is that if you let her become a manager, you will be like a crane. Don't make her look like a human or a ghost. It depends on how the author shapes it. If it succeeds, the score will go up. If it fails, the score will go down.
I feel like I can't draw it, my mentality almost explodes, I'm a handicapped player in the arena.
The main storyline reaches Sky Island, and you can play it leisurely and slowly.
The evil Fufu, persuaded by strength to retreat
It looked pretty good at first, but this damn poisonous thing (the useless useless Fufu) made me sick, and I felt very unhappy looking at it.
. . .
I was really dumbfounded. I saw dozens of pictures. Where is the foil man? He's just a tool, can that Fufu die? Letting someone drive the plot is not pushing. Letting a waste come. If you want a woman, you also want a strong man. Just a waste. . What's the use, and it's annoying!
I quite like Fufu
She may not be perfect, but she has a distinct personality and is consistent in her appearance. She admires Odo very much. Of course, she also has her own little thoughts. I believe that Fufu and the entire Odo group can grit their teeth and persevere even if they encounter huge difficulties until they overcome the difficulties and gain their own freedom. Therefore, for the author, I hope that in the plot, we can see Fufu's consciousness and see what she can do for Odo and the entire group. Come on, the author, update, I hope you write better and better, no tj
I'm trying to persuade you to quit at the beginning, but we haven't even started yet, so there's so much nonsense.
suggestion
I suggest the author reduce the number of female supporting characters or write them to death.
No rating for now
The novel is pretty good. I just want to know when this Fufu will sacrifice to heaven. I will come back to read it after the sacrifice. It really makes me sick.
Don't like female 1
It makes me uncomfortable to watch. It's disgusting.
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A good recent pirate fanfic
75[Good Grass] One Piece fan, taking the pirate route, pure ruthless gangster. At present, One Piece fans seem to be outstanding in the naval route. This is a novel with a slightly different feel. It starts well, and I hope it can maintain its level in the future.
I thought this book was pretty good before the establishment of Sky Island. The plan for the protagonist is to join CP and Spandyne to cooperate and jump back after gaining enough strength. The author said that the protagonist is written according to the Kaido template, so it is reasonable to encounter the Demon-Slaying Order twice and enter the Impel City once. I personally think the heroine is okay. The team needs a treasure-playing developer. Heart Fruit, but this book also has a problem. The biggest problem is that the charm of the fruit is not written out. This fruit can be said to be the core of this book. The protagonist spent a huge amount of resources to design it himself. For this reason, he gave up the top birth of the D clan or the Celestial Dragon and more excellent talents and equipment, but it did not show his unique sense of existence. Sky Dragon Fruit? It's strong, but compared to Kaido's Blue Dragon Fruit, it has one more thunder bomb, which is a bit useless. I hope this can be put behind me later
One Piece fan, obtained the fruit ability of Yu-Gi-Oh's three fantasy gods, Sky Dragon, and strengthened himself through the achievement system. He has a rare Yonko-level body shape. There are also various tough men in the pirate group, which has the nonsensical style of the original work.
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