
Pirate: If I Don't Die, I'll Fill up the Overlord Color First
by Medicine And Stone Can Cure
About This Novel
That year, Sengoku was not yet the marshal of the navy. That year, Kuzan, Sakaski, and Porusalino were young and ambitious. That year, the naval hero Lieutenant General Garp was so passionate that he chased Roger all over the world. That was also the year. Hit in the head by a rifle, bombarded by cannons, slit in the neck with a long knife, submerged in the nasal cavity by sea water, and burned by fire, Xia Le never died and became an unknown trainee soldier beside Garp. After seeing this heroic lieutenant general destroying the town with one punch. He lowered his head in silence and quietly increased the newly awakened Overlord Color to the full level. PS: Newcomers and new books, please support me and read more. I recommend this excellent old book "One Piece: General Buntora".
What Readers Think
Rating
Community(0)
Official(190)Scraped 20d ago
I can't stand it anymore after reading the third chapter. Do you really want to be like a dog with the navy?
Dead and unable to die, no matter what the reason, the Navy will kill you, at least 59 times. I have died 59 times, and I have awakened my overlord color and domineering energy. Are you still afraid of him being a Cap?
Even if you are killed by the navy at the beginning, you can still join the navy. But when you and Rayleigh were fighting, you were too outsmarted by Rayleigh, the Pirate King's deputy. Know the characteristics of the protagonist. Instead of trying to limit the protagonist, it helps the protagonist become stronger. That was just the first meeting. So Rayleigh knows what this kid is like? He's the Pirate King's second-in-command, and he's not an idiot. You've gone too far with your wisdom. And if your immortality is not studied by the World Government, even Garp can't keep everyone from knowing about his immortality. Are the scientists from the World Government leaving him alone without studying it? It would be better if you joined another pirate group. Did you join the navy? Aren't you just waiting to be studied? And you kill the dragon people. It's written as if everyone in it is like an idiot. Those are Tianlong people, protected by CP0. It's not impossible for the World Government to find the protagonist. Your writing is too hasty.
One word 🐔
He was hung up and executed by the Navy dozens of times. He was filled with resentment and finally joined the Navy. What a fool!
Save money
He was killed by the navy more than 60 times, and then became extremely angry, and was finally adopted as a dog by the navy.
I don't understand what the author thinks of Akainu
Do you hate Akainu when you meet him? Although Akainu can be regarded as obeying the orders of the Celestial Dragons, the essence is that he obeys not the Celestial Dragons but the military orders. The navy takes orders from the five old stars of the world government. Akainu is extremely militaristic, although I don't like it very much. But please write it carefully and don't get into the pirate level. There is no need to wash the straw hat. Pirates are not good or bad. What is the difference between thieves? Don't pull it to the top, Ace will not die without the Straw Hat on top. Not to mention that the protagonist is a fan of the Navy. Even if the Navy is a lackey, it will still be in the minority. More than 80% of the people in the world will only believe in the navy. While the pirates were burning, killing and looting, were they still kneeling down begging the "good pirates" Straw Hats to save them? A thief is a thief
Not recommended, not recommended, not approved
He was killed dozens of times by the navy, and then spoke black language, which was embarrassing. Then Garp decided to be a Navy dog as soon as he came here for a while. He was killed so many times and still treated like a dog. If you don't believe in evil, you can watch it.
I want to be a dog so much, I've been killed so many times, and yet I want to be a navy man
Tried poison, it hurts, but if you want to learn how to be a dog, you can watch it
I don't want to give it a single star. It's written based on the defense, and I have to buy chapters later. The author is just crazy about money.
Rating
Community(0)
Official(190)Scraped 20d ago
I can't stand it anymore after reading the third chapter. Do you really want to be like a dog with the navy?
Dead and unable to die, no matter what the reason, the Navy will kill you, at least 59 times. I have died 59 times, and I have awakened my overlord color and domineering energy. Are you still afraid of him being a Cap?
Even if you are killed by the navy at the beginning, you can still join the navy. But when you and Rayleigh were fighting, you were too outsmarted by Rayleigh, the Pirate King's deputy. Know the characteristics of the protagonist. Instead of trying to limit the protagonist, it helps the protagonist become stronger. That was just the first meeting. So Rayleigh knows what this kid is like? He's the Pirate King's second-in-command, and he's not an idiot. You've gone too far with your wisdom. And if your immortality is not studied by the World Government, even Garp can't keep everyone from knowing about his immortality. Are the scientists from the World Government leaving him alone without studying it? It would be better if you joined another pirate group. Did you join the navy? Aren't you just waiting to be studied? And you kill the dragon people. It's written as if everyone in it is like an idiot. Those are Tianlong people, protected by CP0. It's not impossible for the World Government to find the protagonist. Your writing is too hasty.
One word 🐔
He was hung up and executed by the Navy dozens of times. He was filled with resentment and finally joined the Navy. What a fool!
Save money
He was killed by the navy more than 60 times, and then became extremely angry, and was finally adopted as a dog by the navy.
I don't understand what the author thinks of Akainu
Do you hate Akainu when you meet him? Although Akainu can be regarded as obeying the orders of the Celestial Dragons, the essence is that he obeys not the Celestial Dragons but the military orders. The navy takes orders from the five old stars of the world government. Akainu is extremely militaristic, although I don't like it very much. But please write it carefully and don't get into the pirate level. There is no need to wash the straw hat. Pirates are not good or bad. What is the difference between thieves? Don't pull it to the top, Ace will not die without the Straw Hat on top. Not to mention that the protagonist is a fan of the Navy. Even if the Navy is a lackey, it will still be in the minority. More than 80% of the people in the world will only believe in the navy. While the pirates were burning, killing and looting, were they still kneeling down begging the "good pirates" Straw Hats to save them? A thief is a thief
Not recommended, not recommended, not approved
He was killed dozens of times by the navy, and then spoke black language, which was embarrassing. Then Garp decided to be a Navy dog as soon as he came here for a while. He was killed so many times and still treated like a dog. If you don't believe in evil, you can watch it.
I want to be a dog so much, I've been killed so many times, and yet I want to be a navy man
Tried poison, it hurts, but if you want to learn how to be a dog, you can watch it
I don't want to give it a single star. It's written based on the defense, and I have to buy chapters later. The author is just crazy about money.
Featured in 4 Booklists
Official(4)
Immortal protagonist, full-level overlord color, natural fruit, the best pirate fanfic in recent times, navy, highly recommended




I've always wanted to review a fanfic, and I just had to recommend it. The author of this book, The Wenhu General, had read the beginning. At that time, I felt that the author was very young and not suitable for me, so I gave up. After reading this book a few years ago, the author's writing style has obviously improved, and other standards are the same as a few years ago, which is maintained very well. My evaluation of online articles revolves around three aspects: writing style, characterization, and the core of the author's thoughts. The best thing about writing fan fiction is that you don't have to worry too much about character creation, just focus on the protagonist or a few original characters. Therefore, on the basis of passing writing skills, the core of the author's thoughts is a particularly important point in fan fiction. I think the most important thing about writing fan fiction is to have your own opinions. The right way is to delve deeply into the conflicts and inner feelings of the characters set in the original work. Therefore, when writing fan fiction, you have a feeling of worshiping the original work, and you substitute your likes and dislikes of the original characters into your own writing. That is the level of self-entertainment, not the level that a Qidian author should have. Specifically, there are two extremely prominent problems in distinguishing One Piece. One is Akainu who killed Ace, and the other is Momonosuke. For those who harbor great malice towards these two characters, the upper limit of their works cannot be higher, and of course no one can control them for their own entertainment. Take out sushi from Japanese restaurants, salmon (rainbow trout) sushi, mackerel (synthetic) sushi, cod (oil fish) sushi.




That year, the naval hero Lieutenant General Garp was so passionate that he chased Roger all over the world. That was also the year. Hit in the head by a rifle, bombarded by cannons, slit in the neck with a long knife, submerged in the nasal cavity by sea water, burned by fire, but never died, Xia Le became an unknown soldier beside Garp.


I have recommended so many completed pirate fanfics, and now I am recommending a new book, Seedlings, which has just been put on the shelves. The protagonist travels to the world of pirates and starts as a slave in the Shampoo Islands. Goldfinger is immortal and can gain points every time he dies. At the beginning, the male protagonist used his golden finger to kill the slave owner, and was later arrested and executed by the navy. After being rescued by Garp, the next step was to learn the skills from a master and then add dark blue points. Moreover, the male protagonist who had just obtained the panel chose to add all overlord colors, which is very interesting. This book has only been on the shelves not long ago. The author's combat plot is very good, especially in the early stage, he will take revenge and never wait overnight. He secretly kills the Celestial Dragons as soon as he has the ability. This is great. However, the author currently gives the protagonist a son who was born into the royal family of Alabasta, the son of Vivi's father, Cobra's younger brother. How should I put it, it's a bit embarrassing. Evaluation: This Pirates Seedling is very well written. Many of the other new Pirates fan books on my bookshelf were replaced not long after they were put on the shelves. It is obviously great, but it is a pity that it has become outdated. So I highly encourage this seedling, and I am willing to give it four and a half stars ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️☆














