Who Made Him the Pirate King?

After writing books for so many years, your level is still the same as in previous years. There is no evolution at all. The content and plot arrangement are the same as those of Tuo Shi. A few years ago, the plot setting of One Piece was not as rich as it is now, and you can still just mess around. Now that you are writing this thing, look at some of the well-written One Piece fan books. You are not a Shi. I want to have everything, I want everything, but I can't describe the outstanding part of each golden finger (fruit ability) well. Just like a novice author, everything is nondescript and there is no specific main line. The character creation and character strength are erratic. I really don't know how you got here in the past few years. There is no improvement at all.

Seize the vampire fruit and get the second generation Red Earl. This is no better than developing that nine-tailed fox fruit all the time.

Some people should not be blamed by the Celestial Dragons. Except for Kaido, they are all protective beings anyway, and there are still countries that can be destroyed. But without the Celestial Dragons being diligent and orderly, evil doings in an orderly manner are more serious than disorderly evil. The Heavenly Gold Envoy's participating countries were forced to attack non-joining countries, causing wars and causing citizens of non-joining countries to go to sea to become pirates. At the same time, they imposed heavy taxes on their own civilians, causing their own civilians to go to sea to become pirates. This led to a pirate rampage. At the same time, because of the gold in the sky, there can never be peace in the pirate world. Roger is because that country discriminates against his fishmen.

The more I watched, the more bored I became. I kept skipping chapters and only watched the climax, but I still couldn't watch anymore. What can I say?

The more I write, the worse it gets. It's okay to read without using your brain, but you can't read it with your brain.

What a batch after being put on the shelves! ! And the protagonist's purpose is unclear

The destruction of a country by the Celestial Dragons is different from the destruction of a country by the Four Emperors. If the Four Emperors conquer that country, they will be protected as long as they pay a protection fee, which can be understood as tax. Once you pay, they will really protect you. The money you pay is cheaper than gold from the sky. The Celestial Dragons will not even spare the babies and kill them all.

The first few chapters felt okay, but the next 21 chapters were awkward and awkward when using clay to pretend to be Whitebeard III.

The writing is getting worse and worse. I feel that the male protagonist has no position. I say kill the pirates, but not all of them. I say let the pirates go. Kill the ones who seem to have no problem, and let them go if they are evil. Being a navy is not good, and being a pirate is not good. After making a bunch of vests, I exposed myself first, and played the whole process by myself. One person said it was his own. The pirate group collects stamps, but they can't do it well. I obviously feel that the author has written erratically. If he writes randomly, it is bad.

It looks so confusing, especially the interspersed values ​​and views, which are completely unnecessary. It's better to portray the character better. The whole process is about killing, beating and collecting.