Dou Po: Xiao Yan is My Brother Galeo

At the beginning, 💩, it's a direct spoiler. I used Xiao Yan's fighting spirit to disappear and directly exchanged things with Xiao Xun'er. What did you think? He also said that he got it in a dream, hahaha, 💩 You didn't feed me like this. It's so stupid.

His character design is that of a pervert, and his IQ is worrisome. At the beginning, he said that strength is the main factor. If strength comes with a woman, the results will come. He forgot about it within two chapters. And he also found the original female to be the main skill? In the end, I asked for a rubbish skill, and it was a life-threatening one. Normally, I would just kill you. I don't know where the protagonist's confidence came from. If you went to school for the skill, you would have risked your life just to get it earlier. It's against the sky.

It doesn't look good. I feel like it's a waste of time after watching it.

Nalan Yanran is currently very popular, so she should be one of the heroines. There are also the Little Medical Fairy and Zi Yan. The little medical fairy must be from the main palace, because it takes a lot of effort to solve the evil body, and it's the first baby, ahem. If there are any shortcomings, I hope everyone can tell them and the author will listen to everyone's opinions.

No, you traveled through Galeo? , Ugly, fat and still old, I just want to ask how to write this

Although it's a bit licking, it's acceptable, but it's too short.

I really can't find any high-quality fan fiction, so I reluctantly took a look. If the author was writing about someone else, keeping a lower profile and seeking something, then I feel that this book could be better. But it's a pity that you are writing about Gallio. Everyone doesn't have a good impression of the Gallie family, so you still write about him? He was obsessed with women when he was sixteen or seventeen years old. Wasn't it just to become stronger when he traveled to another world? Isn't the original intention of fan fiction just to make up for some regrets in the original work? (Most authors travel to different worlds just to have a harem, so what's the point?) Do you also know that what you write is fan fiction? It is difficult to say that the book "Fights Break the Sphere" is excellent. It has many fans. There are also some regrets in the book. You can make up for these regrets by writing fan fiction. If you don't have a harem, you can have at most two wives (become friends with Xiao Yan, help each other, and achieve success together) Isn't Dou Di good? I don't think it's useful to target Xiao Yan, unless there is a life-or-death feud. If there is anything, let Xiao Yan take the lead and play support and fish for fun. Wouldn't it be more comfortable than this? ) If any of my friends read this comment, they want to write a book. , Please love me, I want to see

Let's see who is the most popular and decide who will be the heroine. Yun Yun and Medusa are not among them.

Very good, I finished watching it, the protagonist is lsp hahahahahaha

Not bad. Keep up the good work.