
Martial Spirit Skeleton, Boned into Susanoo in Douluo
by Lao Xue Has Three Pounds Of Belly
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The Blue Star people traveled through time and space in the Tang San period of Douluo Continent. Skeleton martial spirit, undead attribute. Without adding any power, the protagonist has mediocre qualifications. Relying solely on the various opportunities mentioned in the original work, he gradually became a genius, evolving the skeleton martial soul into the complete Susanoo body bit by bit, and finally achieved the status of a certain god.
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Official(146)Scraped 22d ago
Come on, author, you must finish the book. If you keep at it, someone will definitely read it.
I retreated and started to cut the protagonist.
The latest chapter is about something. The protagonist is experienced in many battles no matter how hard it is. Why is it that the protagonist is paralyzed and unable to move after being hit? Yu Tianheng was still able to move and run even after being hit. Moreover, the protagonist's fight with Yu Tianheng was completely different from the previous fight with Dugu Yan. They didn't look like the same person at all, and they didn't look like they had an online IQ. When fighting Yu Tianheng, what is the protagonist's IQ? It's impossible for the protagonist not to know about Yu Tianheng's soul skills, but even under such circumstances, the protagonist is still the first to be hit. Isn't this proper differential treatment?
The protagonist's martial spirit is called Susanoo, and when it is fully developed, it will be called the first god's power Susanoo. After that, it is enough to set the second god's power and the third god's power. The other two god's powers can be transformed into companion artifacts of the martial spirit using the attached soul bones. Just like Uchiha Itachi's artifact, the Eight-foot Mirror, the ice and fire eyes have two attributes. With two more attached soul bones, you can create two divine weapons with ultimate attributes. One can create a bow of ultimate ice, and one can create a spear of ultimate fire. The name of the gun will be the Spear of Sunshine, or the Spear of Thunder. Anyway, it just needs to be as handsome as Dilna's gun. This is the setting I have come up with for you. It's up to you whether to use it or how to use it.
I have mistakenly thought about the efficacy of fairy herbs. Earth Dragon Pumpkin should have a certain chance of evolving the dragon bloodline martial soul. What does it become a poisonous sac and my brain is twitching? Furthermore, the toxins haven't been resolved yet. If you give someone some grass jelly, your brain will go crazy? People's bodies have been eroded by toxins for so many years. Don't you understand why the body is weak and cannot be replenished? I suggest you read more of the next book called (Douluo was struck by lightning at the beginning) which is at least much better than the one you wrote about Dugu Bo Medicine Garden!
The protagonist's skeleton martial spirit will grow into a skinny and bones-like shape like Gu Rong.
There are no big poisons, but there are really too many small poisons, especially the emotional line. If you don't know how to write a love story, why don't you create a single female protagonist or no female protagonist? The protagonist is written like a licking dog, licking Dugu Bo and Dugu Yan in the front, and Qian Renxue in the back. Is it true that you really can't lick a woman? You have to do this in the book. If you don't read the book yourself, you will disgust the readers. There are so many annoying comments in the comment area and they still haven't been corrected. You deserve not to be a novel author. Starve to death soon and go to the factory to drive screws.
Are there no skills in Chinese fantasy novels? You must like the skills of the Japanese devils and what are the names of the Japanese devils? There are so many Douluo
What is Bones Susanoo? Do you need to know the content of another novel to read this novel? Are you sure it's not a bundled sale? I still didn't know how to write it, so I used characters from other works and put them in Douluo Continent. When something was unclear, I asked the readers to read another novel. I didn't know what the protagonist's martial spirit was from the beginning to the end. The teacher said it was the same as Uchiha. I didn't know this character at all. I was confused. I either couldn't stand it, or if I knew Uchiha, I probably knew the development of the story behind it. I copied everything, and there was no suspense at all...
The protagonist tortured Tang Hao's son, snatched Tang Hao's wife, crushed Tang Hao's bones and raised ashes, and even enslaved Tang Hao's soul. With such deep hatred, why did he still call Tang Hao sincerely and respectfully after resurrecting and enslaving Tang Hao: "Senior"? I just don't understand. Now that you have enslaved Tang Hao, how can you pretend to respect him? Shouldn't you be bossing around? Hypocrite behavior? Disgusting people?
Can you add Zhu Zhuqing , a heroine who is so good-looking but not my favorite?
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Official(146)Scraped 22d ago
Come on, author, you must finish the book. If you keep at it, someone will definitely read it.
I retreated and started to cut the protagonist.
The latest chapter is about something. The protagonist is experienced in many battles no matter how hard it is. Why is it that the protagonist is paralyzed and unable to move after being hit? Yu Tianheng was still able to move and run even after being hit. Moreover, the protagonist's fight with Yu Tianheng was completely different from the previous fight with Dugu Yan. They didn't look like the same person at all, and they didn't look like they had an online IQ. When fighting Yu Tianheng, what is the protagonist's IQ? It's impossible for the protagonist not to know about Yu Tianheng's soul skills, but even under such circumstances, the protagonist is still the first to be hit. Isn't this proper differential treatment?
The protagonist's martial spirit is called Susanoo, and when it is fully developed, it will be called the first god's power Susanoo. After that, it is enough to set the second god's power and the third god's power. The other two god's powers can be transformed into companion artifacts of the martial spirit using the attached soul bones. Just like Uchiha Itachi's artifact, the Eight-foot Mirror, the ice and fire eyes have two attributes. With two more attached soul bones, you can create two divine weapons with ultimate attributes. One can create a bow of ultimate ice, and one can create a spear of ultimate fire. The name of the gun will be the Spear of Sunshine, or the Spear of Thunder. Anyway, it just needs to be as handsome as Dilna's gun. This is the setting I have come up with for you. It's up to you whether to use it or how to use it.
I have mistakenly thought about the efficacy of fairy herbs. Earth Dragon Pumpkin should have a certain chance of evolving the dragon bloodline martial soul. What does it become a poisonous sac and my brain is twitching? Furthermore, the toxins haven't been resolved yet. If you give someone some grass jelly, your brain will go crazy? People's bodies have been eroded by toxins for so many years. Don't you understand why the body is weak and cannot be replenished? I suggest you read more of the next book called (Douluo was struck by lightning at the beginning) which is at least much better than the one you wrote about Dugu Bo Medicine Garden!
The protagonist's skeleton martial spirit will grow into a skinny and bones-like shape like Gu Rong.
There are no big poisons, but there are really too many small poisons, especially the emotional line. If you don't know how to write a love story, why don't you create a single female protagonist or no female protagonist? The protagonist is written like a licking dog, licking Dugu Bo and Dugu Yan in the front, and Qian Renxue in the back. Is it true that you really can't lick a woman? You have to do this in the book. If you don't read the book yourself, you will disgust the readers. There are so many annoying comments in the comment area and they still haven't been corrected. You deserve not to be a novel author. Starve to death soon and go to the factory to drive screws.
Are there no skills in Chinese fantasy novels? You must like the skills of the Japanese devils and what are the names of the Japanese devils? There are so many Douluo
What is Bones Susanoo? Do you need to know the content of another novel to read this novel? Are you sure it's not a bundled sale? I still didn't know how to write it, so I used characters from other works and put them in Douluo Continent. When something was unclear, I asked the readers to read another novel. I didn't know what the protagonist's martial spirit was from the beginning to the end. The teacher said it was the same as Uchiha. I didn't know this character at all. I was confused. I either couldn't stand it, or if I knew Uchiha, I probably knew the development of the story behind it. I copied everything, and there was no suspense at all...
The protagonist tortured Tang Hao's son, snatched Tang Hao's wife, crushed Tang Hao's bones and raised ashes, and even enslaved Tang Hao's soul. With such deep hatred, why did he still call Tang Hao sincerely and respectfully after resurrecting and enslaving Tang Hao: "Senior"? I just don't understand. Now that you have enslaved Tang Hao, how can you pretend to respect him? Shouldn't you be bossing around? Hypocrite behavior? Disgusting people?
Can you add Zhu Zhuqing , a heroine who is so good-looking but not my favorite?











