People Are Fighting for Defeat, and They Are Expected to Become Emperors in Advance

After analyzing the two main reasons for most negative reviews: First, he did not act like a dog to Xiao Yan and robbed Xiao Yan of his opportunity. Second, the protagonist is not a human teddy, and he does not see the previous one.

There are two types of writing fan fiction, one is to destroy the plot, and the other is to respect the plot appropriately and make some surprising changes based on the original plot. This one is obviously a major change, somewhere in between. The author has to think carefully, writing like this will easily attract abuse from some fans of the original work. This is something that is simply unavoidable. After all, you are eating the traffic of fans of the original work, but you do not have enough respect for the works and characters of the original work. At the most small level, it is to create a sense of difference. In order to make money, there is nothing to say. After all, differences can make you feel happy. To put it more broadly, it means disrespecting the hard work of the original author, destroying the characters of the original work, and treating the characters that were carefully created in the original work as a wanton destruction. This approach is actually quite hateful. The more famous one is a certain third, who has the kind of attitude of taking over his job and scolding his mother, so there are still some problems. After all, if the male protagonist of a fanfic has a bad personality, that's okay, but if it's a positive male protagonist, then the backlash from fans of the original work must be taken into account if it destroys the trajectory of the original work. For example, Xiao Yan in "Anti-Inflammation" and "Fighter" has had ups and downs along the way, but overall he is still a positive character, and can be regarded as affectionate and meaningful. If a protagonist like this is deliberately suppressed for the sake of pretending to be the protagonist in the work, it is normal for others to scold him. There are actually quite a few novels of this kind, but those novels are mostly those that travel through many worlds. They just write about many worlds. It doesn't matter. If you don't like one world, you can change it to the next one. But if you are writing a fanfic of a novel, you have to consider the fans of the original work. After all, those fans who enjoy watching Doupo are obviously Xiao Yan's people. If you reduce inflammation and eat too much at this time, you will feel very unhappy. If you want more people to accept it, you should avoid it as much as possible. Of course, there are also some who ruin the original work, relying on stepping on this and that, or else they are crazy about recruiting women and writing about harems, just to get a wave of fast traffic. If you want to write like that, just pretend that I didn't say it. But if you want to write for a long time, you must consider the scale of anti-inflammatory. Not getting close is a given. If everything is arranged in place, it will give most people the feeling of being a licking dog, which is not a good thing. But it's impossible not to get in touch with it. After all, you are writing a fanfic, and the protagonist must appear. Therefore, at this time, it is more difficult to not deliberately show off in front of the protagonist. Of course, I believe the author can handle it if he writes this way. My suggestion is to create a gap. The gap between the protagonist and Xiao Yan. The relationship can be someone else's child in Xiao Yan's eyes, or some seniors who have hidden identities. They are neither far nor close. Keep an appropriate distance, and then write something new based on yourself.

The first part is fine, I think the logic at least makes sense, but I think the part about Fallen Heart Flame is too outrageous. I have never seen two of the same people who sent them to school, not even one of them. Firstly, the fiancée needs strange fire to practice Burning Art, and secondly, Fallen Heart Flame practices a cheating device. The most outrageous thing is that the author also tried to explain, meaning that now he knows the location of many strange fires, so it doesn't matter. This is like you making a monthly salary of 20,000 and suddenly deciding to donate 500,000 to your junior high school for free. It's not that there are no such people, but it is really outrageous. What's more important is that in the later transaction with Huohuo, he specifically agreed that he could only give Huohuo the remote information about the strange fires he had obtained, and it was even more incomprehensible as to why he sent out two already obtained strange fires.

I think author, you should revise it. Ice Emperor points out the advance payment of this technique to help Hai Bodong unlock the seal. You actually still want to break the seal, become a disciple, and join Miter. Doing so much, don't you feel a little nauseous?

The writing was very good at the beginning, but then it fell apart. The content was too watery. I had to take three days off every day. The word count was still too low. It became increasingly unsatisfactory. I was sorry for my expectations and my money. I wanted to give it one or two stars, but I didn't think it was necessary. Maybe something happened, maybe I had troubles in life and I didn't have the heart to write. At least the beginning was good. I'll give you five stars for holding back my anger. To be honest, I won't wrong you even one star for the next 60 or 70 chapters. What the hell did you write?

Author, can't you make up for the advance? Such an abrupt and jerky reason to switch to the old Fen Jue? It just makes me embarrassed. I guess most readers are too. You can't think about it before writing, it's too random You have to know why Yao Lao asked Xiao Yan to practice the Burning Technique In your setting, Xiao Yan hasn't absorbed it yet, and he can't even see the hope of resurrection. Isn't it enough to provide conditions to help Yao Lao resurrect (materials provided by the protagonist) For Douzong's corpse, the seventh-level essence and blood are easy to obtain. There is also a bone-melting blood elixir that the Cao family can obtain. Can you use your brain? If Yao Lao is resurrected, whether it is the restoration of strength or status, the resources provided to Xiao Yan will also soar. In a short period of time, many things in the early stage can be changed, and strange fires can be quickly collected to help Xiao Yan grow. And it doesn't conflict with the protagonist's plan. After all, Cao Ying has already taken the lead. What did you write as a result?

Everything else is fine, but there are two drawbacks. The first is to arrange for Cao Ying to practice the incomplete burning technique. Re-cultivating the Burning Technique requires dispersing energy, and every time you swallow the strange fire, you will escape death. Without the protagonist's luck, others would be seeking death, let alone the incomplete Burning Technique. The second is the engagement with Cao Ying. The protagonist used Xun'er's influence to make a deal with the Cao family, but the deal turned out to be a marriage with Cao Ying. None of Phoenix Man is as good as the main character.

Yunshan: Why don't you say that you are a Douzong, and he is the Douwang? Then let me ask you, did I, the Douzong, cultivate myself? Is it because of cultivation? If I take medicine, can I be better than a person who practices serious cultivation? Answer me! Can you beat it? Um? You answer me! Those of you who say Dou Wang is easy to fight, answer me! Look in my eyes, Tell me why? Why baby why? He beat Dou Huang Furukawa with one blow and one punch. He had the Buddha's Furious Lotus and the Three Mysterious Transformations of Heavenly Fire, and there were several kinds of strange fires. Which one didn't exceed the standard? Can I beat him? Come on, you are a Dou Zong, so let me ask you again, do you dare to fight the fire lotus he made from three kinds of flames? Answer me! He sent the three-color fire lotus towards my face. Can I catch it? That kind of missile is shooting at me, huh? Can you survive? Oh, no, no, I'll pinch you******************

Why is it always written that the protagonist needs ice-type talents to advance? Just make a few puppets that specialize in absorbing ice energy. The puppets absorb the ice fighting energy in the world. You can absorb the fighting spirit of the puppets to break through, or you can make a spirit gathering array or other formations to gather a treasure land suitable for ice training in an extremely cold place. It's not like Doupo doesn't have formations. Isn't the most famous Yunyan Destruction Formation just a formation? Ice-type heavenly materials and earthly treasures are set to be treasures with a hint of ice-type laws. Otherwise, I think your head hurts when you think of ice-type heavenly materials and earthly treasures.

I'm really speechless. You don't have to be so weak in combat power. Ziyan is half a ton, and even a stone is so surprising. I'm really convinced of the fantasy world. What you wrote has brought it down. Moreover, you have intersections with any woman, including Xiao Yan's women, and you also tried hard not to let Xiaoyan get close to them. Oh, I'm really convinced.