Mortal: from the Human World to the Fairy World

When I was young, I was good at chess and was famous in the countryside. Everyone is called a child prodigy. When I was a little older, I met an old Taoist in the mountains. After three days of playing chess, I finally won. The old Taoist was willing to admit defeat and used magic to reach the sky and escape from the earth. I was fascinated by it, so I gave up chess and practiced Taoism. However, my talent was average. I just wanted to work hard and study hard. I did not hesitate to live far away from my family, abandon my lover, abandon my friends, and wander around the world with no ties. I went through many dangerous situations and lived in poverty for half my life. Only when I got older did I have a stable place. , It's a pity that time is running out, I often think about it recently, a hundred years of life, a day of mayflies, how can I live forever, but I am in the cage again, it is not as good as two or three friends playing chess and drinking, a good couple, hand in hand in the world, a hundred years of glory, and dying together. However, my heart will never change, even if I waste my life, I still want to fight for that glimmer of hope, because I know from a young age that life is like a chess game, and I have no regrets about my moves!

I can only say that the first 70 pictures looked okay, but starting with 70 pictures, Han Li went to work as a nanny and looked boring. From my own perspective, if you read Mortal Fans, what you see is that the time traveler knows the plot. How will it develop? Instead of going to see a nanny. I've watched a lot of mortals, and I feel that the best ones are mortals cultivating immortals, starting with a casual cultivator I don't know what's going on with you, but you suddenly decided to become Han Li's babysitter just because you wrote it down. It's no longer interesting for me to watch it later. Moreover, he has been cultivating the world of immortality in the Yue Kingdom, and he did not go to Chaos Xinghai, but just went there.

It's too slow. The author's writing is indeed good, but this is writing about "fans", not originality. It's too slow, more than 200 chapters and there's still no Nascent Soul. After the Nascent Soul, I can write at least more than 100 chapters on the human world, and then there is the spiritual world. There are so many realms in the spiritual world, and after I finish writing, there is the fairy world. I am getting tired from reading it at this speed. If the fanfics are relatively few, it is actually quite interesting to watch. For example, the fanfics about casual cultivators, scientific cultivators, demonic cultivators and other mortal cultivators that I read earlier are also very long. If you read too many of them, it will be boring. I keep writing about the same thing, but some things should be speeded up and just written in abbreviation.

Since it was put on the shelves, I have written 💩, I am still cultivating immortality, go home and hold the baby

A very thoughtful book, one of the best among fan fiction. When you travel to the mortal world, as long as you don't grab the Sky Bottle, you will lose half of the readers, and if you do, you will lose half of it. Unless your plug-in is big enough, you don't care about that small bottle at all. In other words, it can completely make up for the lack of that small bottle. Even if there is no little green bottle, it will not affect your cultivation of immortality. The overall content idea is very unique, and it is a pretty good fanfic worth reading.

Is there a female protagonist? Who is there? It can't be eunuch Wen, right? If possible, I hope that the protagonist and the heroine will be Taoist companions on the road to immortality together. The protagonist helps them plan their exercises and gives them training resources, elixirs, etc. They are also loyal to the protagonist and are smart people. I know that the protagonist has a great opportunity, but I never ask for it. There is a mortal fanfic written in the same way. I feel like this is pretty good. Mainly it depends on the protagonist taking drugs and leveling up alone. Fighting monsters alone is boring. It's better to use the heroines to describe more of the techniques. And magic weapon. For example, arrange special skills and magic weapons for them to better help the protagonist. It also looks more interesting. For example, magic weapon materials for the protagonists and heroines. Medicinal materials, the protagonist goes treasure hunting with them, and plans together. The protagonist and heroine can open a shop. Collect and sell at the same time. That's okay, this book is also a fine piece of mortal fan fiction. The protagonist of this book is not like the protagonists of other books. When he kills someone or someone else kills him, he is self-righteous. He can kill others. It is his honor and he will be respected by heaven and earth in the future. When someone kills him, they just scold him and say how dare he deserve it? Hateful! Like a fool. No, it's the same as **. It's disgusting to watch. Just ask them if there are no plug-ins written by the author. **Doesn't count. Like a **.

Haha, because I am the author, full marks!

I have read 350 chapters so far, and I would like to talk about my favorite points and awkward points. First of all, there are no big surprises in the whole story. The protagonist has a distinct personality. The plug-ins provided by the author are based on the original setting, which is also reasonable. The protagonist's growth experience is also very rich, and the detailed description is very exciting. The article describes that the protagonist is a person who owes a lot of kindness, but he also understands that there are differences between immortals and mortals, and there are degrees of choice. , The awkward point is that there are few new ideas. The main character's skill is also Qingyuan Sword Technique, and he also has a sky bottle. His natal magic weapon is also Qingzhu Bee Cloud Sword. The extra mirror is equivalent to an advanced version of the Qi Condensation Technique. Han Li also plays a considerable role in the description in the later chapters. It seems that it is a copycat of the original work. Although there are new ideas, there are not many. Overall, it is a novel worth reading.

I read another paragraph. I was a little confused at the beginning, mainly about the part about acquiring skills among mortals. The rest is a very well-written novel about cultivating immortals. The main reason is that reading other parts is as uncomfortable as eating shit, such as Xiao Yan crossing Han Li, and intercepting Hu Xin Ruyin at the beginning, etc. It can be read to pass the time, but it is very bad for raising children. This book is very good, with an overall score of about 9 points (about four stars), which is considered food and grass. The score feels low.

It's so funny🤣, I brought out all my major skills. This is how serious the dog licking constitution is. He actually licked Linghu.