Hogwarts Blood Wizard

After reading the introduction, I thought the protagonist had the ability to continuously fuse bloodlines to gain abilities. But I thought more and found out that it relies on potions. Moreover, I saw that chapter 76 only fused unicorns into one kind. Then I exited and looked at the chapter names... At present, chapter 198 still only fuses unicorns... I still don't read it.

As far as I'm concerned, this book is pretty good among HP fanfics. Come on, author. I vote for recommendations every day. I hope it doesn't become a eunuch.

After reading more than 500 chapters, the protagonist feels too separated. Different maps are completely different, just like many different stories of the protagonists put together. For example, I developed wolfsbane potion during the holidays and won the Merlin Level 2 Medal, becoming a master of potions. However, when school started, I was considered a third-year student and did not have very good potion skills. In the Prisoner Chapter, he single-handedly wiped out hundreds of soul-eating monsters, defeated the professor's invincible hand, and tortured Sirius. He was basically inferior to Lao Deng in the school. As a result, when the pendant incident happened and they went to Black's old house during the holidays, Lupine and Black thought that the protagonist was still a junior student and not capable enough to follow them? ? ? He returned to Knockturn Alley with the Merlin First Class Medal, which is only 7 in the entire magical world, and became an underground godfather, killing decisively. At this time, the opposing pure-blood family couldn't recognize the protagonist and thought he was just a student. ? ? After integrating the underground world, he had the aura of a godfather, but then he turned into a good student and went to learn alchemy from Nicolas Flamel... It seemed really outrageous.

The writing and plot of this book are quite good. I have been a bookworm for more than ten years, and I don't seem to be confused at all. But I felt uncomfortable when I saw the author saying that Hermione, the single heroine, is clearly more suitable for Hals than Hermione in terms of personality, behavior, way of thinking, and appearance. She even tried to comfort Hals when he was emotionally impetuous several times, while Hermione was just showing off her temper throughout the whole story. Later, I saw that Hermione I got crazy and wanted to give up the book several times. By about chapter 500, I was completely disgusted with Hermione in the text. I saw that relevant plots began to be skipped in large chunks. The text showed that Hermione was extremely self-centered and the eldest lady had a self-righteous temper. It was completely incomparable with Luna's detachment, understanding, and rapport with others. Except for the choice of the heroine, everything else can be said to be a wonderful novel.

There are a few flaws 1. First of all, the Dumbledore family signed a contract with the Phoenix. The contract is for mutual help. 2. The settings of the phoenix creature in Harry Potter are not very detailed, but there are still a few settings that increase the immortality, and you can feel the people with ulterior motives. 3. Your love line is really poorly written. The one who knows the heroine is Hermione, and those who don't know think it's Luna. 4. Dumbledore has the Order of the Phoenix, Grindelwald has the wizard army, Voldemort has the Death Eaters, how come Ivan has so many people and doesn't even have a name? 5. How many days has it been since Goblet of Fire was released and the plot has not started yet?

For example, someone mentioned that the relationship between the protagonist and his mother and the reaction to the shock after her death were too heavy and abrupt. Furthermore, the protagonist also lost his mind several times. For example, when he was inspired by Sirius's nagging, he suddenly confirmed it with his hair. Later, he added that he did not dare to confirm before for fear of forming a closed loop and becoming a dead knot. This is embarrassing. Without any psychological struggle, it is reckless (the protagonist in this plot lacks the psychological activities of struggle, struggle and fear). It is really unwise for the protagonist to consider, after all, we are not the bystanders. Reader, it is also very abrupt to rescue people. It is obvious that the medicine has not been prepared, and it has not been tested yet, and it is so rough that the reversal process after the beginning shows no plan or intelligence. It is completely headless. Damn, this is completely contrary to the protagonist's past careful planning and self-planning in advance. What's more, such an important matter has been repeatedly manipulated like this on some key nodes. It is still very abrupt, without any foreshadowing or thinking process. The description of the activities, especially the emphasis on reversal of time that cannot be changed (confirmed) is just to complete this core, which is completely abandoned by the protagonist. Although the author is in control and has other plot needs to consider, so it will not collapse, but the protagonist's dedication to this can be said to be a collapse of the character. He obviously cares about saving people, but he just does it without confirming the experiment. The performance in the process is completely different from the previously emphasized core that cannot be changed. It is only completed by the author's various arrangements. See It seems to be a good choice, but it is actually a bad choice. It can be said that it completely reverses and collapses the character creation of the protagonist, and it does not show the charm of the protagonist. It is just round and round, and it is not good to follow the round shape, but it is actually not conducive to the charm of the protagonist... I saw the protagonist at the station being entangled and was reminded by Hermione, so I don't mention the later. I also know that there must be other arrangements later, and Hermione must be rounded out after all. After all, I suggested that the author made some crazy operations in the plot that were not conducive to the character creation of the protagonist. It is also related to this aspect. It is certain that there are other arrangements. There are also arrangements to mention the higher-level protagonist's operations in Hermione's actions in the plot. I will not mention them later. But to be honest, these arrangements are good, but they are really not conducive to the character of the protagonist. If you think about how the protagonist has behaved in the past, the arrangements and plans are chic and cautious. The variables in the specific implementation are also to create the ups and downs of the plot and create a sense of realism. I have to say that the author has great skills. Yes, but the mother part is really too abrupt. In the reversal plot, the protagonist is reckless and makes some low-level mistakes. The performance is completely devoid of wisdom. It is all arranged by the author and lacks the charm of the previous character. It is even confirmed that the mother is fine and can be reversed. As long as she relies on herself to follow the guessed operations, she will be fine. After that, her mental activities are like a poor insect's uneasiness from time to time (these aspects correspond to the previous ones. Superfluous descriptions of psychological activities, at least entangled things should not be done) Yes, after all, the main point is to complete and adapt. What are you struggling with now? It was clear early on that change would not work. Especially based on various existing facts and information, it was already guessed and determined that the future self was basically successful. It is really not right to continue to struggle with change. It shows the sudden vulnerability and instability of the protagonist. Indeed, this is the plot arrangement chosen by the author, which is a normal manifestation of the plot arrangement that makes the protagonist lack flexibility and coherent planning. It is very true. But it contradicts the previous character arrangement of the protagonist, the character design has a huge impact), and the reversal mentioned by the author is the core of the completion, and the arrangement, Hermione said, reminds the protagonist that he still has no spirituality. Just those few points, mother, the battle in the store. Fighting, the disappearance of the werewolf (and the follow-up mastermind), the abnormality of the guy who has a crush on the protagonist's mother... To sum up, this trend is that the circle is OK, but the impact on the protagonist's shaping and character charm is really not small, so I really signed it! ! I have said it very cryptically, and I feel that I have not spoiled the plot process very much. There is really no way to spoil the main characters required for the plot. After all, it is precisely because of the need for the arrangement of these characters that the character charm of the protagonist is affected. I have to mention it! ! Please be merciful to the author and don't delete the post! ! !

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