Mortal: I, Become a Disciple of Old Demon Han

Mortal: I, Become a Disciple of Old Demon Han

by Headmaster Of Ravenclaw

Length:
651Kwords287chapters
Latest:
Ch. 287Conquer the Purple Electric Pheasant
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7.6QD Score

About This Novel

Lin Fan unexpectedly came to the mortal world with a carefree and incomplete market system. How could he, with five spiritual roots, gain a foothold in the colorful and deceitful world of cultivating immortals? Become a disciple of Han Li, change the fate of everyone in the original work, join the Yun Sect, and establish the largest chamber of commerce in the Tiannan Continent... Others earned spiritual stones by refining weapons, elixirs, and forming formations. Lin Fan relied on his master Han Li and the Yi Nian Xiaoyao System to monopolize the supplies of the immortal world, and finally ascended to the spiritual world. ...

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Through Trouble Respects the Original Setting44mo ago

I hope the author can avoid the mindless way of writing biographies of mortals cultivating immortality.

Is it useful to argue with me? There are three rules for seizing bodies: 1. You cannot seize the bodies of mortals, 2. You can only seize the bodies of those whose cultivation level is lower than yourself, 3. Due to soul problems, you can only seize the bodies once. If you have the conditions, you won't seize his body. Don't tell me that he is a good person and can't bear to seize his body. If you say that, I can only say that you are also a brainless person. First of all, time travel in fan fiction is itself a matter of rebirth! From a world without supernatural powers, he was reborn in a different world. Since everyone likes time-travel novels as much as I do, that in itself means that you don't reject time-travel fan novels in the first place. So what's wrong with the lack of talent and being too slow to practice again?

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Through Trouble Respects the Original Setting44mo ago

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When I read Mortals' Cultivation of Immortality, I felt that some of the author's settings were quite unintelligent, and his qualifications were quite poor, but I just wouldn't give up and be reborn! Hey, I won't take my body and be reborn! Slowly improving is just fun! It's okay to kill people and seize treasures at every turn, but to seize bodies and be reborn? I won't do it!

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Lifelong Learning42mo ago

Not good, not good, not good.

I don't know why you opened a new book, and I don't know if it will be deleted, but why did you become a eunuch in your last book? I haven't read this one yet, so I gave it one star just to see if you could go back to the previous book and start this new one, Eunuch.

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Through Trouble Respects the Original Setting44mo ago

spiritual root

The spiritual root is the straw. The worse the qualifications, the smaller the straw. Let's change the body. It's best to choose someone who is handsome and has good qualifications. That would be very nice. If you can't find someone who is too handsome, just have good qualifications. Feel the feeling of sucking spiritual energy through a big straw~

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Invincible on Water43mo ago

Not consistent with the original work

Spiritual elixirs are very expensive among mortals. Thousand-year-old elixirs are only used by Yuanying Ancestor. How could there be only 2,000 or 3,000 spirit stones? 20,000 Or 30,000 are too few.

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Little Black Bobby42mo ago

How much money will Yi Nian Xiao Yao give you? I will give you double it from Dao Tian Lu🐶

I haven't read it yet, I'll test the poison first and let you know when I get back.

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Marson_ad42mo ago

In the first few chapters, the character of the protagonist is really not that good... You abandoned your only family member, your brother, in order to cultivate immortality. Fortunately, you traveled through time in the modern era, and your values ​​​​are not as good as those in ancient times. You also plan to become Han Li's disciple. With this kind of character, he accepts you as his apprentice. This is all due to the halo of the protagonist. Will he accept a person who abandons his companions for himself? Han Li's Sky Palm Bottle is so good as the protagonist's system. Wouldn't you give it to your brother to use?

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Death of Shennong41mo ago

he replied

I would like to ask Han Laomo, who is also a time-travelling party. Your IQ is not bad at all. It is impossible that he will not find out that you are a time-traveling party. To be honest, you are not a great author who wrote the story of mortals cultivating immortality. Don't write the protagonist to be smarter than the protagonist of the story of mortals cultivating immortality.

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Rabbit Headed Bandit42mo ago

After reading so many mortal fanfics, this novel is the only one I find good.

Generally speaking, the plot is quite good, but some aspects are too deliberate. For example, I always encounter that person named Huang, deliberately looking for conflict points. Please hurry up and let the person named Huang be killed by the evil cultivator. I am annoyed when I see this plot.

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Book Friends 2023060617220342mo ago

With such a low level of cultivation, you still dare to be promiscuous

I don't understand, why don't you improve your cultivation level before going out?

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