Atun's Book Review
阿吞的书评
I feel that the books in the current rankings are still mixed. Sometimes I want to read a few books and read them. With the intention of not reading them in vain, I will evaluate the books I have read when I have nothing to do. They are just personal opinions. I write them casually without careful consideration. As long as the evaluation I write can pass the review.
1苟成圣人,仙官召我养马
Let Me Laugh
As a servant, Gu An accidentally broke a jar of spiritual flowers when he was young. When he was panicking, he discovered that he had actually lost twelve years of life! A road to immortality is now unfolding before Gu An's eyes! In order to cultivate immortality stably, Gu An chose to become a handyman disciple of Taixuan Sect, planting medicinal herbs every day to take away the lifespan of the medicinal herbs for cultivation. Through the evolution of his lifespan, his basic skills continue to evolve, from basic skills to supernatural powers! Era changes, stars change, and the world changes. The legend of immortals gradually began to appear in the world. Gu An, known as the Immortal, spent half of his life to help him cross the limit of the Immortal Way, attain the realm of a Saint, and be superior to the Way of Heaven. However, one day, an old man in white with a fairy-like demeanor came to visit Gu An. "Pindao is the Xuanqing Star Lord in the sky. Emperor Taihao heard that fellow Taoist has done many good deeds in the world and saved all sentient beings many times. His merits are immeasurable. He specially sent Pindao to the lower realm to summon fellow Taoist to join the immortal class and hold the position of immortal, the official of the divine horse." "May I ask what the position of the official of the divine horse is?" "There are divine horses in heaven, which can cross heaven and earth and escape into Yin and Yang. The official of the divine horse is responsible for taking care of and feeding these divine horses." Huh? Raising horses?
As a servant, Gu An accidentally broke a jar of spiritual flowers when he was young. When he was panicking, he discovered that he had actually lost twelve years of life! A road to immortality is now unfolding before Gu An's eyes! In order to cultivate immortality stably, Gu An chose to become a handyman disciple of Taixuan Sect, planting medicinal herbs every day to take away the lifespan of the medicinal herbs for cultivation. Through the evolution of his lifespan, his basic skills continue to evolve, from basic skills to supernatural powers! Era changes, stars change, and the world changes. The legend of immortals gradually began to appear in the world. Gu An, known as the Immortal, spent half of his life to help him cross the limit of the Immortal Way, attain the realm of a Saint, and be superior to the Way of Heaven. However, one day, an old man in white with a fairy-like demeanor came to visit Gu An. "Pindao is the Xuanqing Star Lord in the sky. Emperor Taihao heard that fellow Taoist has done many good deeds in the world and saved all sentient beings many times. His merits are immeasurable. He specially sent Pindao to the lower realm to summon fellow Taoist to join the immortal class and hold the position of immortal, the official of the divine horse." "May I ask what the position of the official of the divine horse is?" "There are divine horses in heaven, which can cross heaven and earth and escape into Yin and Yang. The official of the divine horse is responsible for taking care of and feeding these divine horses." Huh? Raising horses?
The rhythm and writing are both good, and it seems quite comfortable. The problem is that the golden finger is opened a bit too wide, which causes the numerical value to expand too fast. In order to write more, the author can only keep adding realms and nesting dolls, which leads to aesthetic fatigue in the later period. In fact, I don't dislike this kind of invincible flow, but I suggest that this kind of golden finger should be slightly more restrictive, and the overall plot should have a big goal or a designed hidden line to make the whole book coherent, without such a heavy matryoshka feeling (write an outline)
2提前登陆五百年,我靠挖宝成神
Ultimate Eternity
The supernatural era has arrived, rules have changed, mystery has arrived, and the world has changed. Countless civilization relics have emerged in the world, and massive natural materials and treasures are waiting for people to pick them up. Radicals: "This is the best of times. Enter the new world, excavate ruins, and evolve for all!" Conservatives: "This is the worst of times. There are countless monsters outside. Once we leave the safe zone, only destruction awaits mankind!"... At this time, located in a distant ruins, Lu Yuan successfully dug up new treasures, found mysterious wealth, and desperately wanted to contact his fellow earthlings. "I picked up a communicator, can I contact you?" "Hey, humans - I'm almost a god, are you still hiding in the safe zone?"... (Original title: "A Thousand Years Ahead of Humanity") (This book is also known as "I Pick Up Trash in the New World", "All Humans Are Not Richer Than I Am", "One Person is a Civilization", "Please Call Me Human Pioneer", "I am the Strongest Pioneer", etc.!)
The supernatural era has arrived, rules have changed, mystery has arrived, and the world has changed. Countless civilization relics have emerged in the world, and massive natural materials and treasures are waiting for people to pick them up. Radicals: "This is the best of times. Enter the new world, excavate ruins, and evolve for all!" Conservatives: "This is the worst of times. There are countless monsters outside. Once we leave the safe zone, only destruction awaits mankind!"... At this time, located in a distant ruins, Lu Yuan successfully dug up new treasures, found mysterious wealth, and desperately wanted to contact his fellow earthlings. "I picked up a communicator, can I contact you?" "Hey, humans - I'm almost a god, are you still hiding in the safe zone?"... (Original title: "A Thousand Years Ahead of Humanity") (This book is also known as "I Pick Up Trash in the New World", "All Humans Are Not Richer Than I Am", "One Person is a Civilization", "Please Call Me Human Pioneer", "I am the Strongest Pioneer", etc.!)
At first glance, I felt that the setting was too complicated, but after reading it, it has a unique flavor. In general, the author's writing style is solid, the description and emotional rendering are in place, and the setting of this book is more coherent than the previous one. (The previous book felt like a different one after I saw Return to Earth, and I couldn't stand it anymore)
3这是修仙游戏,但运营烂了
I Don't Know Bai Ye
When Jiang Liu woke up, he found that he had traveled to a parallel world, and a game called "Era of Immortal Cultivation" was about to arrive. The earth is transformed into immortality! Combining game characters with reality! The era of universal cultivation of immortality is coming! The game has a lot of free content, including but not limited to: open world exploration, main storyline, Tower of Babel, rankings, arena, and exciting activities. The game has a lot of krypton gold content, including but not limited to: recharging 648 to get big-winged luxury fashion, limited card pools to draw max sword spiritual roots and the ultimate immortal body, investing in spiritual stones to obtain perfect foundation building and nine-turn golden elixir, VIP5 unlocking one-click idle cultivation, love props to guide 100 immortal Taoist couples. Civilian players have been working hard for three years to build their foundation! The powerful player hangs up to cultivate immortality and is guaranteed to ascend! "The game is a good game, but the operation is bad and there are too many bugs!" "I have been cultivating immortality for three years, but my house is gone and my wife has run away. I just want to become an immortal. What's wrong with me!" "Everyone is cultivating immortality. If you don't have money, how can you become an immortal?" "Come, don't you want a small loan to help you cultivate immortality and build a perfect foundation?" Jiang Liu: "Krypton gold to cultivate immortality? Then wouldn't it be great to have my 0.1% Off welfare version client?"
When Jiang Liu woke up, he found that he had traveled to a parallel world, and a game called "Era of Immortal Cultivation" was about to arrive. The earth is transformed into immortality! Combining game characters with reality! The era of universal cultivation of immortality is coming! The game has a lot of free content, including but not limited to: open world exploration, main storyline, Tower of Babel, rankings, arena, and exciting activities. The game has a lot of krypton gold content, including but not limited to: recharging 648 to get big-winged luxury fashion, limited card pools to draw max sword spiritual roots and the ultimate immortal body, investing in spiritual stones to obtain perfect foundation building and nine-turn golden elixir, VIP5 unlocking one-click idle cultivation, love props to guide 100 immortal Taoist couples. Civilian players have been working hard for three years to build their foundation! The powerful player hangs up to cultivate immortality and is guaranteed to ascend! "The game is a good game, but the operation is bad and there are too many bugs!" "I have been cultivating immortality for three years, but my house is gone and my wife has run away. I just want to become an immortal. What's wrong with me!" "Everyone is cultivating immortality. If you don't have money, how can you become an immortal?" "Come, don't you want a small loan to help you cultivate immortality and build a perfect foundation?" Jiang Liu: "Krypton gold to cultivate immortality? Then wouldn't it be great to have my 0.1% Off welfare version client?"
A brainless and cool article, but unfortunately I had to give up too many brains, so I gave up.
4Please Kill the Demon
Xianxia请公子斩妖
Pei Can't
[No sense] [No morals] [No routine]... The majestic human world, nine heavens and ten earths. A world of flowers, happy cultivation. When Chu Liang opened his eyes, he found that he had become a disciple of the Shushan Sect and was carrying a strange pagoda... From then on, he embarked on an unimagined path. The morning smoke rises from the thirty-sixth peak, and the dragon returns from eight thousand miles away! ..."Please sir, kill the demon!"
[No sense] [No morals] [No routine]... The majestic human world, nine heavens and ten earths. A world of flowers, happy cultivation. When Chu Liang opened his eyes, he found that he had become a disciple of the Shushan Sect and was carrying a strange pagoda... From then on, he embarked on an unimagined path. The morning smoke rises from the thirty-sixth peak, and the dragon returns from eight thousand miles away! ..."Please sir, kill the demon!"
A very elegant work. The author repeatedly emphasizes in some single chapters that he does not like violent speeches, and he followed this very well when writing the book. Not to mention the writing style, world view and rhythm, the results on the monthly vote list can speak for themselves.
5我在圣裁审判所升级加点
Hard-working Buns
In this dangerous world, disasters arise, demons are everywhere, monsters are rampant, and low murmurs are heard in the air from time to time. Lloyd awakened his attribute panel, joined the Holy Inquisition Tribunal, and became an enforcer. Kill monsters every day to get rewards and upgrade points. [Ding~ Executed a high-risk monster, gained 500 madness points] [Ding~ Executed a cult saint, gained 3,000 madness points] [Ding~ Executed the Calamity Witch, gained 10,000 madness points] "Yes, hard work will pay off, add points!" ------- One day, a descendant of the evil god tore apart the plane and came to the world, bringing the deepest fear and pain. Then, He saw Lloyd walking out of the trial...
In this dangerous world, disasters arise, demons are everywhere, monsters are rampant, and low murmurs are heard in the air from time to time. Lloyd awakened his attribute panel, joined the Holy Inquisition Tribunal, and became an enforcer. Kill monsters every day to get rewards and upgrade points. [Ding~ Executed a high-risk monster, gained 500 madness points] [Ding~ Executed a cult saint, gained 3,000 madness points] [Ding~ Executed the Calamity Witch, gained 10,000 madness points] "Yes, hard work will pay off, add points!" ------- One day, a descendant of the evil god tore apart the plane and came to the world, bringing the deepest fear and pain. Then, He saw Lloyd walking out of the trial...
At first I felt that the writing was a bit rough in the first chapter, but after reading a few chapters, the pace was surprisingly good, and I read a lot in one go. Unfortunately, in the later stages, the pace gradually dragged on and the emotional lines were a bit messy. Perhaps reducing the length and simplifying the emotional lines can give readers a better impression.
6我的成就有点抽象
The Whole Point Of Cigarette Money
While sleeping, Yuan Ye woke up with a horrified expression after unlocking the achievement [Cockroach Devourer (Unit Level Achievement)]. I ordered a takeaway, and since it was delivered by the same guy who had given me negative reviews, I unlocked the achievement [Eat takeout with added ingredients (street-level achievement)]. Fall in love online and unlock the achievement [She is older than you (city-level achievement)]. Sure enough, after unlocking the achievement system, life is full of surprises, and you never know where the next surprise will be buried. Opening a blind box is really cool! Until one day... [Achievement detected ahead] Yuan Ye looked at the rotten talisman paper in front of him and tore it off in confusion. The next second. Unlock the achievement [Inspire the Era: You have to be cunning, tear the ancient seal, cause a strange invasion, and personally trigger the revival of spiritual energy (epic achievement)]
While sleeping, Yuan Ye woke up with a horrified expression after unlocking the achievement [Cockroach Devourer (Unit Level Achievement)]. I ordered a takeaway, and since it was delivered by the same guy who had given me negative reviews, I unlocked the achievement [Eat takeout with added ingredients (street-level achievement)]. Fall in love online and unlock the achievement [She is older than you (city-level achievement)]. Sure enough, after unlocking the achievement system, life is full of surprises, and you never know where the next surprise will be buried. Opening a blind box is really cool! Until one day... [Achievement detected ahead] Yuan Ye looked at the rotten talisman paper in front of him and tore it off in confusion. The next second. Unlock the achievement [Inspire the Era: You have to be cunning, tear the ancient seal, cause a strange invasion, and personally trigger the revival of spiritual energy (epic achievement)]
I think your book is a bit abstract. Just kidding, but the author is really not good enough. First, half of the article is filled with useless and repetitive narration. Detailed description helps to portray the characters and story, but the author's long paragraphs of text do not have any effective information, are neither detailed nor concise, and are just a waste of readers' money. The second is the author's impetuous and even violent worldview. In the world of the story, everyone is quarreling, and the protagonist kills every problem, which does not fit the protagonist's bad character: in the later period, because he was scolded, he even used his power to change the college entrance examination examination room, just to kill people... I was speechless after watching it, there were so many flaws, I am too lazy to vomit. The above are the main problems that affect the perception. The more obvious they become in the later stages, it feels like the author may not want to write anymore and is just perfunctory. I could watch it without thinking in the early stage, but after 70%, I really couldn't stand it anymore. I felt like I was wasting my money, and the plot only advances to the college entrance examination? I don't know if there is a eunuch at the end or if it ends hastily. In general, you can read the free chapters, but forget about paying for them. It's not as good as the free ones.
7从旁门左道开始肝成万法道君
Old Seal Kk
[30,000 high-order works have been ordered, welcome to collect and read] In the evil world of five turbidities, heavenly demons are rampant. Pei Daoye traveled through time, worshiped at Xuanmen, and got a glimpse of the true method of immortality with his humble body. Calculate your practice every day. As long as you work hard, you will gain something. ..."In this life, I have received a gift from heaven, refined the way to seek truth, and used my mortal roots to find a way to ascend." "Disciple Pei Daoye, ascend to the path of immortality today!" PS: [Mortals cultivate immortality, kill decisively]
[30,000 high-order works have been ordered, welcome to collect and read] In the evil world of five turbidities, heavenly demons are rampant. Pei Daoye traveled through time, worshiped at Xuanmen, and got a glimpse of the true method of immortality with his humble body. Calculate your practice every day. As long as you work hard, you will gain something. ..."In this life, I have received a gift from heaven, refined the way to seek truth, and used my mortal roots to find a way to ascend." "Disciple Pei Daoye, ascend to the path of immortality today!" PS: [Mortals cultivate immortality, kill decisively]
At first it looked okay, it was a passing novel, but after it was put on the shelves, it seemed like it had a different author: the protagonist changed his original smooth approach and started to kill without thinking; the previously agreed plot, about cultivating the acquired spirit body, helping the senior sister to find elixirs, etc., Was all gone; there were a lot of typos that were not corrected... It was too careless. It's a pity, if the previous level was guaranteed, it would be pretty good.
8Be a Reckless Man in the Martial Arts Word Game
Martial Arts在武侠文字游戏里当莽夫
Abyss Demon
"Excuse me, what is the most crucial secret to your success today?" Various lights shone on Chu Junhui's face, deeply imprinting his plain expression on the monument of history. "Reckless! How can one not be reckless when playing martial arts games!"... Two word games, projecting the extraordinary power of reality, turned Blue Star upside down. A game about cultivating immortals, the player mainly focuses on the word "gou", and the love is light and gentle. A martial arts game in which the player's main character is "mang", who dares to be a pioneer but not an immortal.
"Excuse me, what is the most crucial secret to your success today?" Various lights shone on Chu Junhui's face, deeply imprinting his plain expression on the monument of history. "Reckless! How can one not be reckless when playing martial arts games!"... Two word games, projecting the extraordinary power of reality, turned Blue Star upside down. A game about cultivating immortals, the player mainly focuses on the word "gou", and the love is light and gentle. A martial arts game in which the player's main character is "mang", who dares to be a pioneer but not an immortal.
A masterpiece! Although the title of the book sounds a bit crude, the author's writing style is unexpectedly gorgeous (it can be seen that the author is probably studying literature). The somewhat funny writing style depicts a world full of chivalry. If I hadn't been put off by the title of the book, it would definitely be on the monthly ticket list!
9瞎编功法,徒儿你真练成了?
Half A Breeze
Li Xuan traveled through time and had no system or plug-ins. He could only live in a small mountain village temporarily. However, one day, he was mistaken for a hidden master and he had to become his disciple. As an upright person, Li Xuan didn't want to lie to others and sternly refused, but the other party offered him too much, so he had to make up a set of training methods to fool him--as a result, the apprentice succeeded in practicing! Looking at his apprentice whose muscles and bones were thundering and whose energy and blood were as strong as gangbang, Li Xuan was dumbfounded: "I made it up, how did you succeed in practicing? What kind of monster are you?!" At this time, Golden Finger appeared: "Your apprentice is practicing The exercises you compiled will make you master the skills immediately, and your strength will be a hundred times higher than those in the same realm! "PS: I have already ordered 20,000 copies of the book "I've been at home for a hundred years and I'm invincible". If you find it interesting, you can go to the old book and read it ^_^
Li Xuan traveled through time and had no system or plug-ins. He could only live in a small mountain village temporarily. However, one day, he was mistaken for a hidden master and he had to become his disciple. As an upright person, Li Xuan didn't want to lie to others and sternly refused, but the other party offered him too much, so he had to make up a set of training methods to fool him--as a result, the apprentice succeeded in practicing! Looking at his apprentice whose muscles and bones were thundering and whose energy and blood were as strong as gangbang, Li Xuan was dumbfounded: "I made it up, how did you succeed in practicing? What kind of monster are you?!" At this time, Golden Finger appeared: "Your apprentice is practicing The exercises you compiled will make you master the skills immediately, and your strength will be a hundred times higher than those in the same realm! "PS: I have already ordered 20,000 copies of the book "I've been at home for a hundred years and I'm invincible". If you find it interesting, you can go to the old book and read it ^_^
The author relates the recruitment of apprentices to the protagonist's own strength. The protagonist's made-up skills can actually be reflected back to him after the apprentice masters them. A narrative with multiple characters and multiple branches is undoubtedly more difficult, but the ingenuity of connecting the apprentice's strength with the protagonist's strength makes the story coherent. Although the world view and plot are not very innovative, the whole book is somewhat interesting. Unfortunately, the repetition of the plot gradually increases, and the author does not construct the plot carefully. His understanding of this kind of fantasy novel is also superficial, making it difficult to retain readers. I hope that the author can continue to maintain the coordination of the multi-character plot even if he accepts more apprentices in the future. If he can hone his writing skills more, he will undoubtedly be able to write more exciting stories.
10I! Cleanup Crew!
Xuanhuan我!清理员!
Fish Prison
"Take it, here's your salary for this week." After raising her hand and handing over a small bag, the cross-legged woman behind the desk casually checked something on the small book, then waved her head away and said: "Remember to file your own taxes... Next!" "Wait!" After pouring out the coins from the small bag, Li Ang looked at the eight large and one small coins in his palm, a total of nine dirty coins. Li Ang couldn't help but widen his eyes in shock, wishing he could rush over to fight her to the death on the spot. "Damn it! I just defeated the evil god who wanted to invade the world this Tuesday! You bastard, you actually want to deduct the salary of the savior?"
"Take it, here's your salary for this week." After raising her hand and handing over a small bag, the cross-legged woman behind the desk casually checked something on the small book, then waved her head away and said: "Remember to file your own taxes... Next!" "Wait!" After pouring out the coins from the small bag, Li Ang looked at the eight large and one small coins in his palm, a total of nine dirty coins. Li Ang couldn't help but widen his eyes in shock, wishing he could rush over to fight her to the death on the spot. "Damn it! I just defeated the evil god who wanted to invade the world this Tuesday! You bastard, you actually want to deduct the salary of the savior?"
The subject matter is good, it suits my taste, the plot is compact, and the writing skills are solid. Why is the monthly ticket so low?
11诡异世界,我以肉身镇万物
Four Lettuce
Strange things are rampant, demons are in chaos, and people are miserable. Corrupt officials, careless about human life, and big families are the cause of disaster. Chen Mo came to this world with the Pearl of Mortal Transformation, which can continuously reshape his body and improve his body infinitely. In order to protect himself in this world, he had to embark on a path of suppressing the strange and smoothing the world with his body.
Strange things are rampant, demons are in chaos, and people are miserable. Corrupt officials, careless about human life, and big families are the cause of disaster. Chen Mo came to this world with the Pearl of Mortal Transformation, which can continuously reshape his body and improve his body infinitely. In order to protect himself in this world, he had to embark on a path of suppressing the strange and smoothing the world with his body.
I can barely read it, the author's writing is acceptable, but many of the plot's potential areas are quickly passed, lacking excitement. The main point of enjoyment comes from the rapid improvement of the protagonist's strength, but it is very repetitive and quickly becomes boring. If the plot is polished a little more, there is a lot of room for improvement.
12别人练级我修仙,苟到大乘再出山
Sanwu Xuanqi
[Simulator + Immortal Cultivation + Farming Style + Gou Dao Style] Once you travel through time, you wake up in the digitalized world of martial arts. This world has extraordinary powerful people called professionals. Professionals are favored by "God". They can improve their level and strength by downloading dungeons and killing monsters. Su Xing changed his profession to a hidden professional immortal cultivator, but due to unknown reasons, he was unable to gain experience and level up like other professionals. If you can't upgrade, you can only practice... But in this Dharma-ending era where spiritual energy is exhausted and monks are almost extinct, obtaining spiritual energy has become a luxury. After four years of college, Su Xing was still in a small qi training realm, and it was difficult to even graduate. Fortunately, by awakening the cheat "life simulator", you can simulate the future by paying energy, and you can bring the cultivation skills, props, etc. Obtained in the simulation back to the real world. However, in the simulated future, alien races invaded reality in large numbers, and the human race was wiped out. In such a desperate situation, Su Xing chose to survive and develop, planting spiritual plants, refining elixirs, improving cultivation, and improving the overall strength of the human race... He continued to strengthen himself through the simulator, becoming a boss hidden behind the scenes, silently fighting against the invasion of aliens... Ps: This is a simulator article, tending to maintain a steady path, farm development, and behind-the-scenes flow...
[Simulator + Immortal Cultivation + Farming Style + Gou Dao Style] Once you travel through time, you wake up in the digitalized world of martial arts. This world has extraordinary powerful people called professionals. Professionals are favored by "God". They can improve their level and strength by downloading dungeons and killing monsters. Su Xing changed his profession to a hidden professional immortal cultivator, but due to unknown reasons, he was unable to gain experience and level up like other professionals. If you can't upgrade, you can only practice... But in this Dharma-ending era where spiritual energy is exhausted and monks are almost extinct, obtaining spiritual energy has become a luxury. After four years of college, Su Xing was still in a small qi training realm, and it was difficult to even graduate. Fortunately, by awakening the cheat "life simulator", you can simulate the future by paying energy, and you can bring the cultivation skills, props, etc. Obtained in the simulation back to the real world. However, in the simulated future, alien races invaded reality in large numbers, and the human race was wiped out. In such a desperate situation, Su Xing chose to survive and develop, planting spiritual plants, refining elixirs, improving cultivation, and improving the overall strength of the human race... He continued to strengthen himself through the simulator, becoming a boss hidden behind the scenes, silently fighting against the invasion of aliens... Ps: This is a simulator article, tending to maintain a steady path, farm development, and behind-the-scenes flow...
A very good subject matter, but the author focuses entirely on the simulator and keeps leveling up. In fact, the setting is that you can only enter the simulator once a week. Describing daily life and college life can add a lot of excitement. It is true that you have picked up the sesame seeds and lost the watermelon. However, I have only seen it on the shelves so far. This book is now on the monthly ticket list. Maybe it will change in the future. I will take a look.
13The Final Gentleman
Suspense终末的绅士
Fatty In Yellow
Weary reader, I am honored that you have chosen this book in this heavy, dark library. Somewhat sadly, this book is sick. Your fingers should be able to feel the raised proliferative tissue on the surface of the book cover. The words written in the old days are like parasites taking root in the pages. I hope someone can observe their wriggling, feel, analyze, and touch the story of the disease. If you insist on borrowing this book, please be sure to check your physical condition regularly.
Weary reader, I am honored that you have chosen this book in this heavy, dark library. Somewhat sadly, this book is sick. Your fingers should be able to feel the raised proliferative tissue on the surface of the book cover. The words written in the old days are like parasites taking root in the pages. I hope someone can observe their wriggling, feel, analyze, and touch the story of the disease. If you insist on borrowing this book, please be sure to check your physical condition regularly.
This is a very interesting book when I first read it. It had the flavor of a weird story about zoo rules, which made me like it very much. The author draws inspiration from soul-based games, giving this book a bit of a soul-based and restraint-based flavor, and you can see a lot of little easter eggs in the magic circle. However, the author's refinement of the text still needs to be improved. From time to time, words that are inconsistent with the character's personality or are too colloquial will appear, which slightly disturbs the reader's perception and makes it difficult to build a deep, mysterious and delicate world of the Souls-based game. Rules and ghost stories are also a good subject, and people like the slightly thrilling flavor. However, this book does not delve deeply into this aspect. When the protagonist grows up a little, there are basically no such details. I hope the author can dig deeper into this aspect, and he will definitely achieve something.
14修仙三百年突然发现是武侠
Guyun Feixiu
Cui Heng traveled through time, and the system told him that this was a world of advanced immortals. Immortal kings were everywhere, ferocious beasts were everywhere, and the powerful men would blow up the galaxy and destroy the world if they disagreed, which made him tremble with fear. Fortunately, in order to protect him, the system provided a three-hundred-year novice protection period. As long as he was in the protected area, he would not be harmed in any way. Thus, Cui Heng began a three-hundred-year journey of cultivating immortality. In the past three hundred years, people have entered here accidentally. Some came from humble backgrounds and worked as monks or beggars, but they had great ambitions to bring peace to the world and save all people. Some have extraordinary backgrounds and were once peerless geniuses, but suddenly suffered misfortune, their qualifications were greatly reduced, and they were looked down upon. Some are princesses, but they just want to find their brother, not to become an immortal, but to wait for his return in the world of mortals. Some are weak and sick, but they dream of conquering the world, hoeing the strong and supporting the weak, and becoming a generation of chivalrous women. ... Cui Heng gave them hundreds of millions of help in the spirit of making good friends. Three hundred years later, the novice protection period of the system ended, and Cui Heng finally mastered the golden elixir and walked out with a trembling heart. Only to discover that this is actually just a martial arts world!
Cui Heng traveled through time, and the system told him that this was a world of advanced immortals. Immortal kings were everywhere, ferocious beasts were everywhere, and the powerful men would blow up the galaxy and destroy the world if they disagreed, which made him tremble with fear. Fortunately, in order to protect him, the system provided a three-hundred-year novice protection period. As long as he was in the protected area, he would not be harmed in any way. Thus, Cui Heng began a three-hundred-year journey of cultivating immortality. In the past three hundred years, people have entered here accidentally. Some came from humble backgrounds and worked as monks or beggars, but they had great ambitions to bring peace to the world and save all people. Some have extraordinary backgrounds and were once peerless geniuses, but suddenly suffered misfortune, their qualifications were greatly reduced, and they were looked down upon. Some are princesses, but they just want to find their brother, not to become an immortal, but to wait for his return in the world of mortals. Some are weak and sick, but they dream of conquering the world, hoeing the strong and supporting the weak, and becoming a generation of chivalrous women. ... Cui Heng gave them hundreds of millions of help in the spirit of making good friends. Three hundred years later, the novice protection period of the system ended, and Cui Heng finally mastered the golden elixir and walked out with a trembling heart. Only to discover that this is actually just a martial arts world!
Invincible flow, it looks very enjoyable in the early stage, but in the later stage, it is a bit serious to keep nesting dolls (the author himself will complain), the author's text output is smooth, and the meticulousness of the realm has a unique flavor
15The Ancient Gods Are Whispering
Science Fiction古神在低语
Begonia Lamp
This is a war between humans and ancient gods, dating back to ancient times, extending to the future, running through the long river of history, and composing an epic. The ancient gods invaded reality with a broken world. The hidden myths of the ages reveal the truth. The sublime travels between time and space, traveling back and forth between the two realms. Reality and the extraordinary, swords and swords, blood and fire. When the end comes, the ancient gods awaken from their long sleep. The curtain gradually rises - my father disappeared while investigating the resurrection of a certain god, and his life and death are still uncertain. I was panicked, but not completely panicked. Because the resurrected god is me.
This is a war between humans and ancient gods, dating back to ancient times, extending to the future, running through the long river of history, and composing an epic. The ancient gods invaded reality with a broken world. The hidden myths of the ages reveal the truth. The sublime travels between time and space, traveling back and forth between the two realms. Reality and the extraordinary, swords and swords, blood and fire. When the end comes, the ancient gods awaken from their long sleep. The curtain gradually rises - my father disappeared while investigating the resurrection of a certain god, and his life and death are still uncertain. I was panicked, but not completely panicked. Because the resurrected god is me.
It can be seen that the author has consciously used certain skills to effectively guide the readers' emotional direction, and is not willing to kill others. At the same time, the protagonist's revenge is basically not overnight. It looks very enjoyable and worthy of being on the list. However, there are too many internal conflicts among the world's forces, and the realm and strength system are slightly chaotic, which is due to some shortcomings.