Eternal Prodigy

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There are a lot of typos, and it's too long to make up the words without considering the plot. Many scenes are inconsistent with reality, and there are too many mistakes. I tried hard but didn't produce good works. Anticlimactic

Stand still and watch the show, isn't it written like this?

Hahahahaha typo

Direct votes are given! The plot is exciting and dense without being too watery, and the laughs and foreshadowing are both online! I beg all book friends to connect with three clicks: monthly recommendation ticket + collection + follow, leave a few more comments and chatter, urge the author to add more updates crazily, and have enough exciting plots!

The supporting characters are better than the protagonist

This was too hasty, it was a waste of time.

If you don't have the ability to leapfrog a level, and you are one or two small realms short of killing the enemy, you have to fight hard to kill the enemy.

It's a bit tacky. Although it's a cool novel, the protagonist doesn't know how to restrain himself or hide. His personality is that of a middle-aged boy, which is totally inconsistent with the lonely Emperor of Destiny in his previous life. The protagonist meets the elder of Tenglongjing. Without any background or back-up, he directly exposes the secret method of soul searching and control, and then gives the elder an intermediate-level earth-level skill. He is too young. A normal person would kill the protagonist for the avenue of immortality and seize the opportunity. If he can produce an intermediate-level earth-level skill that is fully in line with the elder's attributes, then who knows if he can use a heaven-level skill? Or maybe you guess that the protagonist needs to get a super treasure to sweep the list? If you look carefully, you will find that it is indeed a fun story, but both the good guys and the villains are too brainless, which makes it not fun. He has a lot of secrets, and a lot of them are exposed, but no one is trying to rob him. Mainly because he has no background, and all he meets are good people.

The author's writing style is average, and the relationship between the male and female protagonists is written too hastily. He fell in love with it out of nowhere. Some small details are not handled well, and his speech is also awkward.