Ancient Desolate Sacred Body: Enlightenment Begins in the Womb

I mean, as a practical editor, I also think your ending was too hasty. This ending is a bit disappointing.

There are a lot of holes left unfilled, and most of the plot is missing. For example, why Nuwa disappeared suddenly, and why she began to alienate from the human race. She obviously can rely on Enlightenment points to grind all the way up to Chaos. No wonder the update was unstable a while ago. I thought I was going to conceive a plot and continue writing, but I didn't expect that the eunuch was completely unfinished.

This is the end. There are a lot of pitfalls left unfilled, not to mention the pitfalls in Taichu Realm. Just the origin of the Ancient Holy Body in the Great Wilderness World, why Ye Wuji appeared in Wanggui Hometown, and why he can live for tens of thousands of years are not explained. The rest of the plot is completely arranged to advance the plot. What I wrote in the beginning was quite orderly, but it got faster and faster later on. In the last chapter, the Demon Lord Mahakala said he had a way to deal with Jiang Ping'an, but he died immediately in the next chapter. It was completed for the sake of completion. He must have been cut in half because of poor data.

I'll give you a monthly pass and hope to work hard to update it.

Even if you could live forever, it would still be very boring if all your loved ones died of old age. After all, I have cultivated so much that I forget my feelings, and everything is just a dream.

Could it be that the highest state is immortality? There is no other way. The human race is the leader of all races, I believe there will be a breakthrough!

Later, I suggest writing more about how the human race competes with the chaos gods and demons of other major races, and how to strengthen the human race. These two aspects are better. You will get tired of watching them all the time.

It's a bit unreasonable. Although Demon Island is good, the protagonist killed Mahakala and grabbed it. If he can't defeat Mahakala, he won't dare to come. Those who can defeat may not be worthy of it. The protagonist has already shown his strength. How come there are so many people who don't want their lives to attack?

In fact, to develop the human race, it is also possible to let people rent and become a large clan in Taichu Realm for development.

It's so slow to update after receiving money, bad review❌❌