Shut Up, Stupid Dragon! I'm Not Your Dad

I don't like the male lead's personality. You insisted on writing a carefree, rough-around-the-edges character with a touch of shrewdness, but it just feels off! There's so much to criticize about Xiaolong. I thought it was a transmigration to another world, but I'm disappointed! The "stay-at-home dad" theme is really good, wouldn't it be even better with the transmigration invincible protagonist element? The male lead's strength is also unclear; just being invincible is too awkward, isn't it? While it's true that focusing on details in a novel isn't ideal, you can't just ignore details and make random moves! The background information is also unclear. I didn't even know Lily was the queen in the first chapter; seriously, I only found out she was the queen through dialogue...

This was basically my first time reading a light novel with the "invincible protagonist" trope, and it was quite interesting. Starting from an extremely high level, the protagonist unexpectedly obtains a dragon egg, has a doting queen as his adoptive mother, is about to ascend the throne as the emperor of a great empire, and then gradually builds a harem, having three daughters and becoming a doting father. Problems are solved quickly, and he's decisive in his relationships, making for a very satisfying read. The plot is quite good, making you want to keep reading, but there are some frequent plot holes, especially in political and historical aspects… Okay, I'm sure you're tired of reading this in the review section. If you're not familiar with this genre…

The main issue is the male protagonist's dialogue in the first chapter. He came across as someone with a mental illness, not just someone with a bad temper and volatile emotions. The description of him as mature yet childish doesn't seem right either. A mature person wouldn't speak like that, and even the most unruly child wouldn't. Perhaps it's the use of phrases like "trash," "scum," and "stinky thing," which pulled me out of the story, and the excessive frequency of these phrases gave me the impression of a hysterical madman. The external factors, like him being framed by bad guys, aren't the main issue; it's the difference in the feeling conveyed by his language. I hope the author sees this, and also, please, don't hold it against me...

The editor ignored me. What do you guys think about putting the Dragon King on the cover?

Regarding this book, well, to be honest, the sentences are generally fluent, and the author has been writing for at least six months. There are a couple of typos, but they're within acceptable limits. The content and plot are quite engaging, but it does follow a certain formula. After all, everyone has their own interpretation of Hamlet, and what I'm stating here is just my personal opinion. While I personally prefer a more dramatic, build-up approach, I must say that I saw genuine effort from the author in the early parts of the book, which is evident throughout. Putting everything else aside, I just hope you can always maintain your original intentions, regardless of the circumstances...

First of all, this is a very good invincible protagonist/harem novel. The author has a high level of skill in controlling the characters' personalities, and the occasional fan service scenes are also very eye-catching, which is commendable 👍. However, I always had a question while reading the novel. Since the author titled the book "Shut Up, Stupid Dragon, I'm Not Your Dad," it must have focused on the Platinum Dragon, right? This focus was clear in the early parts, but in the Mei Yu arc, I felt the focus shifted somewhat. Later on, I felt the author made the Platinum Dragon a minor character (personal opinion). Although from the spoilers in the author's release notes, I know the author will use quite a bit more...

I've been reading this for a long time and I still think it's pretty good. I really like this book, and I especially like Mei Yu and Tong. However, I do have a slight wish that Lian Ye wouldn't be so clingy to Bai Yi; it feels like he has no personal space at all. Also, this mother-obsessed setting... Is really... Explosive! I laughed so hard... But it's a little hard to accept. Overall, the characters are quite well-developed. I hope the author can write more battle scenes, even if it's just a one-sided crushing victory. Also, I hope there won't be any trolls commenting on me. Please stop saying things like "read it or not, it's up to you." If possible, please stay away, you bunch of scum.

Personally, I think this book is pretty good. However, there are some shortcomings in its development, and the ending of the fourth chapter (I personally think a general who abides by imperial law would easily let two assassins go) is a bit off; the battle scenes are also glossed over. But these flaws don't detract from the novel's overall appeal. It has good foreshadowing, unexpected plot twists, and well-developed characters and emotions. The portrayal of the white man as a retired frontline soldier becoming a father is excellent; through their long-term interaction, he gradually transforms from a tyrannical soldier into a caring father to his daughter. Finally, I wish you continued success! ^0^ (After all, this...)

Before jumping in, I'd like to ask: is it a mindless farming game or one with emotional development?

When will the big boss start a new project?