The Daughter of a Former Magical Girl Mom Has Fallen into Corruption!

Poison, my daughter was seen naked by everyone.

The book has an awkward title, overly robotic writing style, classic long, pointless paragraphs, and a plot that's been exposed to everyone. The author should really rewrite this book.

Chapter Three, where the daughter is seen naked, is a bit too much, isn't it? 😰

Thank you, fellow Daoist, for testing the poison.

This long, segmented paragraph is really eye-straining.

There are too many grammatical errors; it's almost unreadable. I'll have to work on polishing it further. It's not a matter of the premise or plot being uninteresting.

The protagonist already has a husband and a daughter, yet she still engages in lesbian relationships?

The point of view is very inconsistent, switching between third person and first person all the time. Many sentences are grammatically incorrect, and the shifts in perspective are abrupt. Then, when it switches to first person, it's really confusing. However, the subject matter is good; paying attention to these issues will improve things.

It's strange, when I first opened the reading app it was divided into many paragraphs, then it flashed and became one long paragraph.

It's a mess, but it's still worth watching; it's like watching a magical girl manga.