Can I Still Be a Battlefield Witch with My Subordinates Watching Me?
被部下盯上的我还能做战场魔女吗
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- Western Fantasy
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And to be fair, considering the average level of this author who can't even write coherently, this is actually quite good. Putting aside the angst, since it's going to be a reboot anyway, the writing style wasn't particularly noticeable in the first volume, but after reading the second volume, didn't it improve? The writing in both the battle scenes and the emotional scenes felt exceptionally good. Author, please don't be discouraged! If you're nothing special, then what are the other 90% of authors? Please hang in there!
Advancing the storyline by feeding kills is ridiculous. Dude, this isn't a League of Legends league. Even if you're Faker or a six-time champion, if you feed too much in ranked, people will just think you're bad, not that you're a noob. So touching 😭! A tragic hero! Uncle Fei worked tirelessly to save his team in ranked matches, persevering despite being misunderstood and facing hardship! Can you please stop sending them? Let's move the story forward normally and add some other characters to enrich the plot. It won't kill you; the match won't be lost just because you had an extra potion at level two.
Is it exciting to see someone single-handedly turn the tide and save the team in League of Legends? Yes, it is, but if every game is a constant comeback and team-saving moment, I'll just find custom games annoying.
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This book seems to be primarily a military fantasy, right? There are almost no military-themed text sites, let alone those focusing on magical girl elements. There are only a few books with magical girl elements on other sites, and only one on Taobao with a magical element (I don't know the author's outline, so I'll assume the sequel involves the protagonist serving in a legion and changing the battlefield). This kind of story is extremely rare, so I'm writing a review to support it. The protagonist's personality isn't bad; he's not a pushover and doesn't easily abandon his teammates. He's intelligent, though sometimes he gets caught off guard due to information gaps. The close-up elements are also good, although there's no excessive explicit content...
Keep it up, author! I truly admire your decision to rewrite an entire volume. I've rarely seen an author this responsible to their readers. Anyone still criticizing in this situation is just venting their emotions. I hope you won't let those condescending attacks affect your mood. Please persevere and finish the rewrite! We're waiting for you!
Still top-secret single-player storyline, still Call of Duty-level main plot progression, still a solo incursion into German headquarters—at this pace, it seems we'll have to wait a long time for a third-person perspective. Where's the Empire? Where are the troops? Where's the Crown Prince? Gobain, can't you just have someone play a role? The grand assembly at the end of Book 1 was great, wasn't it? Why don't you take some time to write a third-person perspective? Still the same skeletal dog-tearing pacing; the Hundred Years' War-level backdrop is always just a bunch of small fry causing trouble.
I was worried I'd lose my temper and quit the book because the pacing of Volume 2 wasn't handled well, but it turns out they're rewriting it? You bastard!
The emotional and action elements are well-written, but the plot lacks originality. It repeatedly revolves around encountering powerful enemies and having to go back in time to overcome obstacles, and the storylines are all quite similar, which is getting a bit tiresome.
Volume 2 is truly like an old woman's foot-binding cloth, and this is with the feeling of a massive update cycle—it's ridiculous!
While I don't know how the author felt about the first draft, the second draft seems quite excellent. It gives the feeling of a grand world slowly unfolding, and the descriptions of each of the protagonist's subordinates are vivid and three-dimensional, each with their own personality, desires, and bottom lines and principles. However, judging from the princess's level of attention towards the protagonist, it seems she wasn't truly in love with him before, but rather had other considerations. Perhaps these will be revealed later in the story.