Give Up, Things Will Never End Well for Us

It's great. In a market where female protagonists dominate, this is the best book I've found in months.

This book has its unique features, but the male lead doesn't necessarily have to be portrayed as impotent. To get more subscriptions, a bit of excitement is best. Also, the self-reflection at the beginning is completely unnecessary; there are plenty of elementary-level writers on this site, and that doesn't affect our overall quality. Everyone wants to read something with a special kind of ambiguity, and that's something we need to handle well.

My assessment is that it's watchable, but not worth thinking about too deeply. The portrayal of the male lead is poorly considered, making it difficult for the viewer to empathize with the character.

When the book reached 170,000 words, it had almost 7,000 favorites. Now, at 210,000 words, the number has decreased instead of increased, possibly due to fewer updates since its initial release. This situation is indeed quite disheartening, but the book's current performance is really good. It seems the author might be a little pessimistic, thinking that a drop in popularity might lead to a quick end. If the author isn't in a rush to finish, writing 400,000 to 500,000 words and reaching 10,000 favorites shouldn't be a problem. Keep it up!

The plot is a bit dragging, and it feels like it's lacking the driving force to push the main storyline forward. The scenes presented also feel incomplete or overly detailed to the reader. The writing pace is stretched out, making it a slow burn, and the slow updates make it feel like a single plot point takes forever to unfold, which is quite frustrating. They should either speed up the plot or increase the update frequency. Honestly, as a reader who's followed it from beginning to end, it's quite exhausting to read.

Haha, this book is my first time writing it. The author recently wrote a 270,000-word novel, and considering that its performance wasn't great, it's unlikely this one will be abandoned (those who are reading on a long-term basis should be careful, lest it die). This novel is a very novel yandere story, which brought me a very unique experience as someone who likes yandere stories. If you can accept the male lead's personality, I would give it four stars. ① The book begins with an extremely brief passage that fully describes the protagonist's interpersonal conflicts and personality, quickly establishing the protagonist's character (of course, I should mention here that if it weren't for the psychological changes in the character's personality...).

Here's a suggestion: the author doesn't need to apologize for every single chapter. Instead, you should hurry up and move on to the university arc. The female leads haven't all appeared yet, and your current age setting creates an awkward situation. Moving to the university arc means the sisterhood is destined to be stolen away, but continuing with high school makes many plot points undeveloped. I suggest you change some of the settings.

The campus section of this app is filled with yuri or yandere stories; it's too homogenous. If you want to read something about campus life, you have to wait ❄. It's rare to find a good book from other authors, but they usually give up after 200,000 or 300,000 words.

Sigh, these days, even with a good plot and excellent writing, "Pineapple Bun" (a popular online novel) can't succeed. It needs a tiny bit of yuri (adult content) and erotic elements to be popular. It just goes to show that the author's writing style isn't suited to the current "Pineapple Bun" trend. It might have been popular before, but now it's definitely doomed. Only authors with a strong mindset can persevere. I can understand those who can't. If writing isn't going to be popular, it's better to just hastily write a happy ending.

The author's writing is really good, but the slow update speed makes many things that weren't originally flaws become flaws.