Your Tantrum Is Over? Time to Atone, Miss Demoness

I haven't seen anything this exciting in ages! My head is full of weird stuff right now 🤣 It's like watching the protagonist, facing the next disaster, wanting to stop the crisis, but then wanting to wag his tail like crazy when he sees the enemy boss, causing another big incident with a bunch of witches, then suddenly waking up and crying in the ruins he created, wanting to commit suicide but being called back by the boss and unable to resist becoming a dog 🐶, then having his memories sealed and being placed undercover by the hero's side, becoming a loyal/traitorous superposition state of constantly blaming himself, but unable to resist causing trouble at crucial moments 😊 Finally, he cruelly betrays the hero and climbs back to the boss...

If this theme were made into a visual novel, it would definitely have multiple endings, one good and one bad. 😤😤 Bad ending: The Demon King successfully resurrects, greatly increasing her power. She pats the head of the infatuated protagonist, then kidnaps the hero as well. A few months later, another Demon Princess appears. 😁 Good ending: The Demon King resurrects as a woman, then is tricked by the hero into becoming corrupted and forcibly brainwashed into a humble, righteous woman 😢. She is extremely distressed about her past actions 😭 and wants to atone for her sins, thus becoming completely obedient to the hero 🥺 and helping humans fight against their own kind. Then the Demon King turns around and teaches the protagonist to do good deeds. The protagonist believes that her master has been bewitched by those damned humans, and seeing the Demon King's...

Most of Pineapple Bun's TS works, as well as the plots of domestic remakes, suffer from a serious problem—once the villain is a beautiful girl, then due to the demands of some readers and players who think with their lower bodies, and the author's unconscious bias towards beautiful girls, no matter how evil the villain has committed, they will be severely punished and then gently let go, euphemistically called "the principle of not killing" or "atonement." A typical example is Talulah in Pineapple Bun's TS series. Back then, I sold my account, which I had spent 20,000 yuan on, because of the plot where the black snake possessed me and then redeemed herself, and I never touched remakes again. I just want to ask these authors, writers, and their protagonists, are you Batman? Without a father...

I hope there will be romantic storylines between the female protagonist and other demonesses. Personally, I think this type of story should showcase the protagonist's inner conflicts to fully utilize the unique characteristics of this genre. If the subsequent plot becomes the protagonist unilaterally atoning for her sins to the humans, becoming a people-pleasing personality, and turning the story into a binary opposition (i. E., Humans are absolutely good, and the abyss is absolutely bad), it's easy to run into writer's block. Furthermore, the concept of corruption would be wasted. I believe this story should showcase the duality of both humans and the abyss; the protagonist should also experience malice, darkness, and ugliness from the humans. Similarly, the protagonist could also experience...

Why do people always want the male lead to be a demon king? Is Chu Heng a murderer/arsonist, a pervert/lecher, an irresponsible and irresponsible character, a brainless overpowered protagonist, a scumbag/irritable guy, a riddle teller, a love-struck fool, a frivolous and irresponsible person, someone who doesn't take relationships seriously, an overly domineering CEO, a freeloader, someone who can't distinguish right from wrong, someone who uses others with double standards, a selfish person, someone who comfortably enjoys the benefits, a nihilistic and lazy person, someone who subservient to Guo Nan, a brainless and unfriendly person, someone who disrespects the female lead, someone who cheats on her, someone with feudal capitalism, or...?

This book is one of Pineapple Bun's stronger works in terms of setting and description, and it's comparable to those of established authors. Specifically, it fits my imagination of the apocalypse very well, and the character descriptions are quite detailed (unlike mine). However, I still have some doubts, and I'm not sure if they're correct. While the setting is excellent and the descriptions are outstanding, some problems are still apparent. As of August 17, 2023, in terms of content and updates, the book's structure is somewhat lacking. It currently has 240,000 words, and the Third Calamity is not yet over. Looking at the overall plot, the Third Calamity will inevitably...

I initially thought that since the "Marriage" section gradually lost its top recommendation status and many veteran authors retired or gave up, it would eventually disappear from the SF (Single-Authority Fiction) scene, remaining lukewarm. However, this book surprised me. In short, without spoilers, the author has considerable writing skill, and the plot sweeps away the saccharine sweetness of the SF "Marriage" section. New readers might find it a bit hard to accept, but I recommend it to experienced readers who are looking for something to read. It's not just a simple Western fantasy with a touch of urban fantasy; it's readable, without any mind-bending plot points. With 200,000 words and 18,000 favorites, I haven't seen anything like it in the "Marriage" section for years. You deserve to read it! 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻

Firstly, why do I say this? Because most people nowadays live in a positive and optimistic society, so it's normal to have a natural aversion to stories with a touch of the bizarre. The beginning and background of this book basically establish its tragic tone, which deters another group of readers. Therefore, it's normal that its traffic is lower compared to other lighthearted and cute stories. Now, let me talk about my personal evaluation of the story. I can say it suits my taste perfectly, because I've read almost all kinds of transformation stories and have been reading novels for over ten years. I imagine most people coming to SF (Science Fiction) are here for the transformation theme, since SF started with transformation stories. The writing is good; this style of writing...

The characters are poorly developed; interpersonal relationships show no progress; there are too many minor characters; the main characters are relegated to the sidelines; the plot lacks foreshadowing; the story progresses at a snail's pace; the male and female leads are often separated; there's a hint of a long-distance relationship and NTR (Netorare, a romantic relationship between two people); let alone how long the world-building is, can daily updates even be achieved? Unless the author can prioritize, this book is doomed! (`д´)ゝ (Please, author, put in some effort! Character development is the most important thing in a novel!)

Unlike some lighthearted, moe-style novels filled with saccharine slice-of-life moments, or certain evil/corruption novels featuring purely villainous characters, this one initially feels a bit like "Blood Princess and Knight," with the protagonist wavering between two opposing sides. The inclusion of a "script" element, while exciting at the beginning, leads to the protagonist's subsequent confusion and the sealing of much of their power. In short, there's a lot of setup, but the unfolding plot allows us to understand the protagonist's past from a different perspective, gradually fleshing out the character. Coupled with the "higher plane" setting, the world-building is quite extensive, offering ample room for further exploration. However, why is the author updating so slowly...?