Tales of the Human Race: The Rebellious Knight's Tale

It's commendable that a newcomer can write hundreds of thousands of words solo without losing their initial passion; keep up the good work! Now, regarding the writing itself, I won't nitpick, but I'll point out some major issues. The opening scene is a highlight, but the subsequent build-up falls short, rendering the suspense created at the beginning useless. The later setup could have been gradually explained as the plot unfolds, or even after the story has progressed; throwing out historical facts and setting up the setting at the beginning is a major mistake. As for the characters, there are too many in the first chapter. While each character is given distinct traits, they're all just stereotypes, lacking memorable qualities. However, character development mainly relies on dialogue...

[Light Novel Review] Commentator: Wei Yu Before beginning the formal review, I thought of a famous anecdote. At the turn of the century, renowned author Zhang Kangkang, invited as a judge, remarked after an online novel award competition: "In any award process, the real competition isn't about the works themselves, but about the judging criteria." I think writing book reviews is similar. Whenever an author reaches a certain level, as a commentator, examining them with different standards and perspectives reveals vastly different levels of quality. So, how exactly do we...

As some have commented, the opening lacks impact. Indeed, the biggest taboo for long, open-world novels is to bombard readers with a mountain of world-building at the beginning. It not only puts the reader to sleep, but most will simply skip it. Although the editors will read your work from beginning to end for this contest, the opening will still lower your initial impression score. Secondly, your formatting is incorrect… I hope you can correct it tonight. The requirement is not to finish in one volume, but to include some transitional content, meaning there should be the beginning of a second volume. Hurry up and correct it! (ง •̀_•́)ง I only skimmed a few chapters before writing this long review; I know it's not good, but please forgive me…

An epic resurrection! Long live the author!

(´-ωก`) I've recently started working again, and finally have time to do some things I enjoy. I've decided to finish the book about the Human race, but the war arc is quite extensive, so I'll try to organize the outline as soon as possible and continue updating. As for time, I'll try to finish it by this Friday, and after I recover, I'll guarantee at least one update per day. (* ￣ー￣) That's all.

Is he really a sadistic maniac? QwQ

Please follow my light novel "So That's How It Is".

Sobbing as we sweep the graves.

I love it

It's well-written, but unfortunately it didn't become popular as expected. I wonder if we'll ever see the ending.