My Abnormal Life After I Turned Into a Monster

To be honest, when I first saw the title, I thought, "What kind of dog name is this? What kind of novel is this? I'm not reading it!" And immediately gave up. But this person has a habit of following the crowd; whatever everyone else is reading, I'll check it out. Wow, it's quite popular, even in the top ten in terms of collections and monthly votes! So, I reluctantly added it to my collection, thinking I'd just give it a try if I was bored and had nothing else to read. After finishing the last chapter, "Legend of the War God," and seeing that most of these were either fanservice or harem novels, or just okay but lacking in logic—not something you could read with an intelligence, only good for killing time—I clicked on it, only to be instantly proven wrong...

I've sold my body, slap slap slap~ First, I'll slap myself in the face… I started writing my book during the summer vacation, published it at the end of July, and while browsing around, I found this website had a competition, so I casually entered. Then I felt like I submitted to the wrong website. After hanging around this bizarre website for three months, I discovered that most of the readers here have some very peculiar tastes. Certain novels easily gain a large following of gentlemen (I'm one of them), and I've also seen many noble writers who express disdain for this. I can only attribute this to jealousy, but then again, when you see your painstakingly written hundreds of thousands of words only getting a few thousand clicks, while others get tens of thousands of clicks for fifty or sixty thousand words…

When I first saw the title of this book, I thought it would be very interesting, and after reading it, I was right—it is indeed a very interesting book. After reading for a while, I felt it was very similar to Tokyo Ghoul. Both involve people being transformed into monsters, both involve falling in love with a woman, and both involve people gradually becoming stronger from being weak due to a certain opportunity. In Tokyo Ghoul, Kaneki's power surged after his friend was brutally murdered, while Shiro's power surged after Shiwan's murder, awakening him into the immortal Orochi. Although this is just speculation, in the first chapter, Shiro mentions fighting him, which likely refers to his third personality, Shiro's dark side! And Ye Ying is a very strong-willed person...

I'm looking for a second part!

I initially intended to give it 8 stars, but after the ending, I only want to give it 6 stars. The majority of the story was quite good, but the actions of some characters were truly incomprehensible to me. Xiao Ai's drastic personality change, the Void Beast suddenly appearing five years later as a government lackey, and the beast species [Eagle]—I really don't understand their later actions. Eagle stayed on floor 100 for so long taking care of Butterfly, why didn't he take her with him when they escaped? Orochi had already let her go twice back in the research institute; didn't he have any self-awareness? He even wanted to kill Han Xiao and her sister—was she inherently a despicable person? The Void Beast's later actions were baffling...

Hmm... Well... The early part of the story was quite interesting, with a touch of sweet everyday life that created a wonderful balance with the occasional battle scenes, making it very enjoyable to watch. However, the plot became increasingly loose as it progressed, leaving a few significant plot holes unresolved. These weren't major issues, though, and didn't significantly conflict with the main storyline. While they might be a little confusing at times, it was somewhat understandable once you immersed yourself in the story. But the ending felt rushed, and the battle with the final boss was less impressive than the earlier, more intense battles against smaller enemies. As for the ending... ...

Warning: Spoilers ahead. As the title suggests, I'll only discuss the hospital scenario. Initially, it's stated that there are approximately 3-4 groups per floor, totaling 9 or 12 people. Assuming 6 floors with 4 groups per floor, a total of 24 groups, if one group completely defeats another, the entire group gains +2 hours. This means a maximum of 2 groups can survive, assuming the other 11 groups are eliminated by the same group. This setup seemed prone to problems from the start. Also, the setting where each teammate's death time is 1/2 means that killing all 3 members of a group grants the first member 100% of their remaining time, the second 50%, and the third 25%. How do you divide that time among the three members...?

After reading this book, thinking about the statement in the prologue, "I witnessed the city being destroyed by a nuclear bomb, but I didn't witness the world a hundred years later," the timeline here likely refers to the Orochi devouring Zero and then purifying and resurrecting him a hundred years later. The female protagonist's lover had already died long ago.

I just finished reading it today. I read another book by the same author before starting this one, thinking it would just be something to kill time, but I was unexpectedly captivated. From the foreshadowing in the prologue to the later descriptions of human nature, everything is superb. I really have to admire the author; to write such a brilliant debut novel is truly remarkable. Unfortunately, after finishing the last chapter, I felt like something was missing. Thinking back to the foreshadowing in the prologue, could it be that all of Orochi's friends and family are gone, leaving him all alone? I won't say anything more. This is my first time writing a book review. I'm really looking forward to the second season and hope for a happy ending. Thank you!

Turning into a spider monster? A good idea. Please forgive me if I've said anything wrong. The first chapter explains the world-building and protagonist's character. As a reviewer, I want to say you wrote very well, very well, otherwise you wouldn't have so many favorites. Having hundreds of favorites is no easy feat. So, please also pay attention. Although I don't understand others, I think... A novel shouldn't have so many profanities, like "I ga zai" or "Holy crap," which only lowers the quality of your novel... I hope you can change that. My suggestion is to change your writing style; I mean, try to avoid too many "~..."