Heir of Darkness

Tomb sweeping

It was during work hours, but when I turned on my computer, I found that my article had finally been reviewed by the Light Novel Hall. I immediately rushed over to check, and the result was quite frustrating... The reviewer only read about 50,000 words (not even a fraction of the total) of the nearly 770,000-word article before giving a review, and the plot was even criticized. Admittedly, for the first volume, it's just so-so; my writing style is indeed average, and there are many typos. However, criticizing the plot without even reading a fraction of it is unacceptable. If the entire plot is explained in 50,000 words, what's the point of writing? If all the foreshadowing is explained in 50,000 words, what's the point of writing...?

Too fast

It's a scam.

Pigeons are everywhere! (Looking up at the sky)

Suddenly having some free time, I casually browsed through SF (a Chinese online literature platform), and I felt a bit conflicted… How to put it… I felt like my writing was just so-called "not the best, but not the worst either"… Well, everyone, I've been writing for over a year now. What are your thoughts, suggestions, complaints, or even just casual conversation? Let's all share! Writing alone can be quite lonely… While my writing brings you some relaxation and entertainment, could you also say something in the book review section? Not just about the writing itself, anything is fine. I think those of you immersed in the unrestrained fantasy world of novels must also be somewhat escaping reality…

... This is a novel I recently came across. Even though it was exam season, I still spent several days and nights finishing it. I've now reached the memoir section, and I actually think writing a memoir is quite good. However, I don't want to forget the main story. I'm thinking of putting the main story in the first part after you finish the first part of the memoir, because I've read similar novels. But if you put the memoir at the end, I don't want to think about the protagonist's earlier development; that would definitely be many chapters, maybe even the same length as the beginning of the memoir, which would be a bit overwhelming. To be honest, I really like it; this novel is similar to the first novel I ever read. I hope you can try my suggestion...

After reading this chapter, I was deeply moved. The author portrayed Roger very successfully—a bold, persistent, and loyal strategist. He possessed the same strategic acumen as Zuster, yet also a fervor unlike others, combining calmness and madness. Frankly, such a person is indispensable to becoming a king. After all, a king is also human; he needs guidance. Of course, the path to kingship is arduous and cruel, but there will always be someone to create, pave the way, and ultimately bear all the consequences for him. Roger was such a person. Even if the road ahead was dark, he would change and create for his king, even if the result was disgrace and death...

4897 I hope the author can help me pin my discussion for a few days, and also tell me how correct my reasoning is? So that people who don't understand can also see it, thank you~! ——Discussion—— Episode Fourteen: The Great Hermit in the City, Chapter Seven: The Undead Overlord—— After completing countless side quests, I've finally entered! I've compiled a few points of doubt: 1. Souls return to the void, darkness devours everything, light shrouds the three realms~! Original question: "By the way, is the Light of Truth also by your side?" Ikanig looked at Anna, then turned to Eluzer and asked— Answer: What role does the Light of Truth play? Darkness—Eluzer, Thrall Light—Li...

The Valley of the Worthies later became a vast desert, similar to the Babylonian, Atlantean, and ancient Egyptian civilizations, which, after their destruction, became the Sahara Desert. Lost technology is equivalent to lost civilization, and modern science still cannot explain some ancient architecture.