
I'm a High School Student, and I Have a Child of My Own
身为高中生的我,有了自己的孩子
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- Completed
- Length
- 474k Words
- Genre
- Campus
- Updated
- 6y ago
- English
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All-time: Clicks, Favorites, Likes.
267Chapters
2.4MClicks
12.8kFavorites
9.4Score
3.6kLikes
Honours
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Do you want a "light" novel or a "fiction"?
What kind of light novels are appealing? Is it a witty and humorous plot that brings a smile to the reader's face? Or is it a literary masterpiece with a sweeping and elegant style? The "light" in "light novel" can be broadly interpreted as a collection of elements that appeal to young people, while "novel," as a branch of literature, naturally requires evaluation in terms of writing skills. Which is more important, "light" or "novel"? The light novel *As a High School Student, I Have My Own Child* clearly leans towards one of these two aspects, making its strengths and weaknesses quite apparent. First, the plot of *As a High School Student, I Have My Own Child* is undeniably successful...
I'd give it ten points for the creative idea conveyed in the title.
The subject matter is quite rare, perhaps because such a situation in China isn't just unusual, but illegal. Therefore, the story is set in a relatively unfamiliar and less independent Japan. Regarding the plot development, I envision a masterpiece where the female protagonist's specific and endearing personality traits are clearly defined throughout. Then, each supporting female character will participate in the main story to varying degrees; each supporting female character will have a separate, independent storyline related to the male protagonist and certain events in the main plot. The author won't summarize this; readers will have to imagine it themselves. Every school event includes a cultural festival, depicting...
Here's a suggestion for the author at this point.
The previous two book reviews mentioned, to varying degrees, one shortcoming of the author: the lack of emotional expression in the characters. I'd like to elaborate on this point. Insufficient emotional expression in characters is a common problem in light comedies; after all, not everyone is Watari. However, this also makes light comedies lack memorable content: the scenes that readers remember most vividly from a book are often those that evoke strong resonance from the characters' stark conflicts. This work is no exception; the lack of distinct character emotions means that while the plot may seem novel and interesting, it's difficult for readers to retain a lasting impression. Firstly, this is clearly evident in Chapter Two. The female lead...
The book has too many loopholes
Having read the first few chapters, here are my personal thoughts: The book feels a bit contrived, riddled with plot holes from the very beginning. First, setting aside the fact that the female lead's parents are dead, her relatives completely ignore her newborn child. Are these relatives even human? Most importantly, shouldn't there be some inheritance? With all that, isn't it a bit redundant for the female lead to seek refuge with the male lead? And then there's the male lead taking the female lead home, and even using that lie—are they that close? Why is the male lead so prone to making decisions on his own? Even with her parents' recent death, the female lead, who's "top of her class," shouldn't be that dense, right? And the female lead has already moved in with her child—doesn't the male lead's grandmother find it strange? She has…
A brief review of this book (actually, the title is just fluff).
When I first saw the title of this book, I was immediately intrigued. While the trope of a pregnant female protagonist is currently popular, there's always a process involved. This is the first time I've seen a light novel so blatantly and directly include this element in its title. Afterward, I began a serious reading process. Although the content isn't long, it seems exceptionally interesting. In terms of subject matter, the content so far is undoubtedly very appealing. However, I'd like to address a few points: First, as others may have noticed, some parts of this book...
Light Palace New Book Review
Commentator: This article by the landlord is still quite short, but it already shows great promise. First, the title itself is very catchy. Compared to other types of articles, there's a lot to write about; the title alone is enough to pique interest. Reading the text, the opening is straightforward and the content is light and easy to understand. While the premise of having a "child" is a bit too coincidental, it's still plausible. Looking at the latest chapters, there are many areas worth exploring, and the author has clearly laid the groundwork for future developments. Although the author's writing style could be improved overall, ...
Full of bugs
Well, let's put aside the characters' low intelligence for a moment. Let's talk about how a baby could be taken from the hospital just two days after its parents' death! How irresponsible must that hospital be to do something like that?! What do they take a hospital for? And the law won't let this go so easily! What do they take the law for? Newborn babies are so fragile! What do they take a baby for? And that resilient baby—it survived all that torture! Amazing! Finally, I have a question: has the author ever had a child?
These are unrelated comments on the ending, but they might be relevant to every author and reader.
First, I must admit: I've read some of this novel, but definitely not much. Now that it's finished, I thought I'd write a closing review, even though it might not be directly related to the book's content. It's surprising to see it's only a little over 400,000 words long, yet it's achieved such great results… I can only say that, well, if you don't have a long-term goal and plan from the beginning, and your mind can't focus, constantly wandering, it definitely becomes increasingly difficult to write later on. Because inspiration is like your period—when you want to be a virgin, it just won't appear. But when you open your mind and want to really enjoy yourself…
What's the hardest thing to come up with in a title?
I've been reading this novel for a few days now, and the more I read, the more engrossed and liking it becomes. So I thought I'd write a review and, while I'm at it, give the author a monthly pass. One thing I absolutely must say at the beginning is: whoever labeled this book as "lolicon" (a term for a book featuring young girls with a romantic or childish aesthetic), come out here, and I'll beat you half to death! Because I'm a staunch supporter of older women, I hesitated to click on it for a while after seeing the "lolicon" label, but I finally couldn't resist clicking in anyway. Thank goodness, otherwise I would have missed a masterpiece! So, let's get to the main text... The biggest advantage of parenting novels is that they resonate with people's hearts; they can use the most sincere and touching emotions to move the reader's soul...
Smooth, fun, and novel
I'm writing this book review as requested, but honestly, my reading comprehension isn't great, so my points might not be very insightful. I finished this early book in half an hour, and I feel that Muma's writing style is the kind you can read in one go. The writing flows very smoothly, without any fancy words, thus avoiding obscure vocabulary, and highlighting the plot through simplified descriptions. The theme is quite novel and aligns with the current mainstream on SF (a Chinese online literature platform), as you can tell from the title—it's the kind of novel that's 'keeping up with the times'. The novel is set in Japan and is told from a first-person perspective, depicting the life of an ordinary 'I' after gaining the love of my daughter and a baby...