Is It Still Too Late to Return This Girlfriend?
这个女友现在退货还来得及吗
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Laolao
Book Review Continued - On the Question of Whether the Male and Female Protagonists Are in Love
How long has it been since my last book review? I've forgotten. Anyway, Paradise is one of the two authors I've followed the longest on SF. (Although I've only read this one of Paradise's books, that doesn't stop me from evaluating his style, right?) One aspect of Paradise's style is its bloated and convoluted storylines, lacking refinement. This is definitely related to the fact that he doesn't write outlines. However, if you treat each volume as an independent story (similar to an infinite flow novel), it's alright. (While reading volume four, I almost forgot what the male and female leads were supposed to be doing...) Next, let's talk about another aspect of Paradise's style: the character development is decent. Although it's not...
The equipment you obtained was snatched away right before your eyes, leaving you powerless. Is this what the invincible style is all about? I'm in love! That's the feeling of being a victim!
Good heavens, look what I found! A wild gay porn uncle
Isn't it a harem?
It's kind of funny, someone complained that I can't do math... Turns out they didn't even read the initial setup carefully, oh well... Whatever.
I've read up to chapter 2-33 and I'm a bit confused. First of all, this isn't a harem novel, so if this older sister is a villain, isn't it a bit too early for her to appear as another villain? While it might reveal some of the male lead's past, it seems unnecessary. Does it actually help advance the plot? The current storyline is about the male and female leads working together to take down Mayor Tuo, and the plot is progressing smoothly. But suddenly this older sister appears, causing a bunch of dramatic plot twists...
It's a bit like Darwin's game.
Not enough!
Give the author a suggestion to pad out the word count or even the number of chapters. Volume Three is open to deduction. Therefore, I suggest that the author dedicate one or two chapters to a debriefing, using an omniscient perspective rather than the villain's. Let's also dig out all the foreshadowing elements planted in previous chapters (marking the chapter and paragraph numbers).