Since We're in Another World, Why Not Go on a Picnic?

Due to a cerebral hemorrhage last month, the author is paralyzed on the left side and currently cannot move his left hand and left leg. Therefore, there is no way to write a new book for the time being. I may need a year to rehabilitate. Once I regain sensation in my left hand, I will definitely start again. Although I almost died before, I believe that illness cannot defeat me! Wait for me to come back!

The official sequel to this book has already started accumulating chapters. If there are new writing contests in October, I'll start writing it. If there aren't any contests or the themes don't match, then I'll have to wait until the winter writing contest at the end of the year. It's about Rei's story after she becomes an adult. I hope everyone will support it.

Longtime readers should know that some of Lei's experiences are based on my own, so I had to drag her into this sequel. I suffered a brain hemorrhage and became paralyzed on one side, and as my daughter, she naturally has to share my hardships, haha. But don't worry, my recovery speed and results are already very fast among fellow patients, so Lei won't have it too bad. It's just to give everyone a chance to understand the community of hemiplegic patients.

This book is a bit slow-paced; the plot only becomes clear after 300,000 words (after it's published). First-time readers shouldn't jump to conclusions before finishing it... How to describe how this book made me feel? It's incredibly cheeky, extremely cheeky, cheeky to the point of being annoying, cheeky to the point of being annoying, cheeky to the point of being annoying, and the protagonist is cheeky, while the author is even cheekier—I've almost forgotten what "cheeky" means! 2333 Okay, the author has quite a few tricks up his sleeve (and they're deep), and many readers have suffered because of them (angrily taking it all in 2333). The protagonist, Lei, is extremely cheeky, a standard source of hatred that can disgust her opponents. If you're the protagonist's opponent, you might be so angry you'd explode on the spot. However, the protagonist's life isn't easy—the first generation protagonist (prequel...)

This book has many flaws that would be considered undesirable compared to other online novels, so let me share my thoughts. Personally, I feel the plot started to go wrong when the protagonist first visited the Wei family. Many novels avoid the "sending a girl" trope, but the author took it a step further. Dark themes aren't inherently unacceptable, and this might be partly due to the author's own self-indulgence. The initial small-scale flirting was fine, and the stubbornness was acceptable, but later on, the girl who came to find the protagonist on her brother's orders and ended up with his sister really struck me as unacceptable. The sister was gone, and the new girl ended up with her...

The final chapters are finally coming up, and why do I feel so reluctant to say goodbye?

But I don't have time to read it a few more times _(:з"∠)_ Ahem, let's get to the point. First of all, I personally think the novel is very good and suits my taste. The unexpected gender reassignment, the relatively unforced writing, the absence of annoyingly saintly protagonists, and the fact that while sadness is the main theme, it still manages to give a happy ending, a feeling of bittersweet relief. However, since this is a book review, I should definitely offer some suggestions... But with my limited abilities, I don't have much to offer. One: The protagonist is a bit too mature, and the author seems to have noticed this, but only in a few...

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First, let me address a serious issue: this book is neither an isekai (another world) story nor has much to do with picnics. Typical isekai novels inevitably involve being transported to a fantasy world with magic, and at least the protagonist survives. In this book, the protagonist dies (along with his girlfriend) right from the start; the so-called isekai is simply a story set in a different timeline with a different protagonist. As for picnics, they really have little connection to the main plot and are basically used to advance the story or create atmosphere. I seriously suggest the author rethink the title instead of using "Moonlight Theater Club" as a way to gloss over the issue. Regarding the prologue's discouraging effect, I can only say...

I'm a part-time game reviewer, so my comments tend to point out flaws. Please apologize if I offend anyone. First, regarding the writing style, it's a bit immature in the early stages. Some sentences could be revised, and the language could be improved by putting the reader in the characters' shoes; it might sound more natural. However, as you read on, you can clearly see the author's growth, and I look forward to the future. But writing style isn't the main point; the focus of this review is on the settings in online game fiction, since reviewing games is my specialty. This might be a bit harsh and verbose, so please ignore some unnecessary points. Long text ahead! First of all, regardless of anything else, the equipment drop rate in the story is just too...