How Can a Level Zero Demon Lord Ruin the Player Experience?
零级魔王如何破坏玩家体验
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It's finished. Quite disappointing. Honestly, ending at its most beautiful moment is only slightly better than abandoning the story altogether. The beginning was alright, very much on point, but later it really became no different from a typical online game novel; the demon king's identity was practically nonexistent.
Suggestions for the author (I strongly urge the author to take a look).
The game setting framework of this book is quite large, and the author's writing style is also quite good. I've been on Pineapple Bun for two years and have read over a dozen books, and this one is quite interesting. Here are some suggestions: 1. Firstly, regarding the second volume, if you're going to write about the experiences and feelings of other players, don't go overboard—it's already six or seven chapters long. To avoid boring the reader, you could intersperse the protagonist's actions in between. Also, at the end of the volume, the author said they planned to finish at 1.4 million words, so the beginning of the third volume skipped 20 or 30 levels. I was stunned. Personally, I think sticking to the initial pace would have been fine. Also, the final battle at the end of the second volume was skipped...
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No, why would an author write a book under a different pseudonym? I only found out when I was flipping through the old "Old Tree Disciplinary Committee Member" series.
The pace is indeed too fast. The demon race hasn't been unified yet, and they've only conquered a few cities. We haven't even seen the other demon kingdoms, and the story of the ancient civilization isn't finished. The character levels are only around 120 or 130. While the overall story is very well written, I really don't recommend rushing to the ending. It's very easy to create a bad ending. I don't mind if it's like the story of the princess next door, and I don't care about the update speed, but please, please don't skip too much just to rush through the story.
It's unlikely. Can Hu Yan really write two completed novels over 2 million words each?
A suggestion
1. The overall theme is unclear, the farming element is too weak, and the early skeleton-fighting scenes are too simplistic. Despite the supposedly high degree of freedom in warfare, the battles are far too easy. It's not as interesting as I expected, and the plot takes up too little space. The fighting scenes are at least dozens of times longer than in farming novels. 2. The battle scenes are too bloated and drag on, severely impacting the pacing. And why is everyone just nagging and teasing the protagonist during fights? I don't get the author's appeal; it feels very boring. 3. The plot is illogical. The people in the monastery are supposed to be weak trainees, yet they're all incredibly powerful. They can use any late-game skill at will, which feels quite illogical...
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I feel like I was tricked by the beginning. It looked pretty good at the start, so I subscribed to the whole thing, but it got increasingly padded later on. Since the protagonist is a demon king, building the demon king's castle should be the main plot, right? I'm on chapter four now, and the protagonist is basically no different from an ordinary player most of the time. I had to skip large sections throughout the book. Also, the yuri content is so low; they only kissed once at the beginning, and the main couple is basically just a minor supporting character later on.
Please, sir!
Stop padding! If you keep going like this, I'm quitting your book. The Demon King's character is so good, don't waste it! I'm about to throw up. Unless it's just foreshadowing, then never mind... You agree, right? Just filling up the word count... Filling up the word count... Filling up the word count... Filling up the word count... Filling up the word count...