The Silver Dragon Mage's Journey to Another World

Reborn with a 10,000x Reward Return System

I'm very wealthy, so don't worry about anything. Spoilers would ruin the fun, so everyone should just look forward to it.

When was the last update? [Dsfem:16:665]

The author's gone mad... Right? No, the author's not mad... Oh right, right right, the author's mad. A madman can say something so logical, right... Right? Oh wait! Has the author really gone mad? Is he... Insane?

It's been a while since I've read this book. While writing today, I remembered an author whose logical narrative was very rigorous, whose character inner thoughts were exceptionally well-developed, and who had mentioned not wanting to write tropes like "brain drain." Now, as a new author, I want to learn from them. I think I started reading around 70,000 or 80,000 words, I don't remember exactly. I followed it chapter by chapter, and I found the character inner thoughts particularly natural and moving. The logical flow of their actions and the transitions between events are all things I can learn from. One day I didn't update, and I saw in the comments that the author actually had to repeatedly refine and rewrite each chapter, hence the production delays...

2022.08.05 An indescribable call echoed in the author's ears, and he embarked on a journey to a forbidden land. 2025.11.14 As the celestial bodies reached their proper positions, the author returned from another dimension. Yet, his eyes had already revealed the terrifying truth of the universe. 2025.11.19 Having glimpsed the ultimate truth, the author's remaining sanity was ultimately swallowed by the eternal darkness. The string of reason snapped, plunging him into the abyss of madness forever.

Hmm, I think I've covered the basics of the review... I can only ramble a bit more: First, let's talk about your work. This work is really good. Compared to other dragon-themed works, like Han Tang's *Dragon Princess*, it's concise and clear, at least in my opinion, with far less romantic subplot than *Dragon Princess* (you have no heart~~). But could you please increase the word count? Also, regarding the plot and direction, as I'm concerned about—whether she'll be single, in a yuri relationship, or get married—I suggest you don't rush things. Chloe is still young; being single for a while is fine. This is something you absolutely cannot be careless about. Of course, some readers might be unhappy with this decision, but...

This chapter seems a bit abbreviated; there's no need to shorten the interactions between the main characters. I hope the author won't be influenced by others. Out of so many complaints, how many actually called it filler? The majority didn't actually read it carefully. Reader opinions shouldn't be blindly followed, so changing your writing style and structure would be counterproductive. Your current success shows your previous style was good; changing it will only affect your plot and reader enjoyment. A good novel should have a good balance of tension and relaxation. Too much focus on the main plot makes it too tense and tiring for readers. Adding some slice-of-life scenes creates variations in pace, allowing for better control of the rhythm...

Although I've only spent a few hundred hours reading this book, it's still one of the best I've read so far. I'm only halfway through, so here's a brief review: it's a slice-of-life novel with relatively few action sequences. The overall feeling it gives is one of tranquility, lightness, and enjoyment. There's no compelling mission, no necessitated revenge, no pointless boasting or face-slapping scenes, no relentlessly pursuing villains, and no suddenly appearing, suspicious characters. The biggest highlight is the high level of intelligence; the characters embody the mindset of a young person, and the author has carefully crafted each plot point...

Looking at the latest chapter, the reward page, and comparing the author's replies in the comments section with their statements from 2012, I feel the author's mental state is a bit off. Hasn't he gone to the hospital to get checked out?