After Becoming a Vampire, I Was Conquered by a Girl

Through the author's digressions, I can understand what the author wants to express. However, the author's biggest problem isn't a poor reading experience, but rather a lack of writing skill. Writing skill is a very elusive thing, but one thing I find truly remarkable is the author's story conception—it's so brilliant it wouldn't be a disaster. Yet, precisely because of this lack of writing skill, some plot points fall flat. For example, I think the chapters about the previous stories could easily be considered short stories, because no one would deduce the background of a short story, nor would they delve into the emotions that the author wasn't trying to express. But upon closer reading of these chapters, a contradiction emerges: the female clan leader holds a high position of power...

Well, reading this book gave me a strong sense of familiarity. Later I realized it was because it was so similar to Shu Ke's book, Sylvie. Except for the background and a few other details, they were practically identical.

His family was slaughtered, his innocent sister was raped by several humans, and he even generously advised others to let go of their hatred. Put yourself in his shoes; if your family suffered such a fate, what would you do if someone advised you to let go of your hatred? If it were me, I'd be lucky not to kill them. And that female character named Sevie, her love is selfish; she only wants her lover to live. But is that possible given human nature? I see so many novel protagonists emphasizing that they were human in their previous life, displaying a very saintly attitude. In my understanding, if you transmigrate to a strange world and a strange civilization, whether human or vampire, they are all alien races...

I just subscribed to all the books and found out it's an abandoned book... This is awful! I'm going to form a group to kidnap the author and lock him up in a dark room until he finishes writing! (Kidnapping the author 1/50)

I'm a free-to-reader, I never spend money on novels, but I did for this one. I read to the end, then noticed something was wrong with the comments. I checked the update date in detail—it was in July. This left me feeling utterly hopeless.

This work is so sweet, really sweet! I want to see more sweet moments, but I haven't subscribed yet, and I'm a bit hesitant about the angst. Judging from the free chapters, there's already one angst and some foreshadowing for future angst, and these are probably the two most controversial parts of the work right now. First, regarding Violet, the choice between the head of the imperial military family and the lover of the vampire queen forms the premise for the angst. But that doesn't really seem like a problem; angst happens when there's conflict. The premise of considering family and lover as equally important doesn't seem problematic either. And the tragic ending doesn't seem like a big problem either...

First of all, I clicked in because of the lighthearted and fun yuri vibe in the synopsis, and I even subscribed to a few chapters. But as I read on, it got increasingly disgusting. The protagonist has two memories, his clan was wiped out, yet he still happily engages in yuri relationships. Even though the dominant memory isn't the original one, you can't write it like this! What's with this? It's become the heroine's exclusive story. The part with Violet was also nauseating. Knowing it might kill the person he likes, he still goes and uses magic—isn't he blatantly trying to kill the protagonist? Even someone with low intelligence wouldn't do that. He claims to enjoy it, but then he uses someone else's hand to stab the protagonist in the back. It feels like there aren't many normal people left...

I am deeply sorry, but I hope we can meet again someday.

I really like this book; it feels like the style I prefer. I wish there were more updates!

The author's reflections are essentially supplements to the main text, explaining their ideas, character settings, and rationale. These are acceptable, but the plot development is too abrupt. Each reflection reveals the character's state of mind; as the author, you obviously know your own thoughts, but we readers don't! Without sufficient build-up and character development, an event suddenly occurs, and the characters feel like emotionless puppets, merely performing the plot as you conceive it. This feels somewhat inexplicable, like the plot is being pushed forward for its own sake. With sufficient build-up and...