The Little Beauty Ancestor Summoned Me to Continue the Family Line

I can't take it anymore, and I'm not trying to criticize you. The inaccurate character development, the nonsensical characterization, the forced romantic relationships, and the excessively absurd plot are all glaring flaws. It's supposed to be a yakuza novel, yet it constantly focuses on romantic entanglements between men and women, while the protagonist is treated like an idiot, lacking any emotional depth beyond being a bit of a scoundrel. Although there are many girls involved, it feels like a client and prostitute relationship—there's no real connection, it's truly baffling. Furthermore, the characters are completely undevelopable. Take Luo Mingfeng, for example; he doesn't feel like a chivalrous hero, nor a prince, and even the father figure is stuck in...

When I first met you, I was full of ambition; when I heard of you again, it was already time for pigeons to fly.

Where did your lofty ambitions go?! Bring them out!

Happy Children's Day!

Okay, I'll take another day off! I'll finish it tomorrow! If this isn't finished this month, I'll pee backwards.

Although I've been following this book for a while, I've been forgetting to write a long review. I suddenly remembered today, and I hope the author won't mind. Let me start by talking about some things that impressed me most. First, there's the innocent romance between Si Hang and Luo Yin. Their daily interactions really satisfied me, and the author's writing style greatly enhanced this pure affection. I think it would be wonderful if things continued like this. Next is Luo Mingfeng. The protagonist is really lucky to have such a good-for-nothing father. Although Luo Mingfeng is royalty, he's very family-oriented, handsome, rich, powerful, highly skilled in martial arts, and has excellent character—he's practically a perfect father... I digress...

I've been following this for quite a while, but haven't written a long review yet, so I decided to make up for it. I also read the review from the guy upstairs, and it's true what he said. Author, with the yuri tag and several depictions of romantic relationships between the male and female leads, many yuri fans will naturally feel quite disappointed. Many yuri fans in the "Pineapple Bun" section only care about the girls, not the men. See, you've upset that guy, haven't you? But to be fair, in my opinion, the interactions between the protagonist and the male characters haven't crossed any lines; in fact, you could say they're just right. I'd give it an 8 out of 10. But what's with the ruthless killing? How come she dies in the very first volume...?

First of all, the author's writing style is commendable; it's a very comfortable read without any awkward pauses. I read seven chapters (time constraints, it's too late and I want to sleep). However, I suspect the author might possess some kind of advanced technology or be an alien—the ability to install surveillance cameras in other people's minds is terrifying! There are also quite a few plot points, \(ﾋ•ω•ﾏ)/ What a goofball. This is probably going to be a hit 🔥, I'm reserving my spot. PS (Books I've written long reviews for generally become popular if the author keeps writing; I'm pre-ordering 20,000 views). The author replied to me *٩(๑´∀`๑)ง* (Don't ignore me if I catch you installing surveillance cameras in other people's minds!)

I'd like to share my thoughts after reading today's chapter. First, the characters are all quite likable, but isn't Tong'er's transformation a bit too exaggerated? The plot itself is fairly smooth overall, but the transitions at the end and during map changes feel a bit disjointed. It feels somewhat inexplicable, lacking a sense of natural progression, and some developments are slightly repetitive. The protagonist gets kidnapped, the protagonist gets kidnapped, the protagonist gets kidnapped... *Cough cough*. I'm also a bit curious about how the story will develop. The power levels in this book aren't very clear; the protagonist's fighting strength lacks a standard, and the sect leader doesn't seem particularly powerful, except...

You said you'd update this month, but the month's almost over and you still haven't updated. You said you only had a little bit left and planned to release it all at once. I figured you'd written almost everything by now. If you were going to update, you should at least say so if you're not going to update anymore. So many readers have followed you for so long, giving you monthly tickets and tips, and you haven't said a word for so long? Isn't that a bit much?