The Magic Xianxia Adventures of a Cute Loli
萌萝的魔法仙侠传
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 722k Words
- Genre
- Western Fantasy
- Updated
- 7y ago
- English
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249Chapters
525.1kClicks
3.9kFavorites
9.6Score
1.1kLikes
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I'm really still here!
This is my first book review; here are my thoughts.
The premise is quite good; the protagonist is an elf from a fantasy world who transmigrates to a Xianxia (Chinese fantasy) world. While the author hasn't fully explored this difference in the first 12 chapters, the premise has great potential, and hopefully the author will emphasize this more later. All the named characters are well-developed, although the protagonist, Ying Tong, has a slightly weaker presence compared to the supporting characters (probably a minor oversight). Regarding the plot, since it's still early, I won't comment too much. So far, the pacing is excellent, and the author has provided reasonable explanations for almost all the plot holes I noticed (treating them as foreshadowing...).
The author must have read "The Leader of a Faction is Disrespectful to the Elderly," right? This book has many connections to that one. I really liked "The Leader of a Faction," and seeing a similar book now brings back memories. Keep up the good work, author! Also, if you like "The Leader of a Faction," you can try searching for it.
I'm a little curious about what those abandoned chapters are.
The last few chapters have had an unusually high number of grammatical errors, mainly because these chapters were written during the last writing contest, where I was supposed to write 6000 words in an hour. I'll gradually revise and replace them later...
Tomb sweeping
Tomb sweeping
Meow meow meow? Where's the author?!
Is this book a yuri (lesbian) story?
Recommended Option 1: Change the description of the Sun Moon Cult's clothing; Recommended Option 2: Change the cult's name to the Cross Cult. In today's online environment, anything related to "green" (a derogatory term for pro-DPP/pro-DPP elements) might be reported by some people.