My Wife Spoils Me Rotten

1. Dear author, I have a secret to tell you, please see 52. 2. The answer is in 33. 3. Don't be angry, please see 94. 4. Calm down, don't be angry, please see 65. First, please see 26. 5. Don't be angry, please see 107. I just want to tell you to update the story sooner, please see 88. I want to tell you that the answer is in 19. Please read patiently, please see 410. This is the last time I'll do this, please see 7. This book is actually quite well written, with novel content. It's much better than the unchanging chuunibyou settings of cultivation novels. I like harem novels.

I haven't run away. I've been feeling down these past few days, but I'm slowly adjusting. I'll try to update more regularly afterward.

Well, overall it's a pretty good book, but some of the settings or plot design aren't quite perfect, though that's not important for a novel. However, to show I'm a gentleman, I still have to criticize harem novels. How can you write a book so badly? You are immoral! Good writing, more "benefits" in the future!

Although this ending is a bit... Unpleasant, I still thank the author for being willing to give readers a final explanation. Everyone has moments of inadequacy; reflection and correction are all that's needed. I wish the author good luck in the future.

So it was your cover Σ(ﾟдﾟ;) Still pretending to be sassy (* /∇\*)

For a while at the beginning, the author wrote very richly, both in terms of characters and plot. However, since getting married, the author has written a lot of ancient poems and political philosophies, which feels somewhat superficial and the writing style has declined. There's also some repetition in the content, and I don't know why. I hope the author can revise this. Thank you.

Some of the settings I find problematic. Based on what we've seen so far, the protagonist's original era is the next civilization after ours. Then, the four swords of *Zhu Xian* are from our era, or even earlier. Regardless of whether they exist in mythology, given such a long period of time, wouldn't the four swords of *Zhu Xian* have had masters? Why do they only recognize a master when they're in the protagonist's hands? This feels contrived, designed to highlight the protagonist's protagonist aura. Personally, I don't like it.

This is what happens when someone is castrated.

A disheartening start. A bomb at the start.

Is the author not updating anymore? I was thinking of waiting until it's fully released before reading.