My Heiress Begs Me to Date Her

You've been with me for so long, through thick and thin, through all the ups and downs. Thank you.

The protagonist of the light novel, Ye Huaixian, is not only highly intelligent but also emotionally intelligent. As a male lead, he is very charming, and the character development is excellent. The troubles brought about by the story and some necessary settings are cleverly interspersed throughout. However, the only drawback is that the pacing is too tight, which is a problem in the later stages. The beginning is handled very well, but the later stages are less satisfactory. ｸﾞｯ!(๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧ Now let's talk about the plot. It's a campus romance story where the daughters travel to the past to bring their parents back together, creating a chaotic love triangle. This theme has been explored before, but during this period of light novel popularity, this book...

The story picks up where Chapter 335 left off, "Who is more beautiful, me or Changge?" Ye Huaixian rushes home and finds Lin Muke and Gu Qianqian, only to discover they are Jiang Yueyan and Wu Changge in disguise. Gu Qianqian (Wu Changge): Husband, hello, is there anything we can help you with? (Suppressing a laugh) Ye Huaixian: (Not noticing) What I'm about to say, don't be afraid! Gu Qianqian (Wu Changge): We are your wives, we won't be afraid, please speak. Ye Huaixian: I just got caught up in a love triangle between Jiang Yueyan and Wu Changge! Gu Qianqian (Wu Changge): (Leaning back tactically) What kind of love triangle? Ye Huaixian: It's not just any kind of love triangle, it's a love triangle where two people are fighting over one person. Lin Muke...

I initially joined the group because I was intrigued by the existence of multiple daughters simultaneously and wanted to delve deeper into the plot. From then on, I was captivated by Xianxian's meticulous logic and amazing imagination. The time I spent in the group was truly enjoyable; we brainstormed plot ideas together, regularly checked for updates, and sometimes even discussed the logic of other films and TV shows. Many things happened in the group, both sweet and bitter. At least I posted daily silly pictures (later interrupted due to insufficient resources), and wrote parodies of famous scenes from JoJo's Bizarre Adventure and The Little Mermaid (which have been simultaneously published in the long review section of this book, you can directly...).

I initially wanted to give it 9.5 points because there were indeed some minor flaws, but ultimately, I gave it a full score out of personal bias. The significant stylistic shift in the latest two chapters reveals at least two things: 1. The author has genuinely paid close attention to the comments from readers and has made changes accordingly. 2. The author may have encountered a writing block, and their emotions may be unstable. Here, I want to emphasize my point: we paid money to see a light and enjoyable read; otherwise, we wouldn't be here with you all. I don't want to say, "If you don't want to read it, then don't!"...

A silly plot I wrote on a whim: Lin Muke: After all this time, I've realized that weak girls have no fighting power. Gu Qianqian, Jiang Yueyan, and Ye Huaixian (hereinafter referred to as the three): What are you trying to say? Lin Muke. Lin Muke: Oh, you weak girl! Everyone!! (Holds up a sign that says "Mandela Effect") Jiang Yueyan: What?! Gu Qianqian: Huaixian: Quickly use your invincible harem power to think of a way! Ye Huaixian: You bastard... Lin Muke: Boxer briefs, boxer briefs, wryyy~ Lin Muke: Zawarudo!! Submit to my wife power!! The three: Oh no...

Ahhh! I absolutely adore Qianqian! I don't want the senior sister, I want the main character and Qianqian to have some sweet moments together! Seriously, Qianqian truly touched my heart. But author, you've made things so cruel again π_π. Several novels I supported before have failed, so I really hope the author can let Qianqian and the male lead be together. Their feelings and bond are what I find most real and moving! All the others I've read before were defeated by love at first sight, but this time, I truly hope, at least, that Qianqian doesn't lose again. No more heartbreak! Even a harem ending would be fine, I want Qianqian as my author!

The first point about reading Xianxia novels: The story shifts to Chapter 206. With the arrival of Wen Shenshi (a pervert), Ye Huaixian's daily life ceases to exist. Whether it's the landmine game, Ye Boxin's surprise inspection, or their first conversation, Ye Huaixian is forced to make choices under the invisible influence (persecution) of everyone. As Chapter 274 states, the infinite timelines give Ye Huaixian too many choices, but now he has chosen a decision he never dared to consider before: "Believe me, I will protect all of you, no longer in a separate way." (Excerpt from...)

Honestly, like Huai Xian said, ending it now is enough. Although there's still a little regret, what I really wanted to see at the end was a scene of someone with their daughter. But the ending, I think, at least justified the long wait; at least it had an ending that, in my opinion, wasn't a bad one. Honestly, I really loved the content of this book, including all the little details. Huai Xian's writing is truly excellent, and I hope to see more of her works in the future. By the way, please don't stop writing before the ending; you know how it is when the plot is clearly developing...

It's somewhat similar to another book I've read, "I'll Be There for My Daughter for a Second," but this one is entirely original, while the other borrowed many characters from anime. So, in terms of character design, this one is a bit more challenging. However, the plot isn't as tightly paced as that one. I wonder if the author has read that novel. I hope the author can look into the pacing, character interweaving, and other aspects of it. This book is also quite good, but it lacks the exhilarating feeling of reading the other one. Perhaps it's a matter of pacing. This is just my personal opinion, so please don't be offended if you disagree. (´-ω-`)