I Turned Into Eastern Invincible? I'm Not That Cute!

First, having read this far, one can sense the author's dedication to creating a good work; the author seems intent on using their writing to create a "jianghu" (martial arts world). However, this dedication hasn't been very effective, instead leading to a misjudgment of the focus, resulting in much of the writing being redundant and ultimately uninteresting. Second, while using "grudges" as a main plot element isn't inherently bad, mishandling it can become tiresome (especially in the case of Senior Xiao Ru). Third, the protagonist's character development is unsuccessful. In many situations (especially in recent chapters), the protagonist is always suddenly weak and unyielding, which makes one wonder if the author is truly...

I looked through a bunch of comments, and people were asking whether to get married or be a lesbian. A bunch of idiots were saying they thought getting married was better, and that lesbians seemed weird. Was that what they were asking you?

Hello everyone, I'm Xiao Huang. Regardless of who you are, I must bow respectfully. First, as always, let me clarify beforehand that this is merely my personal opinion and thoughts. If the author is unhappy with my comment, I will delete it. Secondly, I've read about ten chapters; if there's anything incorrect, please feel free to point it out. Now, let's get to the main topic! To be honest, I wasn't interested when I first saw the title, but I clicked on it because it seemed quite popular. And let me tell you, I was truly surprised when I started reading! If you were to ask me what I think of this novel...

1. The author is a skilled storyteller. The plot is interesting, and the characters are well-developed. 2. The downsides are probably the verbose language and the mostly uninteresting and unimportant flashbacks. I could skip Zhou Mingwang's flashbacks without any issues, which shows they were indeed somewhat redundant. However, the battle descriptions are exhilarating. 3. I really liked one aspect of the author's approach: the transition from everyday life to the fox spirit incident. The lighthearted beginning contrasts sharply with the later life-or-death battles, which is strangely effective and doesn't feel jarring. It's reminiscent of world-building works. The shift from lighthearted to serious is handled well. 4. As for potential problems, the story seems to be heading towards the middle...

It seems my promised long review is going to be reduced to a short one. Let me first explain my rating criteria. I'll deduct one point for obvious flaws; in my opinion, there are two, so I'm giving it eight points. The first flaw is the author's lack of world-building. If the story were simply going for a modern style, the historical background could have been briefly mentioned, as readers would naturally draw their own experiences into the story. However, this book's world-building is modern martial arts, which means the author needs to dedicate more time to it; otherwise, readers will find it difficult to immerse themselves. And the author...

The first step into this fandom: Is this yuri or marriage?

Regarding the world-building, I guess it's a world where science and martial arts are mixed, since there are cars, airplanes, and even horseback riding (although I don't know if you need a driver's license to ride a horse). While this isn't currently the case, and the author doesn't seem to have that in mind, I still hope no character will pull out a pistol and shoot an enemy in an inappropriate situation (I wouldn't mind if it were just for laughable moments). The mention of a court leads me to a preliminary guess: the court and the government operate separately, with science in the government and martial arts in the court, and communication is possible according to regulations (cars and airplanes can be used as required). Otherwise, each governs its own affairs. Then, later on, it might be mentioned (I'll assume this for now, but if it's entirely...).

I was shocked to hear the terrible news and have no heart to write... I guess this is a good opportunity to ask for a leave of absence. After all, the "Number One Killer" is about to be released, and I still can't sort out my two dissertations... I'm so sorry!

This book was great, but I was a student back then and couldn't afford to continue reading it. Now that I have the money, I've stopped writing it. Sigh!

Please come back soon, it's been over a year, let's make this dream come true.