Luohua Continent
落荷大陆
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 116k Words
- Genre
- Fantasy
- Subgenre
- Otherworld Continent
- Updated
- 5y ago
- English
- Request a translation
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44Chapters
78kClicks
1.1kFavorites
1.7kRecommendations
339Comments
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Commentary on "The Land of Fallen Lotus"
Yibo's writing is alright, though it seems a bit immature. But for a student, it's already quite good. From your novel, I can see you're very good at describing large-scale scenes, and your ending was also very good. However, the updates are too slow. Keep updating! I'll continue to follow along. Here's a small gift for you!
Although I don't usually read these kinds of books, seeing the number of clicks and the author's writing style, I feel it has a very promising future! I've already added it to my wish list and send it to you with my best wishes ❤
Hello!
Great! Your imagination is rich. I feel your writing scope is very broad. Hope you can write some side stories in the future! Awesome! Keep it up!
Good morning! Reading "Lotus Continent" this morning – excellent writing! Keep it up, looking forward to more great content!
Keep up the good work, author! Your writing is excellent, especially the details!
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At first I thought it was a post-apocalyptic story, then I thought it was a time-travel story, and then I felt it was Douluo Continent fanfiction, hahaha, what a wild imagination! 😂
It's here!
First of all, I was surprised by the author's huge number of clicks when I entered this book, amazing! 👍 After reading the content, I found the writing style to be quite good, and the story progressed smoothly. Here are some areas I feel need improvement. A common problem for new authors is paragraphing! I suggest simplifying it, ideally to have three to four sentences per paragraph! Also, separate the characters' dialogue, otherwise it's easy to get confused! Received, please visit my page!
Hey author, I'm here! I read your work and found your writing to be excellent, with very vivid descriptions. I'm looking forward to the rest of the story. Keep it up!
I'm late, sir/madam!!!
Hello, newbie reporting for duty! First of all, author, your writing is truly excellent! I'm here to learn. Your writing flows smoothly, and the descriptions are vivid. I didn't read many fantasy novels before, as I was once completely addicted to romance novels. However, I really like the title of your book, "Fallen Lotus Continent." I also want to explore your world through your books! I will definitely read your books. Keep up the good work, author! Besides, your article has a great layout, which I don't know how to do! Fantasy novels are really hard to write, so you're truly amazing! I'll try to learn from your writing style. Keep it up, author! Dear author, could you please give me these suggestions for my work? I will try my best to correct them! Thank you so much!!!
Stop updating regularly? Hurry up and update!